Date: Mar 25, 2017 7:46 pm Title: Chapter 6
Good for you Michael to finally accept the reality and start living without delusions..
I love it,you really did great in this one..Looking forward for more from you and your amazing stories to come...😘😘😘
Thank you for sharing.😘
Author's Response:
thank you... thinking up new ideas now!
Date: Mar 25, 2017 7:45 pm Title: Chapter 6
Loved it such a cute story..... Would have preferred Michael to rot in prison but we can't have it all lol
Author's Response:
I normally do not let Michael be redeemed... I prefer him in prison or at least alone as well, but I don't think he was "bad" in this story as much as delusional.... so I thought I'd be a little nicer to him this time LOL
Date: Mar 25, 2017 6:30 am Title: Chapter 5
Hahahah LMAO what a way to get Brian to get jealous...Can't wait for the men in the backroom's reaction after that specially Brandon...
Author's Response:
Brandon is not happy to say the least LOL
Date: Mar 25, 2017 6:24 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm really enjoying this;thank you😘😘
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 5:09 am Title: Chapter 5
What an interesting scene. Michael and Brandon in the backroom. Then Michael cries out Brian's name. Truly hysterical. Not to mention embarrassing.
Author's Response:
it should be embarassing to Michael, but really only Brandon will live with the embarassment IMO... Michael would have to acknowledge what he did to be embarassed lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 5:01 am Title: Chapter 4
Funny how nobody is really missing Michael.
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 5:01 am Title: Chapter 4
Funny how nobody is really missing Michael.
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 4:57 am Title: Chapter 3
Deb tried. But Michael wasn't buying it. Michael and Brandon talk about your odd couple. LOL.
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2017 4:52 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow. Love how Ted takes up for Brian and tells Deb he's insulted that she would blame Brian without knowing the truth. Emmett's right on about Michael being delusional. Poor Ben. He's the one who is really hurting.
Date: Mar 24, 2017 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yes apologize for that yucky yuckiness! Ew ew ew...I cannot unseen that I'm my minds eye....oh well, I guess we all must be patient for the outcome, no pun intended. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
yeah, no unseeing/unthinking that grossness.. sorry lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2017 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
I can't breath lol. brain bleah stat
please keep the good work up
Author's Response:
thanks.. yeah the brain bleach wasn't enough for me lol
Date: Mar 24, 2017 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
BAHAHAHAHA! OH man! OK, so like you said, not enough brain bleach to take away that visual, BUT...I'm imagining the reactions from everyone around them, Brandon included (his ego being somewhat shattered) and have to laugh. Brandon's level of "cool" is probaly the only thing that kept him from scraming out Brian's name as well. LOL! Wait till word gets back to Brian and Justin. I'm sure that will just add another level of creepiness.
Try as theu might, they just won't ever get the attention they're hoping for from those they truly desire. If anything, I bet B&J will have a slightly green look about them.
Have to admit, I think I have the same shade of green myself after reading that last bit. thankfully lunch was a couple hours ago. The very idea of Michael and sex is just.....*shudders* UGH!
Poor Ben. He just doesn't deserve any of this. thankfully he has his friends to give support.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
any Michael sex is just yuck... can we just start thinking of him as a eunuck????
Date: Mar 24, 2017 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
EW, EW, and oh yea EWWW.
Author's Response:
normally I might be insulted by that, but I TOTALLY agree... it was just as, if not more, difficult to write it than to just read it LOL
Date: Mar 24, 2017 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
OK. I will never forget that scene. Michael 's ass . Gross!
Author's Response:
yeah, it was not easy to write... I started writing it last night and had to stop and finish today since it was so icky LOL
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2017 2:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
Michael et Brandon Brian contre Unis Ca va être explosif ! Vite la suite et il y a même du super sexe j'adore Merci Kathy
Author's Response:
Si heureux que vous en appréciiez ... juste quelques chapitres supplémentaires je pense
Date: Mar 23, 2017 12:02 am Title: Chapter 4
Whoop whoop! Gets better and better. On to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
thank you Miss Merlot!!!! :) <3
Date: Mar 22, 2017 5:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh man...this Brandon and Michael dating thing is equally disturbing, and hilarious! Brandon is suffering and is fated for more. Michael seems to be enjoying it a bit more than Brandon is mind you. Will he start to obsess over him now or will he keep Brian in his scope?
Had to laugh that it suddenly occured to the gang thatit's been so long since hearing from Michael. none of them seemed to miss him at all. While Michael is assuming that they are all wondering where he is, what's going on, they've only just realized he hasn't been around. LOL!!
Justin sticking up for Brian like he did was wonderful!! So needed to be said and that the others agreed as well, made it hit Deb even harder her continued sticking up for Michael and blaming Brian or forcing Brian to "fix things" has been so hurtful to him. Hopefully this will really open her eyes and force her to change things going forward.
Great chapter!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review Elaine.
Brandon does seem to be suffering more right now doesn't he?
I enjoyed that the gang has enjoyed their peace and quiet... the way it should be! lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2017 4:16 pm Title: Chapter 4
Well done. Everything worked well together with a natural feel.
Author's Response:
thank you... glad you enjoyed it... I hope everyone thinks it had a natural feel to it! :)
Date: Mar 22, 2017 4:35 am Title: Chapter 3
Fantastic, fic! Love this verse. Love Mikey, Linz, Deb being knocked down to where they belong.
Thanks for sharing your Fabulous writing gift!
JoAnn
Author's Response:
thank you for reading the story and leaving a review.
I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. A couple more chapters and it should all be done :)
Date: Mar 21, 2017 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
This beta is pouting but loving it! I shall take a deep breath and wait patiently...just about
Author's Response:
You won't have to wait long... so glad you are enjoying the story! You are such a great co conspirator! And I love the way your minds works in respect to our favorite to hate!!! Lol
Date: Mar 21, 2017 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
Nice to see that Deb is facing the reality of Michael's delusions. that she intends to support the whole family and not just blindly support Michael. That would not help him at all. would cause more damage.
Brandon is now throwing himself into the mix. Oh man...no good is going to come of this. He must be REALLY desparate if he's going to hook up with Michael!! LOL. A aprt of me is completely disgusted by the idea. I mean..EEEEEWWWWWWWWWWW!! but then there's this other part that thinks the ramifications could be pretty funny! I doubt he has any idea what he's in for.
Michael is thinking that Brian is going to be jealous. HAHA, if only he knew. The las line was spot on!!
Looking forward to what you have up your sleeve for these 2 as well as the rest of the gang. Will Michael be fitted with a straight jacket? lol
great job on this. Really glad you decided to keep it going.
Cheers
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Elaine.
I think Debbie had a blind spot for Michael's true actions, but in my world she would eventually see reason, so I hope she does learn!
Brandon and Michael are giving me the icky as well, but it popped into my head and I couldn't help myself lol
Date: Mar 21, 2017 1:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow! Michael and Brandon - now that's an unlikely pair. Why do I think this won't end well? Lol. TAG
Author's Response:
They popped into my head and I just ran with it... i'm giving myself the ick thinking about them LOL
Date: Mar 21, 2017 4:49 am Title: Chapter 3
Clueless Michael! Great story!
Author's Response:
I've always thought Michael was a bit delusional.
thanks for reading and leaving a review :)