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Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2017 2:22 am Title: Inevitably Delightful

What happened to the updates that you said would be done?

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2017 2:10 pm Title: Sunshine's back in town

Fabulous.



Author's Response:

Why thank you!! <3

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2017 5:18 am Title: Inevitably Delightful

I'm loving learning what Justin is thinking. I'm wondering why the stopped talking? When is Justin going to see Brian? Is Brian going to be the last to know Justin is home? Is Gus going to be able to help Justin and get back together?



Author's Response:

2/3) Brian's chapter is going to be long, and I want to make sure it's perfect, so he will put probably be one of the last people Justin sees again. 1) He's not not talking, it's just that in the first chapter, Deb was being her normal chatty self and I did most dialogue in explainatory paragraph form, rather than direct quotes, and in the second chapter, he's standing on the street alone, so all of the stuff going on isn't being spoken aloud. He's still the same talkative Sunshine, there just hasn't been much talking opportunity. And for 4) Gus is in Canada with the Gals. While they may make a guest appearance, I don't really know how much of that side of the family is going to be actively in the story. 

 

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2017 11:44 pm Title: Inevitably Delightful

Reliving the first time he laid eyes on Brian and coming face to face with ... Emmett?



Author's Response:

Yes, he was thinking about the first night he met Brian and happened to be spotted by Emmett

Sorry for not being clear enough <3

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2017 11:43 pm Title: Sunshine's back in town

It's nice to know that Justin did well in New York.  Now to find out how Brian did without his Sunshine.



Author's Response:

Haha, I guess we'll see! I will say that Brian is going to be one of the last characters we see, simply because I want to make sure to think through what happens and make everything perfect. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: mcm Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2017 11:38 pm Title: Sunshine's back in town

Welcome :)  Like the way it starting. Keep at it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! You're very kind

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2017 3:03 pm Title: Sunshine's back in town

Awsome....start...😍😍😙😘😙



Author's Response:

Thank you! I really appreciate your kind words! 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2017 9:33 am Title: Sunshine's back in town

Loving the start of this!  Can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you so so much!! 

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2017 5:45 am Title: Sunshine's back in town

This is going to be interesting



Author's Response:

I hope thats a good thing!! Thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2017 4:00 am Title: Sunshine's back in town

Welcome to KD! So happy to have you posting here. Looking forward to more of your story! TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!

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