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Date: Oct 28, 2017 4:40 pm Title: Chapter 21

Time to head for home!



Author's Response: Yep.

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Date: Oct 28, 2017 3:53 pm Title: Chapter 20

We're very lucky that Bree didn't go wake up Gus.  Brian rescued Justin and Daphne as always.  Melanie looks like she's okay with the way her party turned out, but is she really?



Author's Response: Yes, is she?

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Date: Oct 28, 2017 3:42 pm Title: Chapter 19

Fireworks are coming to the Kinney-Taylor clan.



Author's Response: You think so? LOL

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Date: Oct 28, 2017 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 18

When did Michael become the sensible one?  John has been busy and it's nice to see him and Claire having fun.  It's also good that the treehouse looks to get used again.  Will Daphne and Justin return to the friends they were?



Author's Response: Michael has his moments. He's not all bad.

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Date: Oct 28, 2017 2:15 pm Title: Chapter 17

Brian and Briee both know BS when they see it and they've got Cole pegged.  I wonder just how old he really is.  Like that Michael took JR and Curtis to eat chicken, noticed that he didn't talk to Melanie about it.



Author's Response: That's one trait that Bree got from her Dada.

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Date: Oct 28, 2017 2:03 pm Title: Chapter 16

It is hard to believe that Daphne has changed so much.  



Author's Response: It's been a long time since she and Justin had seen each other. I guess she was affected by her surroundings.

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Date: Oct 27, 2017 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 15

I've been to the m&m place.  You make me want to go back.  Cole is not my favorite character, but Bree and her rainbows are.



Author's Response: I've been to the m&m store. It's quite amazing and so much like Bree's rainbows.

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Date: Oct 27, 2017 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 14

As much as I love this story, Cole makes me angry because I know he'll hurt Gus.



Author's Response: Cole isn't a very nice person, but Gus has to learn.

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Date: Oct 27, 2017 7:01 pm Title: Chapter 13

Gus and Bree have made up and that's good.  John and the Village are coming along so well that Kinnetik are already to advertise!



Author's Response: It's good to have brother and sister in sync.

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Date: Oct 27, 2017 4:35 pm Title: Chapter 12

Curtis more than deserves the good times ahead.  Gus meeting up with Cole could mean trouble.  That's gonna be sad.  



Author's Response: Curtis deserves a happy ending.

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Date: Oct 27, 2017 2:17 pm Title: Chapter 11

Poor Sunshine, getting picked on about his tummy.  I'd suggest a home gym, but where would they put one and when would they have the time to use it?  Curtis was really scared, since his experience with people hasn't always been good.  That will change I'm sure.  Now Melanie on the other hand will be disappointed that all her planning for the party is being changed and the elegant gather she wants is not to be.



Author's Response: Melanie will get what she deserves.

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Date: Oct 27, 2017 2:31 am Title: Chapter 10

Brian and Justin relived their youth and tried to keep Gus from making any mistakes.



Author's Response: Sometimes it's nice to go back.

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Date: Oct 26, 2017 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 9

Bree's in love...with the liberry.  Gus has a sex talk with Brian oh my!  Melanie is looking for trouble and doesn't know it.  Drew will cut her down to size if she makes problems for Em.



Author's Response: Yes, a sex talk! LOL

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Date: Oct 25, 2017 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 8

Gus and Ray will get past this.  Shame they can't see into the future.  Melanie is on her way to making a mess.  How dare she want Emmett to cater her party with only two weeks notice.  This does not bode well.



Author's Response: That's Melanie for you.

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Date: Oct 25, 2017 8:15 pm Title: Chapter 7

The beginning of Ray and Gus or is it Gus and Ray?  Funny how everyone has only been gone a day or so and they are missing each other.  



Author's Response: Shows you the importance they are to each other.

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Date: Oct 25, 2017 6:16 pm Title: Chapter 6

Poor Brian.  He's having seperation anxiety which is strange since he's taking his family with him.  Emmett was the perfect choice for bringing out of his bad mood.  How nice of Gus and Joan to give Brian and Justin some alone time.



Author's Response: Our little, or not so little, composed family is always there for each other.

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Date: Oct 25, 2017 4:19 pm Title: Chapter 5

Who would have thought Bree feared anything.  Good thing that Ashley was able to talk her into riding Brandy.  I think Gus has a new girlfriend.  lol.  The village is coming along fabulously.  Wish I had solar panels for my home.  Brian might have been a little grouchy, but with Gus and Bree nearby it will never last.



Author's Response: Bree is human and has fears like any child. Gus may have someone crushing on him. LOL

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Date: Oct 25, 2017 11:52 am Title: Chapter 4

When you think how this all started with Justin finding a book on Brian's shelf in the loft it's evolved.  Brian now has 3 offices of Kinnetik, an interest in a bowling alley and movie theater, a house in the country, Justin and 2 children.  Justin is a famous artist who, back then started his Sunshine file.  Gus had grown to be a great kid, not to mention a good friend to Curtis, who will now have the home he's always dreamed of after his family died.  Life is good.



Author's Response: All part of our idyllic little family and setting. Thank you for seeing the progression.

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Date: Oct 25, 2017 3:44 am Title: Chapter 3

Expansions can be tricky, but Stacy with the help of Simon and Ken have it all worked out.  It's so nice that Bree is worried about Ashley, but it's good that Patrick came up with the perfect solution.  I also have a feeling that he'll be around for Ashley at school too.



Author's Response: Patrick and Bree are the best.

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Date: Oct 24, 2017 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 2

Plans are being made for the trip, with Joanie and Gus going along.  Things are going to be boring on the lane without them there.  But John will have the Village to distract him.



Author's Response: It should be an interesting trip.

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Date: Oct 24, 2017 2:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

It's back to NY with new memories to be made.  Curtis is this close to saying yes!



Author's Response: Always new memories to be made.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 7:45 pm Title: Chapter 22

I don't want Cole hurting Gus... I want Gus to punch him when he finds out what's going on!!!



Author's Response: LOL That would be good.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 21

Curtis is such a sweetheart I just want him to relax and not always be afraid of people getting rid of him, but I do get it



Author's Response: Yes, coming from where he has been, it's very hard to trust.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 20

Somehow I doubt Mel really learned anything... her brain shuts off when her jealousy shows up



Author's Response: True!

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Date: May 10, 2017 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 19

seriously it gives me jitters seeing how much Gus is falling for and running after Cole... he is being played and easily it seems... he is so focused on not being a virgin, he isn't standing his own ground very much... if he saw someone treat a friend like that or god forbid treat JR like that, he would not accept it, but he is accepting it to himself :( 



Author's Response: We don't always see things about ourselves that we recognize with others.

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