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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2017 3:56 pm Title: Chapter 6

Hunter is a great "dad" to all the kids.

Hmmmm, could Justin be having an adverse reaction to the new daffodil Brian planted?  I wonder if that is bringing up a new allergy... just me writing my theory down :) 



Author's Response: We love to hear theories. LOL

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2017 3:47 pm Title: Chapter 5

Craig is in a jealous snit... petty man

I want Justin to be ok... now I'm worried, but I trust you guys, you wouldn't hurt our boys (too badly)... but I reserve the right to panic LOL



Author's Response: You are allowed to panic, but we would never really hurt the boys.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2017 3:40 pm Title: Chapter 4

My first thought with Justin was spring time allergies... (Mine are awful right now)... I hope it's nothing serious!



Author's Response: You and Justin have something in common.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2017 3:34 pm Title: Chapter 3

seriously Sydney... you really wanna pressure Justin???? wtf

and Bobby to the rescue! lol



Author's Response: We all need a rescuer from time to time.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2017 3:24 pm Title: Chapter 2

OMG, I'd love to see a reformed Joan and Craig smackdown... Craig wouldn't stand a chance!!!! lol



Author's Response: I never thought of that. LOL

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2017 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

so Craig reverts to asshat status... not surprising.

It's so nice to see Jennifer so happy and the small gloating was just right... I'd want to do it too, and it did make her realize she was really happy with her new life and friends!



Author's Response: Correct on both counts. Jennifer deserves some happiness.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 8:23 pm Title: Chapter 17

Yeah, Beau the safe guard! Good thinking! Another great chapter, though, the end is bittersweet: Brian thinking it's time for Justin to bloom seems like "it's time for him to take off and leave me"; maybe I'm just over thinking.

Thank you for this wonderful new "file" in this Sunshine saga! I really can't wait for more about Curtis, Briana, and Brian/Justin.



Author's Response: We're so glad you enjoyed the story. More should be coming soon.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 17

Oh, you made me cry with this last bit.  I hope Justin has a great show and comes back soon.  Can't wait to see what happens next!!!!

Hugs,

Jessica



Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 7:22 pm Title: Chapter 16

It warms my heart how much they all look out for Justin.  Craig better not hurt him or look out.  Maybe he'll surprise us.



Author's Response: Maybe he will.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 7:10 pm Title: Chapter 15

Briam is a big Smoosh! :)

So far so good.  Debbie is my hero.  I love how she threatened Craig with a smile on her face.  She reminds me a lot of my Nana.

Can't wait to see how the rest of the party goes.



Author's Response: We love Brian, the Big Smoosh.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 7:07 pm Title: Chapter 16

I don't think Craig would dare trying anything stupid.



Author's Response: You never know.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 14

A convoy...they need to buy a bus and just drive one vehicle. lol

I hope Craig is on his best behavior or someone hold Brian back.  No one messes with Sunshine.



Author's Response: Everyone will try to keep Craig on good behavior.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 6:50 pm Title: Chapter 15

It's clever to have Craig visit the home before seeing the hosts; it may help him see them differently.

Mel is going to be very jealous because of the party and what they booked for the kids. I hope she doesn't put a damper on it while Craig is getting warmer.



Author's Response: Mel and Craig - what can I say?

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 6:48 pm Title: Chapter 13

Bree is a hoot.  She is definitely the boss in this family.

I'm glad Curtis seemed to like everyone.  I think he​ and Gus will​ become fast friends.



Author's Response: Bree takes after one of her fathers in that regard. LOL

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 6:24 pm Title: Chapter 14

I love how Susan is not taking the shit Craig is sending her. 

The convoy is a good idea; we can have the feedback on each group's car.



Author's Response: Susan stands up for herself every now and then.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 12

Leave it to Bree to be the hostess extrodinare.  I'm sure Curtis is so confused.  That's a lot of people to meet in an afternoon.  He'll come to love them all.



Author's Response: Bree is extraordinaire everything. LOL

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 13

Another excellent chapter with funny and serious topics. It's great that Gus was able to discuss things with Curtis and then, to tell him he's gay. The other way around would have lessen his chances to be heard.



Author's Response: Excellent point.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 11

Fertilizer?  Well at least we know what was causing his allergies to be so bad.  I'm sure Brian feels awful.  He definitely did not mean to cause this.

Rage is a hit!  I can't wait for Lacy to realize she has talent.  We just need to convince hr of that.



Author's Response: Yes, it would be good for Lacy's self esteem.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 5:50 pm Title: Chapter 10

Well I'm glad Jen and Seth's living arrangements are settled.

I love the little domestic moments between Brian and Justin.  My hubby and I always lay in bed talking about our day.  It is a nice way to connect and end your day.  

Can't wait for Saturday!



Author's Response: I like domestic Brian and Justin too. Wish there had been a little bit of that on the show.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 12

What a stressful situation for Curtis, meeting this crazy and expandable family! It seems he manages it not too bad.



Author's Response: It is a bit overwhelming.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 9

Poor Brian.  Bree just asks so many questions.  I will say he does answer most of them for her.  That's why she's so smart. lol

I hope everything works out with lunch at the diner.  Curtis is going h to become apart of a very eclectic family.



Author's Response: Yes, Bree is smart and her parents are willing to aid her in becoming even smarter.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 5:31 pm Title: Chapter 8

I'm glad everyone is willing to help Curtis.  It doesn't matter who your parents are as long as there is love.

Leave it to Debbie to give Jen her no nonsense opinion.  I think they should get a new place together.  Hell Jen is a real estate agent.



Author's Response: I so agree.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 11

This part is wonderful: "Over the years Justin kept his hair a little on the long side. It was sometimes inconvenient and he never got over the ‘Meg Ryan’ crack, but Justin realized how tactile Brian had grown. Burying his long fingers into Justin’s hair could be comforting when he needed it and very sensual as they made love."

Whoa, Craig accepted the invitation! Hide the flowers, the snow is coming back, in a big storm!

By the way, nice thinking for the allergies!



Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 10

Jennifer introspection is very interesting; that's part of why I love your saga because it feels like real life.

Briana and her rainbow cards: she's really sensitive and ready to help people.



Author's Response: I'm so glad you think our story is like real life. Thanks.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2017 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 9

This line is excellent: "That's why they're called deadlines, because they kill you."

Briana is adorable with her frequent: "I share"

The lesson of life (death of parents) is a hard one to explain to a child.

Author's Response: So glad you liked that line. Death is always difficult to explain.

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