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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 4:28 pm Title: Chapter 18

I hope Daphne has some good story to tell to Justin to fill in the blanks on what the hell is going on with her 



Author's Response: She may have, or maybe not.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 4:20 pm Title: Chapter 17

we all know Bree is a fantastic judge of character.

hmmm, how good of a hostess is Mel with her party?



Author's Response: Yes, Bree is good at many things.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 4:10 pm Title: Chapter 16

Holy crap, what the hell happened to Daphne????



Author's Response: LOL Good question.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 4:00 pm Title: Chapter 15

Joan is such a nice addition to the family... she is really good with Bree and even though she missed a lot with her own kids growing up, she is handline Bree and even Gus well.  Gus is going to be tough when it comes to Cole though... I don't see how he won't get his heart broken knowing that Cole is only out to use him :( 

and I don't want Gus getting upset with Brian when he finds out (if he finds out) that Cole WANTS Brian



Author's Response: Glad you like this new Joan.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 3:26 pm Title: Chapter 14

damn, I guess my instincts were right about Cole... sleeze :(

I hope Gus doesn't get hurt by him... we know he has a protective family, but I hope they stop what Cole is trying in time



Author's Response: It's a bit dicey at this point.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 13

yeah, the more we hear Gus and Cole, the less I like Cole and Gus is so nervous (and naive) he is letting himself get bullied into doing things he isn't comfortable with, and it hasn't even come to sex yet!

 



Author's Response: Just part of youthful confusion.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 3:02 pm Title: Chapter 12

I'm worried about Gus... Cole seems to be coming on very strong... trying to make Gus do things he isn't planning on doing, and might not be ready for.

 



Author's Response: You are so right.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 11

Omg please don't let Justin get a complex for a "belly" LOL



Author's Response: LOL That would be good.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 10

Justin getting hit on seems so real... he still looks so young!



Author's Response: But of course.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 5:38 pm Title: Chapter 9

Gus really is growing up... wants to expand ALL of his knowledge! Lol



Author's Response: You bet.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 4:35 pm Title: Chapter 8

Mel is turning into the bitch again... specifically wanting NO family there... well especially Brian and Justin... she is just so freaking jealous!



Author's Response: I think you're right.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 4:26 pm Title: Chapter 7

hmmmm, summer of some experimenting for Gus and Ray???? lol



Author's Response: Gus is growing up.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 4:16 pm Title: Chapter 6

I thought Gus knew about Brian growing up, but I think Joan handled it pretty well... and to be "in the know" why they were killing time is funny!



Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 4:07 pm Title: Chapter 5

I'm like Bree when she first met Brandy... I'm scared to death of horses (their teeth are just so big!)

of course they all fell in love with riding :) 



Author's Response: Horses are so big compared to children, and those teeth, as you mentioned.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 3:58 pm Title: Chapter 4

so happy for Curtis, Raph and Hector :)



Author's Response: It will be a new world for Curtis.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 3:44 pm Title: Chapter 3

Bree is adorbs.... she is all ready to kick some boys asses LOL



Author's Response: She's a little tiger, and fearless.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 3:34 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love Beau just a bit more... he is really the best... Ms Bree thought she could lie and get away with it?? :( 



Author's Response: Children have to learn.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2017 3:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

poor Curtis... he just is so scared... and I get his "too good to be true or to last" mentality right now.

Loved Brian saying to Justin "don't know whether to fuck me or draw me"... perfect!



Author's Response: Thanks so much.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 3:42 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh, no.  I was hoping he would just not be interested anymore.

Brian is not going to be happy.

Can't wait for the next installment.



Author's Response: Thanks, the next part should be coming soon.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 3:35 pm Title: Chapter 21

Yes, let's go home.  I'm ready to leave the city.



Author's Response: The family is too.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 3:25 pm Title: Chapter 20

I wish I could have been at the lunch.  That was priceless when Brian walked in and kisses Justin.



Author's Response: It would be fun to be there.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 19

I'm glad that's as far as they went.  I did not like Coke.  He needs to go soon.  

Can't wait for the lunch...and "Mrs. Taylor."



Author's Response: Mrs. Taylor will be interesting. LOL

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 3:04 pm Title: Chapter 18

Looks like the Kinney-Taylor's are being missed by many. I can't wait for them to get back to Edna's Treasures.



Author's Response: They will always be missed.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 2:50 pm Title: Chapter 17

Cole is an ass.  I hope Gus catches on to him soon before he gets hurt.

Well Mel's party seems to be as bust.  I think the family should leave and her to Deb's.



Author's Response: Gus is young and vulnerable, so getting hurt is quite possible.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 1:00 pm Title: Chapter 22

Oh no, Cole isn't in the Pitts yet! Argh.... I hope somebody will see them!

Can't wait for the next part!

Thank you



Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting.

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