




Date: Mar 21, 2025 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
This was so, so wonderful. I loved the very beginning the way you set the story up, All with how Brian was a miserable bastard, right down to how the story ended on a happy note, and with Brian and Justin facing a happy future together.
Thank you for this wonderful story.
Hugs ~Cathy





Date: Mar 21, 2025 9:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
So my chest is tight, and tears are threatening. My heart breaks for Brian, but more so for Justin, that was no way for his life to turn out. He had been so full of life.
I sure hope the last chapter turns all of this around.
Hugs ~Cathy





Date: Mar 21, 2025 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh, I feel like crying. Justin has surpassed Brian in the cynical department.
I kept having this picture in my head of Brian going to Justin's house and getting him to go to see Gus when he opens his presents.
I REALLY hope that comes to pass.
Hugs ~Cathy





Date: Mar 21, 2025 8:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow! Now I know what happened to Justin.
I don't think it helps for Brian to relive those moments when Debbie sounded against him. She was always supposed to love Brian. Not talk about him like he was a burden, that she didn't want around.
Every time I read or watch something regarding Brian and his parents, I wish I could shake them. Man, they really screwed up their kids.
Hugs ~Cathy





Date: Mar 21, 2025 7:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aha! I should have been on a reading spree three months ago, then Scrooge would have fit right in.
We sure do have a cynical Brian. I'm interested to know who is all in Brian's life. No mention of our little blond.
Hugs ~Cathy





Date: Nov 15, 2021 4:33 am Title: Chapter 5
I liked this a lot. I'm going through your stories.
Date: Jul 19, 2019 4:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
Dickens would have loved your version of his story. Good job.

Date: Mar 14, 2017 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
What a wonderful life they will have. I notice Michael is still whining.

Date: Mar 14, 2017 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
Okay, I'm hoping this turns out the way it did in the movie.

Date: Mar 14, 2017 9:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
But he's going to change that. Right?

Date: Mar 14, 2017 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
Pushing Justin away really won't work in the end.

Date: Mar 14, 2017 8:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Jack haunting Brian. But he'll go along if only to help Gus.

Date: Mar 14, 2017 6:32 am Title: Chapter 5
Marvelous..... happy ending....thank u for sharing such a heart touching story... i loved it.💙💚â¤ðŸ’œ

Date: Mar 14, 2017 6:22 am Title: Chapter 4
My eyes are wet...oh gosh...that was so ...i dont have words..😢

Date: Mar 14, 2017 6:08 am Title: Chapter 3
Gosh...so heartbreaking ..i feel so bad for Brian.

Date: Mar 14, 2017 5:57 am Title: Chapter 2
That was so emotional and devastating....poor justin and brian..😢😣

Date: Mar 14, 2017 5:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Omg....that was sooo cooolll...i like it already... amazing start...thank u for posting.â¤