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Date: Jun 09, 2017 2:15 am Title: Chapter 18

It appears that Mikey didn't do a good job of letting the girls know about what happened while they were gone.



Author's Response: Are we surprised? LOL

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Date: Jun 08, 2017 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 17

The time for Melanie to step up is neigh.  Let's hope the kids don't have to go hide at Danny's.  Michael started out very negatively, but he's slowly coming around.  Emphasis on slowly.



Author's Response: Very true.

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Date: Jun 08, 2017 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 16

Sometimes love just isn't enough.



Author's Response: Unfortunately that's true.

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Date: Jun 08, 2017 8:40 pm Title: Chapter 15

Sadly Melanie can't or won't change.  I have a feeling that Ralph's new patient and the bad news are linked.  wink wink.



Author's Response: Could be. ;)

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Date: Jun 08, 2017 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 14

Bree has her Dada wrapped around her little finger.  It's about time Justin let Rage go, working with Michael has to be a pain.



Author's Response: Bree has most people wrapped around her finger. LOL

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Date: Jun 08, 2017 7:17 pm Title: Chapter 13

I thought I remembered a microwave blowout.  Things do seem to happen in that house.  What I don't remember is whether Melanie got her full partnership.  If she didn't that would mean no happy home for the munchers.



Author's Response: Read on and see.

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Date: Jun 08, 2017 6:47 pm Title: Chapter 12

While I enjoy reading about Mel and Lindsay I have to say I'd rather read Brian and Justin's sex life than theirs.



Author's Response: Wouldn't we all. LOL

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Date: Jun 08, 2017 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 11

It's been awhile since Deb has hosted a meal.  Poor J.R. never had as much attention from her dad as Bree gets.  And whose fault is that?



Author's Response: Yes, whose?

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Date: Jun 08, 2017 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 10

Except for a hole in the wall, things are going well.  Now if the tipsy twosome don't stumble everything should be done before they get home.



Author's Response: Let's hope so.

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Date: Jun 08, 2017 5:20 am Title: Chapter 9

Michael is back to cause trouble.  John is right to wonder how Brian put up with him.  The girls are having a lot of sex and learning things about each other, but once they get home will they fall into bad habits?



Author's Response: Michael causes a lot of trouble in our stories. LOL

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Date: Jun 08, 2017 3:38 am Title: Chapter 8

Week one is over and done.  Week two should find the house in good shape ready for the girls to come home.



Author's Response: Maybe. LOL

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Date: Jun 08, 2017 12:00 am Title: Chapter 7

Love how Emmett went to the heart of the matter and fixed it.  Glad to see that everyone is in good spirits at the moment.



Author's Response: We love Emmett.

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Date: Jun 07, 2017 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 6

Poor Justin.  He feels left out of raising his daughter because she turns to her Dada so much.  Now about Lindsay.  About time she stood up to Melanie and made her understand that her remarks are uncalled for.  Will it help?  Maybe, temporarily.



Author's Response: Yes, it always seems to be temporary with Mel.

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Date: Jun 07, 2017 9:03 pm Title: Chapter 5

The girls house is falling to pieces.  However the girls may be on the road to mending.  But something is bugging Justin and I can't imagine what it can be.



Author's Response: Read on to find out. LOL

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Date: Jun 07, 2017 8:53 pm Title: Chapter 4

Seamus is very wise.  Perhaps Lindsay should take his words to heart.  Even better Melanie should hear them, but she'd probably brush them aside.



Author's Response: Seamus is a wise man. They would both do well to listen to him.

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Date: Jun 07, 2017 4:15 am Title: Chapter 3

If Melanie can keep her promise I'll be mighty surprised.  Always loved Seamus.  Look like the plumber will soon be doing a lot of work and maybe becoming part of John's company.  A win/win for everyone.



Author's Response: Melanie hasn't been good about promises yet.

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Date: Jun 07, 2017 3:21 am Title: Chapter 2

I love how Brian explained Martin Luther King Day to Bree.  It's nice that Brian plans on having the plumber in to fix the shower, but I sense that it will end up a bigger job.  Melanie almost would rather throw away the champagne rather then enjoy it because Brian provided it.  What a shame.



Author's Response: Melanie seems unable to give Brian an inch. Glad you liked the MLK explanation.

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Date: Jun 05, 2017 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

Once a mother always a mother.  Lindsay, instead of thinking about the fun she and Mel might have is wondering what the kids are doing.  At least Melanie has agreed to talk, something they really need to do.  If I remember rightly things at the girls house will need John's help.  That was always fun.  Poor Brian.  Melanie always irritates him, even when he's trying to be nice.



