Date: Aug 11, 2021 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 6
Yeah, that was the best thing they could do for Michael, getting him court ordered visits with Dr. Alex.
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2020 7:45 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ewwwwww. But great writing
Date: Mar 20, 2020 10:32 am Title: Chapter 6
I think you let him off the ok way to easily.
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2019 2:50 am Title: Chapter 6
Omg!! Every time I read this abs the part where Michael yells Briiaannnn. In the back room I laugh. So funny
Date: Feb 06, 2019 7:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
Debbie made Michael like that
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2017 7:28 am Title: Chapter 6
Great story- I really enjoyed it, thanks so much for writing and sharing :)
Date: Apr 10, 2017 5:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Kathy...I loved this so much!
Although she changed her story, Debbie still gets me so mad how she coddles Michael. This is probably why I love the poetic justice of psycho/delusional Mikey stories.
I can't wait to read more, sweetheart. You're one of my fave new writers. *Hugs*
Author's Response:
Awww thanks Deborah *blushes*
I'm glad you're enjoying it and thank you for the review :)
Date: Mar 31, 2017 1:38 pm Title: Chapter 6
Congrats on another great read. And you even managed to redeem Mikey in the end. That takes effort. Lol. TAG
Author's Response:
thanks... I figured Mikey wasn't so much bad in this story, just more cray cray, so I guess this one time I could find him redemption lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2017 3:03 am Title: Chapter 5
*reaches for that industrial sized bottle of brain bleach* lol. TAG
Author's Response:
even the industrial size is just not enough!!!!!
Date: Mar 31, 2017 2:54 am Title: Chapter 4
I'd love to join you at Emporio for some Saucy Balls someday! It's a date! TAG
Author's Response:
who can say no to Saucy Balls!!!! lol
Date: Mar 30, 2017 1:47 pm Title: Chapter 6
That was a great ending. It wrapped everything up nicely. I hope you will write something else soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you Susi... I'm glad you enjoyed it. I figured since Michael wasn't a bad guy in this one, just delusional, I could let him get help and rejoin society LOL
I have an AU in my head, but taking some time to catch up on my reading first... I can't do both, so it's reading time for a while.... it also gives me time to accumulate my notes for the next one :)
Date: Mar 30, 2017 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ewwww. I'm glad I didn't read that before I went to bed. As it is I will have problems getting that particular image out of my head. I liked the gangs reaction to Michaels news. It was perfect.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was NOT fun to even write... yuck yuck yuck LOL
Date: Mar 29, 2017 9:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
Saucy balls? LoL. I think it's a sign that nobody even really missed Michael. They should think about that.
Author's Response:
I like that they realized he's been missing, but that they are all okay without him around... he should know that too!
Date: Mar 29, 2017 9:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
Please tell me you won't go into detail about what happens between those two. Do they actually think anybody even cares?
Author's Response:
they think EVERYONE cares about them... they are both very important in their own minds!!!
Date: Mar 29, 2017 7:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think talking to a shrink might be best right now. I'm really happy Deb managed to listen to everyone even though it was really hard for her.
Author's Response:
I wanted Debbie to be who she was, but maybe a little more accepting that her baby was an asshole sometimes LOL
Date: Mar 29, 2017 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
I wonder what Deb will think about Michaels behavior. Is she going to believe it or try to defend her son?
Author's Response:
I hope you like how she handles it!
Date: Mar 28, 2017 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 6
Had to battle in my head as to whether or not I wanted Michael redeemed or not. lol. I think though you did it really well. He needed help, not prison. You were right to do it that way. I like how his steps were slow. Makes it more believable. I was sceptical at first, as were the group I'm sure, but Brian took the step to get rid of the protection order, so that means that he felt Michael had taken teh necessary step.
You rounded it all out really well and I'm so thrilled that you continued it. Made for a great 2 part story.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thank you Elaine... normally I'm all for Michael to just go away (never been a fan lol), but he wasn't really a bad guy in this one, just delusional, so I thought I'd be nice and let him find his way back :)
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the reviews :)
Date: Mar 27, 2017 2:53 am Title: Chapter 3
He, he, he... I love it! ~ Kathleen 💟
Author's Response:
thank you my dear!
<3
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2017 2:32 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm loving how your continuing this story. This should be an interesting dinner. Hopefully Deb will be able to hear the concern and not just the judgement as they talk about Michael's immaturity. So happy there's already more chapters...
Hugs Kathleen 💟
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading my story and for the review.
the story is now complete... I hope you continue to enjoy it :)
Date: Mar 26, 2017 4:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
I enjoyed this story and it was nice to see Michael growing up for once.
Author's Response:
I don't normally think Michael would find his way out of his delusion, but I thought I'd be nice to him this time!
Date: Mar 26, 2017 2:38 am Title: Chapter 6
Didn't see the ending as you painted it, but I like it. I'm not a Mickey fan but this story works
Author's Response:
I don't normally find redemption for Mikey either, but in my story he wasn't really a bad guy, just delusional/crazy... losing everything I THINK would make him realize keeping his family is more important... but I do love to see him left on his own too LOL
Date: Mar 26, 2017 1:29 am Title: Chapter 6
Wow, what a turn around. At least therapy helped crazy comic boy! Glad you went full circle on this fic, I enjoyed it!
Author's Response:
I gave Mikey a break this time... normally I just hate him and can't find a way to be nice, but I figured he wasn't actually bad in this one, just delusional, so why not let him find his way out of cray cray land lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 6
Brandon finally realized what good is revenge if the mark doesn't help sell it and no one cares, he spent weeks with Michael and all he got was a migraine and embarrassed.
Michael wanted his fantasy so bad that all he could see was the prize too bad the happily ever after was just in his head.
At last he finally got help and sees that the world will keep spinning without him and trying to push his fantasy got him nothing but alone.
Now he has his family, friends and can face life in the real world.
Gotta say I could see Lindsay acting the same way and not giving up isn't that sad?
Great Story :)
Author's Response:
I could TOTALLY see Lindsay acting the same way... I avoided her in this story just so i could focus on Michael and not bash her as well... I don't think she helps, just finds a way to twist things to focus on herself
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 8:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
So sorry to see this end. It was an enjoyable ride.
Author's Response:
This was my longest story yet... I'm still getting more courage and ideas on my writing... my next idea is an AU story that I predict will be longer...
I tend to be a quick fix girl in real life, so right now so are my stories... find a problem fix it... not extend it with issues... lol... give me time!!! :D
Date: Mar 25, 2017 7:59 pm Title: Chapter 6
It was great to work with you Kat! You did an amazing job on this story, even giving a character I normally loathe with every drop of ink in my pen and printer a much needed redeeming quality. I enjoyed this story thoroughly!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your help... you are just absolutely awesome!!!!