[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2018 2:04 am Title: STAYING or GOING: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR- PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE
These are good reasons as to why they needed to be there. Why didn't Alex let Justin know that Brian never got his text messages?
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2018 1:27 am Title: THE WIFE or THE MISTRESS: CHAPTER 5
It's good that Blake is back and if Diane goes along than you'll have Mikey spiked good.
Date: Feb 13, 2018 9:56 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR: PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE Part 2
I love this story. I want to seriously smack the ever-loving shit out of Michael, but I love this story!! Thanks for such a wonderful tale. Looking forward to more. Cheers; Kerri. x
Date: Feb 10, 2018 9:27 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR: PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE Part 2
The beginning with Michael's message to the doc is quite funny, but I feel so bad for Ben.
What a fool he has been; after what happened with Paul, he trusted Michael, and once again was treated like second choice and let Michael do it.
Date: Feb 10, 2018 8:50 pm Title: STAYING or GOING: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR- PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE
Brian is starting to see the way Michael "loves" him and is doing everything he can to break his couple with Justin. I hope he will read all the messages soon, so he can process them and take action.
It's interesting to see how he lost his virginity and how he started his "stud" life.
Justin can't help being nostalgic just with Brian's sent; there's hope.
Date: Feb 10, 2018 7:58 pm Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR
Whine Into Submission: what an excellent way to describe Michael!
It's true that Brian wouldn't ignore a call from his first client: I hope he will see and understand what Michael's goal was.
Date: Feb 10, 2018 3:37 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR: PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE Part 2
Michael is a piece of shit and I can't wait for Ben & everyone else to tell him to fuck off! That is all.....
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2018 4:40 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR: PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE Part 2
So Ben is responsible for not reigning in Michael. But will finding out how manipulative Micheal is make a difference?
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2018 4:12 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR: PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE Part 2
Ben is starting to realize when you settle for an illusion all you get is crap back.
Michael is stuck at fourteen when it was just him and Brain it is his happy place and he will do anything to stay there.
Everyone else is just granted the privilege to be apart of his inner circle but they must abide by the rules which is He Is THE MOST IMPORTANT PERSON YOU WILL EVER MEET & HIS HAPPINESS IS THE ONLY THING THAT MATTERS!!!
He may have the maturity level of a fourteen year old but he has the brain span of a two year old when he doesn't get his way.
I think he resents Brian not only because Brian never chose him but because Brian became successful and was starting to leave him behind.
He used Rage and Justin to gain success but everyone was still leaving him behind.
Justin may have been seventeen and naive when he walked onto Liberty Avenue but he was still more of a man than Michael and it was another thing he resented Justin for, cause no one had to hold his hand, tell him he was gay and get him laid.
Justin Got Brian His First Night and all Michael got was an unfinished hand job.
Ben is taking his power back.
By The end of this almost Everyone will have their power back :)
Date: Feb 10, 2018 4:12 am Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR: PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE Part 2
Good chapter. As much as I really dislike Michael. I have constantly questioned why Brian, Ben, Ted & Emmett have let him do the things that he does. I like seeing that you are addressing that. Great job.
Date: Feb 09, 2018 10:49 pm Title: STAYING or GOING: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR- PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE
excellent update, as usual. The intricacies of their stories really come out. While I want everything to get back to normal, I love the way you weave the stories and really have the characters examine themselves. I can't wait for more updates.
Date: Feb 09, 2018 12:09 am Title: STAYING or GOING: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR- PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE
So fabulous! Great therapy sessions! Both Brian & Justin are admitting things & speaking honestly & truthfully. Can't wait for more!
Date: Feb 09, 2018 12:08 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR
I cannot wait for Brian to get this information about his cell, that no partners weekend. Michael is really in for it, it's going to be awesome to see what happens!
Date: Feb 08, 2018 5:09 pm Title: STAYING or GOING: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR- PLAYING FOOL TO CATCH WISE
Another great chapter. I admire how you can write 5 different stories and connect them. I will anxiously await the next updates. I know I will enjoy them as much as this one. Cannot wait to see where it goes from here. Hopefully Michael will finally get what it coming to him. A good swift kick in the butt just doesn't seem like enough. LOL
Date: Feb 08, 2018 4:33 pm Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR
I love this story. I am so happy when there are updates. Great writing. Moving onto the next chapter now.
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2018 4:12 am Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER FOUR
Oh, I so want to see how the meeting with the whiner blinder bragade goes. This should put Michael in his place.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:43 am Title: FIRE and ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 3
You are a fantastic writer. Tackling this type of a story is amazing and you have done such a great job keeping all the plots going. I just love each of their stories. I am a sucker for happy endings and hope that this ends that way for all of my favorite guys except for Michael. You can drown him in the ocean and I would be happy. Don't know why, but any time Michael is a "pain" I am happy for what he gets in the end. Sorry I haven't reviewed your stories, but I forgot my penname and just got it restored. Keep writing, you make my days. Happy Thanksgiving.
Date: Nov 21, 2017 3:26 am Title: FIRE and ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 3
You have such great insight. Just love how Justin gave it to Michael and "Brian didn't fight him. Everyone has their secrets but it appears that they are all on boarc to discuss those with their partners. I know there is a lot of work ahead but I have lots of hope and Michael is a pain.
Date: Nov 19, 2017 5:08 am Title: STAYING or GOING: BOOK II: CHAPTER 3
lmaoo love this chapter Michael so pathetic
Date: Nov 18, 2017 11:16 pm Title: FIRE and ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 3
Omg poor Emmett! Wow, that was eye opening. Michael clearly doesn't care enough about his marriage if he's already calling Em. Drew has the right idea & I think they'll both be fine once communication is in place.
Date: Nov 18, 2017 10:25 pm Title: THE WIFE or THE MISTRESS: BOOK II: CHAPTER 3
Ted is such a loyal friend...Em's right though. Communication is the key to every relationship, including friendship.
Date: Nov 18, 2017 10:04 pm Title: IN or OUT: BOOK II: CHAPTER 3
Yay! So 'shit for brains' is going to have to accept some serious shit now. He's backed into a corner & no one is giving him a brake. I want to see Ben get himself back & be happy and Mickey...well I don't care what happens to him, quite frankly.
Date: Nov 18, 2017 8:08 pm Title: STAYING or GOING: BOOK II: CHAPTER 3
Woohoo! You go Sunshine! Let him have it! So glad Brian backed Justin up and pretty much told 'shit for brains' off.
Date: Nov 18, 2017 2:56 pm Title: BEFORE I LET GO: BOOK II: CHAPTER 3
I like the witty banter between the doctors, I need a good therapist like any one of them! Who are the two guys B/J are talking to? Lawyers? Agents of some kind? Hmmmmm
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2017 1:56 pm Title: FIRE and ICE: BOOK II: CHAPTER 3
Emmett learned the Brian and Justin have been married for longer than we realized. I'm glad to see that the messages that Michael intercepted will be coming to life. I'm sitting on pins and needles waiting for more on this wonderful story.