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Reviewer: Lorna Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2017 2:48 am Title: Chapter 1 - 10:00 AM 12.16.2016

Chapter 0



Author's Response: hmmm...

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 4:27 pm Title: Chapter 24 - 9:00 AM 12.17.2016

I knew it.  Craig could no more have stayed away then Brian could.  It's still a shame that the snotty Kingsley's highjacked the wedding.



Author's Response: But it was a good outcome. Thanks for your comments.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 4:11 am Title: Chapter 23 - 8:00 AM 12.17.2016

Deb has nothing to worry about.  Neither does Brian, except for his daughter marrying a prince with flaming red hair.  Which means you are getting ahead of yourself.



Author's Response: LOL Worries are a part of this story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2017 9:38 pm Title: Chapter 22 - 7:00 AM 12.17.2016

Emmett needn't worry.  Everything is under control.  Molly will be the prettiest Bride ever and Bree with her dada's help will do fine.



Author's Response: All will be right in our world.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2017 3:50 pm Title: Chapter 21 - 6:00 AM 12.17.2016

So far everyone is looking forward to the wedding, except for maybe Craig.  Hopefully everything goes well.



Author's Response: We'll see. ;)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2017 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 20 - 5:00 AM 12.17.2016

Moment by moment play.  Everyone is too sleepy.



Author's Response: LOL

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2017 2:10 am Title: Chapter 19 - 4:00 AM 12.17.2016

Dreams could come true.  Brian's did.



Author's Response: Yes they can.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2017 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 18 - 3:00 AM 12.17.2016

Last moment thoughts by everyone, even Beau.  Who was rehearsing?



Author's Response: Hmmm.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2017 6:17 pm Title: Chapter 17 - 2:00 AM 12.17.2016

Poor Beau.  Missing all the Lane's men.  Owen missing Molly.  The wedding is getting closer and closer.



Author's Response: Lots of missing going on. Lol

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2017 4:22 am Title: Chapter 16 - 1:00 AM 12.17.2016

Poor Emmy Lou so worried.  Craig is being haunted by Brian Kinney.



Author's Response: Serves Craig right.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2017 3:01 am Title: Chapter 15 - 12:00 AM 12.17.2016

A look at what certain members of the family are up to.  Nicely done.



Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2017 5:17 pm Title: Chapter 14 - 11:00 PM 12.16.2016

Molly and Owen's wedding may not be what they had wanted but once they are married they will be very happy.  Craig doesn't stand a chance.  I see him at the wedding.



Author's Response: Hopefully Molly and Owen will have a great marriage.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2017 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 13 - 10:00 PM 12.16.2016

Hahaha!  Snookums?  Too funny.



Author's Response: LOL Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2017 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 12 - 9:00 PM 12.16.2016

What a nice look at what the various factions were thinking.  Sharon doesn't have a clue that her plans were not the best.  What will tomorrow bring?



Author's Response: Thanks, read on to see what's to come.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2017 3:28 am Title: Chapter 11 - 8:00 PM 12.16.2016

Who knew the rehersal meal would take so long.  Tomorrow will be better.



Author's Response: Let's hope so.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2017 3:45 am Title: Chapter 10 - 7:00 PM 12.16.2016

Owen's mother and grandmother are tyrants.  Planning to marry off Brian?  That is too funny.  Seth fits in perfect and I think we'll see Craig sooner.  After all Brian always gets his way.



Author's Response: Interesting group of people. LOL

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2017 5:29 pm Title: Chapter 9 - 6:00 PM 12.16.2016

Bree won the flower girl award for best flower girl.  Me thinks Craig is having second thoughts.  Molly meets Stacey little knowing that she is part of the Kinnetik family.



Author's Response: Bree is probably the best at anything she does. LOL

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2017 3:20 am Title: Chapter 8 - 5:00 PM 12.16.2016

Brian to the rescue again.  The show must go on and it will.  Munequita will be waiting for Bree once she's done her part.



Author's Response: LOL Love your Munequita comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2017 3:05 pm Title: Chapter 7 - 4:00 PM 12.16.2016

Seth and Jennifer.  A perfect pair.  I see another wedding in the future of the Sunshine Files.



Author's Response: You could be right. :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2017 3:56 am Title: Chapter 6 - 3:00 PM 12.16.2016

Things look like they are working out perfectly.  But are they?



Author's Response: That's the question. LOL

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2017 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 5 - 2:00 PM 12.16.2016

Did Brian ever get his tan?  Seth is the perfect answer to what ails Jennifer.



Author's Response: We're glad you think so.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 4 - 1:00 PM 12.16.2016

Brian had the answer to Emmett's delimma and it was perfect.  I think Craig will finally get the message.  Like father like daughter.



Author's Response: Maybe everything will work out.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 3 - 12:00 AM 12.16.2016

Molly and Justin are so alike.   One thing I know is that with Bree on his case, Craig wouldn't dare not show.



Author's Response: LOL Bree's a little powerhouse.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 12:46 am Title: Chapter 2 - 11:00 AM 12.16.2016

Poor Brian.  Everyone decide to interrupt his tanning session.  I expected someone to turn up with Bree.  I don't blame Molly, she has every right to be unhappy.



Author's Response: Mr. Fixit will be busy.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 1:30 pm Title: Chapter 1 - 10:00 AM 12.16.2016

Molly should have the wedding she and Owen want.  Justin will try to help but Brian will be the only one to make it happen.



Author's Response: You know them so well. LOL

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