[Report This]Date: May 16, 2017 3:13 pm Title: Hunter is back
I like how Emmett fits in. Can't wait to find out how else you change things for the better.
Date: May 16, 2017 10:37 am Title: Hunter is back
I loved this chapter. I'm so glad that Brian is adopting Hunter and that Emmett has seen the prophecy as well. Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2017 9:00 am Title: Hunter is back
LOVED IT!!!!!
So happy that Emmett is with Brian. I always liked Brian/Emmett friendship.
Waiting for the next chapter!
Date: May 08, 2017 6:36 pm Title: For starting over
I'm asking you now...begging you to never give up on this story! Don't be discouraged by few reviews. Some people tend to wait a bit for a newer writer to post several chapters before they start reading. I've read 2 stories with this sort of concept, and neither have been finished. Very disheartening as it's such a terrific concept!
Was gutted at first, with Brian's reaction to waking up without his Sunshine. That's it's already been a whole year since he died. His total sense of desolation was heart breaking. Thank goodness for Marilyn! She'll be a terrific support system for him going forward. He seems to have a great start in mind. Seeing what happens with all the knowledge he has, how he's going to treat people now will be interesting. I don't see him putting up with any crap from anyone and they will all have to learn to accept this new and improved Brian.
I think though that it will also give him an advantage. He knows the true character of Emmett, Ted etc and will move forward with that knowledge.
Am really excited to get into this. Like I said, I love this idea and am looking forward to see what you do with this!! Keep writing!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: May 08, 2017 12:31 am Title: For starting over
It's going to be hard for Brian to remember that what he knows hasn't happened. It's difficult to not be upset with someone for something they haven't done yet.
I can't wait to see how this all turns out.
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2017 4:23 am Title: For starting over
Boy, I can't believe how wicked Michael is..er..was? At least Brian is heading in the right direction and with Mysterious Marilyn's help things should turn out for the better.
Date: May 06, 2017 6:57 am Title: Explanations
Wow. These are my favorite kind of stories.
[Report This]Date: May 06, 2017 1:39 am Title: Explanations
Oh boy. Mysterious Marilyn and the wayback machine. I love these types of stories where they get to fix the errors. I take it Justin died in the bombing? How did Michael do it? And what happened with Gus and Hunter. You got a lot of explaining to do, Lucy.
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2017 12:15 pm Title: Why always me?
Wow! What a start. I'm dying to know how Micheal betrayed Brian. If Justin died I can see Brian behaving this way.
Date: May 04, 2017 9:52 pm Title: Why always me?
I'm hooked already. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2017 7:23 pm Title: Why always me?
WOW.......JUST WOW
Wanna know how is gonna developw the story
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2017 7:05 pm Title: Why always me?
OMG!!! Wonderful, please post asap and often, I can tell this is going to be an amazing storyline.