[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2020 5:41 pm Title: Tuesday
I should be surprised at Deb showing up, but all in all I'm not and it was a good way to reunite Kiki with her father. Brian is right about the red flags, but I can't see him regretting this.
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2020 7:05 pm Title: Tuesday
Nothing like leaving us hanging !!!!! Well it looks like the Gang is all here ,including Uncle Vic Having fun reading this
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2020 6:46 pm Title: Sunday
This was a funny one.....poor Justin finding out what a true dog Brian can be.....Loved the pig !
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2020 6:33 pm Title: Princess
WOW David hurts Michael ! What a d@#$
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2020 6:25 pm Title: Rock of Ages
A different way for justin to meet a grumpy Brian LOL
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2020 1:32 pm Title: Tuesday
Great chapter. Mikey isn't one of my favorite characters so I love when he is in trouble or looks stupid. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2020 10:47 pm Title: Monday
How mean of David. Something should be done about him. Something tells me Brian isn't going to know what hits him once he beds Justin.
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2020 8:10 am Title: Monday
Great chapter. Usually don't feel sorry for Michael, but he didn't deserve that. Fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2020 7:40 pm Title: Sunday
Now this is going to be an enjoyable read.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Date: May 25, 2020 5:11 am Title: Sunday
sounds great
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2020 11:38 pm Title: Sunday
Read all chapters. Great story. Can't wait to see where you go from here. Glad you got your account back. Hope all is well with you.Wonderful writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Everything is going well. I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2017 3:20 pm Title: Princess
Oh no. David is behaving shamefully. No Portland for Mikey.
Author's Response:
This is a very anti-david and anti-ethan story. Thank you for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2017 3:14 pm Title: Rock of Ages
It's good to see Daphne is around and Carl too. It was nice that Justin was able to confide in Jake. I have a feeling that Brian won't let anything bad happen to Justin if he can help it.
Author's Response:
Brian does seem to always have a protective streak when it comes to Justin.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2017 1:40 pm Title: What Fresh Hell Is This?
Interesting start. Everyone's here. Now to see how Michael deals with Brian being attracted to Justin.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Michael is going to be Michael, lol.
Date: Feb 21, 2017 3:18 am Title: What Fresh Hell Is This?
Enjoying this so far. Can't wait for Ethan to get his. And it's really very small but there is a bit of sympathy for Michael. Less than atom sized mind you! Look forward to more.
MissMerlot
Author's Response:
He will and it will be wonderful. I'll take small sympathy for Micheal. Funny story my sister doesn't like Hal because he ranted about Sweet Tea in his stand up.
Date: Feb 21, 2017 2:34 am Title: Princess
Whereas I can understand David's anger about Michael's obsession with Brian, that still doesn't justify hurting Michael. Poor naive innocent Michael doesn't even realize that the move to Portland is probably just to isolate him....SMH He's already escalating. Good thing Justin was there!
Great accomplishment in making me feel a bit sorry for Michael here.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Oh wow, I feel honored that I accomplished that. Yes, Justin the hero. Thank you for reviewing.
Date: Feb 06, 2017 9:13 am Title: Rock of Ages
Poor Justin,who will expect that he got through with that?And that chin rat is just got away with it,and worst he managed to get a job where Justin where is currently..?I think Justin should tell uncle Dan what happen,bcoz i just don't trust the chin rat not to do anything to him..I'd like to meet this Jake though,seems like a great guy for a straight one..
And i wished Debbie would visit the camp site so she can meet her future named Carl...:)
Can't wait for the next chapter..
Author's Response:
When I was writing, I ranted some. My husband who doesn't really know anything about QAF walk by. He asked what I was complaining about, I said the Fiddler. He goes "Damn that Ethan." I thought it was funny. Poor Justin. I promise, chin rat will get what's coming to him. You do did give me an idea about Debbie though. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: Feb 02, 2017 11:12 pm Title: What Fresh Hell Is This?
Can't wait for more even if I want to push Michael in a lake for suggesting it!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Lol. I don't think it's going to be the joy Mikey had planned.
Date: Feb 02, 2017 1:50 pm Title: What Fresh Hell Is This?
Interesting for a start,i'd do anything to see Brian in camp site...This should be exciting...
Looking forward for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Oh yes. Brian is going to be having fun...whether he likes it or not.
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2017 11:27 am Title: What Fresh Hell Is This?
Interesting....i am excited to read more....love the start....waiting for more...thank u for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope people like this one as much as the last.