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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 21

Cole has really no shame asking Gus for money! I hope he get arrested in the park, only it would get Gus into trouble, yet maybe not as huge as what I feel might happening.

I love how you got Justin and Brian talking about the night Justin arrived at the loft unannounced. That was a beautiful and heart breaking scene. Brian was just so handsome in this, barefoot in the street.



Author's Response: Thanks so much.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 16

Brew certainly is inquisitive.  Justin explained the statues perfectly.  I can't believe Daphne.  She's completely different.

I'm glad Brian took care of Justin.  They are so in love with each other even after all these years.



Author's Response: And always will be in love.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 15

I still have a bad feeling about Cole.  I hope Gus knows what he is doing.  

Bree is so cute.  She certainly loves her rainbow.



Author's Response: The rainbow is her signature design. LOL

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 11:43 am Title: Chapter 14

I knew Cole was bad news.  I hate that Gus is going to get hurt.

 



Author's Response: You were right.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 11:37 am Title: Chapter 20

This lunch with the ladies changed as soon as Brian arrived to entertain; even if he hates that, he did for Justin and Daphne.

Maybe Mel understood what happened at her party and won't do that again.



Author's Response: Brian has a profound effect when he appears.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 11:20 am Title: Chapter 19

I was thinking Brian should show up unannounced at Daphne's lunch, just for the fun of it, as Mrs Taylor!

Happy for Gus, that things got that way; but I still have a bad feeling.



Author's Response: Brian as "Mrs. Taylor" - LOL

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 11:05 am Title: Chapter 18

Mel has no shame at all! She didn't invite the family, but she is going to Deb's party?

I liked how Michael put her in her place.

Daphne seemed to have change a lot; I'm sure Justin will hate that and will be bored to death if he does to the lunch alone.



Author's Response: Mel is something else.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 10:45 am Title: Chapter 17

O yeah, Brian with a bottle of water over his head... Self fan...

Cole is really rude and too much wanting to get in Brian's pants after Gus' ones. At least, Gus noted that he didn't want to shake Briana's hand nor did he try to give her a kiss instead.



Author's Response: I always fan myself at that thought too. LOL

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 10:36 am Title: Chapter 13

I understand Gus wanting time to himself.  I wouldn't want to be with my grandmother and my baby sister all day either. 

Brian should be happy that Gus feels comfortable enough to talk to them about sex.  I understand him wanting another opinion other than Brian's.  He needs to stop forcing the issue about top and bottom.  He's both now.  ;)



Author's Response: LOL It's a confusing time for Gus.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 10:27 am Title: Chapter 12

Oh, Gus.  Lust will make  you do silly things.  I have a really bad feeling about Cole.

I'm sure Brian and Justin would like to keep Bree 5 forever.  They are already having a hard time letting Gus grow up.

I hope all goes well with Drew's set up.  I'm sure Sean and Anthony will have a nice time.



Author's Response: Lust is not always the beginning of a relationship. Yes, they don't want Bree to grow up.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 10:23 am Title: Chapter 16

Ha ha ha, Briana ate all her M&Ms... Just like her daddy: she can't help it!

The scene at the museum was funny (Briana and her questions about statues' penises) and sad (Daphne's return in Justin's life); how could she hang out people like that?



Author's Response: Not everyone in this story turns out to be good.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 10:17 am Title: Chapter 11

I had a feeling that Curtis couldn't swim.  I'm glad Raph calmed him down and said it was okay.  It will just take time for him to get comfortable.

Melanie is on my list.  She's being a bitch.  I can't believe she was going to make JR leave the house for the party. 

Justin isn't fat.  I think he's perfect.



Author's Response: Curtis has his trials, but now he has a family to help him.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 9:56 am Title: Chapter 15

Happy that Gus replied to Cole's snark; unfortunately, he plans to go to Justin's studio with him, unless he listens to Ray and wait for the 4th of July to present Cole to his dads.

Happy also that Emmett didn't Mel change the menu of her party.

I love Briana and Joan's escapes: it helps Briana to see the NY on her time and Joan to have a good time with a child, what she missed with Brian and Claire.



Author's Response: Joan is very lucky to get a second chance with her granddaughter.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 9:09 am Title: Chapter 14

Yeah, I definitely don't like Cole! He's up to something that might hurt Gus, not to mention Brian as a side effect.

Brian with Bree is such a beautiful thing; he also is a great father to Gus: being realistic to what is going to happen; maybe is he also realizing how Craig might have felt when he discovered that Justin was infatuated with an older guy.



Author's Response: We're so pleased that you find Brian with Bree "such a beautiful thing".

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 8:37 am Title: Chapter 13

I have a bad feeling about Cole; I hope he isn't preparing something with his cousin.

I hope Mel's party will blow up in her face: she's too mean.



Author's Response: Lots of Mel hate this chapter.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 8:09 am Title: Chapter 10

See Brian and Justin are now poster children for how you should act.  Who would have thought?  I'm glad everyone had a good time.  

Gus may look like Brian but his heart and take on life is all Justin.  He wants to be in love.  It reminds me of 17 year old Justin.



Author's Response: I like that comparison of Gus and Justin.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 7:57 am Title: Chapter 9

I think Gus almost gave Brian a heart attack.  It's just kissing.  No big deal.  Let them be kids.  He should be happy Gus came to him for advice and not some stranger.

I'm glad Drew is looking out for Emmett.  He doesn't owe the girls anything.  I hope he doesn't overdo it.

 



Author's Response: Brian is happy his son came to him, even if it is hard on him.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 7:55 am Title: Chapter 12

I'm worried about Gus who seems ready to make a mistake.



Author's Response: Teenagers will make mistakes.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 7:38 am Title: Chapter 11

Bree is so funny when she talks about Justin's tummy! Also when she asks Gus if she needs her beauty sleep.

Mel should be careful when she talks to Jenny.



Author's Response: Bree is our comic relief from time to time

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 7:13 am Title: Chapter 10

I hope Justin didn't get another stalker!



Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 6:18 am Title: Chapter 9

That talk between father and son! Brian is so funny in this mode. I love how Gus feels he can talk to Brian about this so intimate topic.

Mel is getting worse each chapter. Drew is right, Emmett should have said no.



Author's Response: We like Brian in father mode too.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 4:19 am Title: Chapter 8

Ha ha ha Gus and Ray trying to kiss and always interrupted!

Bree speaking her mind at the library: she really have character!

Mel is planning a party and doesn't invite the family: nice touch! I hope it will be boring and she will be ashamed.



Author's Response: Life isn't easy for Gus and Ray at the moment. Bree is quite a character.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 2:28 am Title: Chapter 8

Poor Siomn having a little freak out.  They were just kissing, leave them alone.  I think they are adorable.

Miss Bree was going to have a battle at the library.  She can call her Gamma's anything she wants.



Author's Response: Freak outs are part of our story. LOL

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 2:17 am Title: Chapter 7

Well Gus and Ray are cute together.  They could definitely experiment together.

I know everyone is missing the family.  I don't think they realize how much they hold everyone else together.



Author's Response: Gus and Ray are good with each other.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 2:03 am Title: Chapter 6

Guys is such a good big brother.  

I'm glad Emmett was able to call Brian down.  Who knew he'd love staying home with his family instead of out conquering the world.



Author's Response: You're right, who knew? LOL

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