[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2020 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked this. I liked Mel in the show but she took her feelings for Brian too far.
Date: Sep 26, 2018 7:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Congratulations on your first story. Although I have to ponder the outcome of the story. This just seemed a little OOC of Lindsay's charcter. Lindsay was always out for herself first. So, I'm having a hard time wrapping my head around the evts of this story. Your writing is very good though. Thank you for sharing.
Date: Aug 19, 2017 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1
I like that Lindsay stood up for what she really wanted. Great little story.
Date: Jun 10, 2016 3:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I didn't realize this was your first fic till I read the reviews here. Great job for your first attempt. If only . . . TAG
Date: May 07, 2016 8:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
love this 'how it should have happened' story - Brian walking out...perfect - Justin defending his man...outstanding, and Linds standing up for Brian and for herself - hip hip hooray!
love when a story fixes something that has always gotten under my skin - Linds comment that she had to start taking care of herself and not depend on others is just what the doctor ordered for me - nice touch
and Brian acknowledging needing Justin - the icing on the cake
nice story - thanks
Charle
Date: May 07, 2016 1:55 am Title: Chapter 1
I like this version MUCH better than the show!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much! This was my very first fic EVER LOL. I'm glad you enjoyed it.