Author's Response: Right on!

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2017 12:56 am Title: Chapter 18

Finished it!! I was supposed to be up to my eyebrows in my own plots but couldn't stop reading. Great job ladies!! I'm certainly looking forward to reading the next installments. Since it's my first time ever reading the series, I'm sure I'm in for many more twists, turns and surprises!

HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response: You have a lot of stories ahead of you in this series. Lots of twists and turns. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 8:39 pm Title: Chapter 7

I'm glad they fixed the potential mess and that Em talked with Justin. I swear that man, for all his Southern queenliness, is full of ripe old wisdom. What a terrific kind of friend to have!

Melanie.... I sstill don't know what to make of her. It's easy to agree to all Lindsay said when the temptation to fall back into old habits isn't available. Still reserving judgment on her but definitely happy that Lindsay set her straight on the 'Brian is a whore' issue. I've always been pissed at how they perceived him. Even still, it was his dick to do with as he pleased. And maybe that's Mel's real issue with Brian. Penis-envy is a helluva motivator to be a nasty bitch. Mel definitely is being one!

Next!!

 ~Nichelle

 



Author's Response: I love Emmett, and he does possess great wisdom.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 7:20 pm Title: Chapter 5

Love Em and Brian's friendship. I always thought they should have done more with it in the show. Ted and Em are much better suited as the 'best friends' than you know who.

On a much tenser note, Brian and Justin need to have a talk about parenting Bree. I can understand both sides but they are going to have to find a balance before letting their child come between them. I agreed with Debbie when she told Justin in the series that no child has the power to break up a marriage. Whatever else is going on has to be dealt with swiftly or else they have the potential to end up like Mel and Lindsay. Since Brian is always worried about becoming a Muncher emotionally, I think he'll want to get to the bottom of things immediately. 

Mel and Lindsay's talk is eye-opening for Melanie, but will it really make a difference? Guess we'll see. Her jealousy is really telling and tiring though. 

Really enjoying this thus far.

~Nichelle



Author's Response: I think Emm and Brian make great friends. Melanie? It remains to be seen.

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Date: Apr 19, 2017 6:19 pm Title: Chapter 4

Glad Lindsay is recognizing that it may not be love that's keeping her with Melanie. It should give her a better understanding of her needs that are apparently not being met by her partner. I think that's why both of them cheated on the other the first times it happened. The way their going, it won't take but a blink for it to happen again.

Brian and Gus' talk was absolutely hysterical but so honest. I'm really glad that Gus has Brian to talk to because the others... well they leave a lot to be desired in the Birds and the Bees department. I mean seriously Deb... hand the boy condoms and expect him NOT to want to use them? LOL

Brian and Justin's relationship is so touching. They've been through hell and back and managed to survive it all. I think that's where a lot of the others'- meaning Michael and Melanie specifically- jealousy toward them comes from. Most of what they have been through would have killed the average person and yet they manage to come out stronger and better for each experience. Definitely a lot of growth as men both individually and as a couple.

Onto the next chapter!

~Nichelle



Author's Response: I'm very pleased that you see the growth in Brian and Justin. That was always part of our plan for the boys.

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Date: Apr 19, 2017 5:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

LMAO!! The reaction to Ronnie by all of the guys was all too funny. I think had Justin been there, he probably would have reacted the same way and WASP manners be damned! Gus is a HOT MESS! They are sure to have fun trying to keep up with him. The parental curse of 'Someday you're going to have a kid just like you' is sure to bite Brian in the ass, LOL!

Melanie is really grating on my nerves. So now anyone who knows Brian and has a good report with him must bear the brunt of her jealousy? She's acting like Michael does about Justin. It kind of makes me wonder if Lindsay is staying with her because of love or out of the fear of starting over. Guess we'll see....

Off to the next chapter!

~Nichelle



Author's Response: I love your comment about the parental curse. Too true!

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2017 5:05 pm Title: Chapter 2

Melanie really needs to get a damn grip! Ungrateful shrew!

Loved how Brian explained the difficulties of the Civil Rights Movement in a way that Bree would understand. SMH and he thought he wouldn't make an excellent dad?! His conversation with Gus alone had me laughing. It was so true-to-form of how phone interactions with teenagers go. 

Looking forward to the next chapter!

~Nichelle



Author's Response: Thank you so much.

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Date: Apr 18, 2017 2:49 pm Title: Chapter 18

Still not sure Mel and Lindsay can stay together since I doubt Mel can put her family first for very long. (just my personal feelings)

and this mugger is worrying me... I'm guessing it will come up again in future stories... I just hope one of our family isn't a victim.



Author's Response: Mel has many issues.

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