[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 8:39 pm Title: Chapter 15
Brian and Justin got me all teary-eyed I am so happy that he has remembered and that it was Justin who helped him to remember.
Of course not everyone will be so happy to hear that Brian has recovered his memories, Michael and Debbie are about to feel the wrath of Brian Kinney and it is not going to be pretty, I also hope Brian puts Lindsay and Mel in their place too, especially concerning Gus and the money Brian pays in support.
Not ready for this to end but I can't wait to read the next chapter :)
Date: Jan 23, 2017 7:10 pm Title: Chapter 15
Wonderful! What a way to end the chapter.
So happy Ben was there to dot the Is and cross the Ts. Deb and Michael will have some explaining to do if Brian ever wants to listen to them, which I hope not.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review;)
Date: Jan 23, 2017 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 14
What a plotting bitch!!!
Plausible explanations how she would have tried to get him for years.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that she was! Plotting and scheming was her major in college. Haha
Thanks!
Date: Jan 23, 2017 5:10 pm Title: Chapter 15
I am so GLAD Brian remembers Everything!!! As much as I like Brian being sweet, I still want him to have some snark and I missed his tongue in cheek smile! It just is not Brian with out those :)
Great chapter. I have really enjoyed this story Nadine! I cannot wait to read the epilogue!
Lisa
Author's Response:
Thanks, Lisa. Yeah, we loved a sweet Brian with a dash of snarkiness;)
Date: Jan 23, 2017 4:02 pm Title: Chapter 15
YES!!!!!! Brian remembers everything! Like I thought, Justin's story was the key to unlock Brian's memories. Some heads (and asses) are about to roll now!
I didn't review last chapter so I think I'd better do that now.... That desperate, dirty, deranged Doxy!!!!! She's been trying since college to trap Brian and now with Brian's amnesia, all of her carefully laid plans are back to square one. Good for her needy manipulative ass!! I hope she never regains her 'position' especially knowing that her manipulations of Justin behind the scenes are what cemented Brian and Justin's break up. What a GUTTERSNIPE!!! God I really want Brian to kick that bitch out of his life permanently. I know that there is only so much he can do considering Gus lives with her BUT I think he really needs to take her to court. Mel needs to give him back his rights even as she needs to take Michael's away after this new stunt. Lindsay really shouldn't be allowed to keep her hold on Brian using Gus. The bitch needs a life!
Speaking of which... YES!!!! All of the truth of Michael's machinations have come to the forefront...well all except ONE. Michael needs to be exposed regarding that accidentally-on-purpose overdose in his efforts to trap Brian to his side. But I am so glad that Ben arrived there! He had an answer for every single thing Deb and Michael tried to dispute. Once again, Justin is showing great restraint in not punching Michael in his mealy-mouth. I'm glad that Michael's been exposed for the lying sack of shit talking that he is and Emmett and Ted were able to fill in the blanks for Mel and that she-wolf Lindsay. 'Justin you don't have to be so smug in your position in Brian's life...' INDEED! Have several seats Lindsay and a dose of Shut the Hell Up!
I'm going to be so sad to see the end of this but so HAPPY to have the next chapter. This is truly an amazing story!!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Yeah, I kind of wanted to reveal the answers, one by one. I'm really happy you guys liking the story, it makes me feel warm and fuzzy:)
Thanks for the wonderful reviews and I truly appreciate the time you spent writing them;)
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 3:09 pm Title: Chapter 15
So we learn Justin's side of things. I don't blame Brian for getting hysterical when he woke and Mikey was there. Michael needs to get a grip. The doctor was a great help in deciding who Brian needed and it was Justin. So Brian remembers the same things he did two years ago and now knows the truth about everything or does he remember it all?
Author's Response:
It was Brian who chose Justin to clear the cobwebs. And yes, Brian remembers everything:)
Date: Jan 23, 2017 1:38 pm Title: Chapter 15
The ending of the chapter made me tear up. It was difficult, sweet, and so sad -- Brian and Justin never had it really easy. But, I'm glad he remembered while holding his Justin.
As for the hospital scene, I wanted Justin to put the dingbat out. His kindness kept him from getting street, lol. But Mikey always hangs himself doesn't he? What a terrible thing to do. When Justin told it I cheered. Punishment ideas: I'm not a fan of the electric chair so perhaps he can get the guillotine? He never uses his head anyway, lol.
Nice story, I'm sad to see it end.
Author's Response:
Haha that's kind of brutal, but I think Brian would want the punishment to be as simple as Michael witnessing him and Justin making a life together, a very great and successful life together. I think that's more painful to watch and lived by knowing the one you were obsessed with was living in merriment with his husband, something you could never have. That's a worse punishment than beheading him:)
Thanks!
Date: Jan 23, 2017 1:16 pm Title: Chapter 15
Yay.... I hoped the second accident would give Brian back all his memories... at least it prompted the history lesson which unblocked them....
Author's Response:
It sure did;)
Thank you so much for taking time to review.
Date: Jan 23, 2017 3:15 am Title: Chapter 14
I've been alternating reading this excellent story on three sites so my reviews are all over the place. Anyway, gives us a back story for Lindsay but I've always felt that Gus was her way to keep Brian in her life. Brian is not sorry he has Gus but I do believe he is sorry that Lindsay is his mom. It would be interesting to see a story where Gus was not LIndsay's. Anyway, I digress. Glad LIndsay is realizing she can't have Brian but I hope she improves her relationship with him as he will be around for a long time since he is Gus's dad.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I would like her to get her act together, Brian doesn't need to lose another friend.
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[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 2:42 am Title: Chapter 14
Lindsay like Michael let her obsession consume her to the point that she was ready to throw everything away to keep Brian focused on her.
Perhaps she and Mel should actually talk instead of avoiding the issues in their relationship, especially before this new baby comes, they both can't keep using Brian as a scapegoat or a new baby to avoid the problems.
I don't excuse the game she was playing and when Brian wakes up I hope she is ready to deal with the consequences of her actions.
I knew Michael was driving!
I also figured he played a roll in why Justin hadn't seen Brian the little weasel needs to be dealt with once and for all, so does Deb and the rest of the family who treated Brian like shit after he woke up instead of trying to help him and embrace the change.
I do wonder which Brian we will get when he wakes up?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, loved reading it:)
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 1:56 am Title: Chapter 14
So sad that Lindsay has been trying to attract Brian's attention since college. We learn how and when she learned she was a lesbian. That she tried to entrap Brian not once but twice is shocking. But in the end she got her head on straight. Now we just need to learn which Brian wakes up and how much he remembers.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: Jan 23, 2017 1:11 am Title: Chapter 14
Knowing her back story and hearing her memories, I still don't care about Lindsay... such a selfish bitch! If she REALLY loved Brian, she would have put him before her, and that was never even a thought for her!
Author's Response:
I think Mikey and Linds would be great roommate in psych ward. Both delusional. Haha
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Date: Jan 23, 2017 12:37 am Title: Chapter 14
The thought of Lindsay and Brian sleeping together is turning my stomach. Not that I don't think Brain could have hot hetero sex but with her just NO!!!
Please let us have more Brian/Justin/Gus in the next chapter. There's still so much to wrap up in the last couple of chapters.
Hugs,
Jessica
Author's Response:
I hope everything will be covered in my last 2 chapters:)
Thanks!
Date: Jan 22, 2017 9:35 pm Title: Chapter 13
Heartsick Brian is so sad, angry walking into a setup heartsick Brian kicked butt! He could have said and done more, they deserved it. These people are bottom feeders. I hate that he had an accident but it makes sense.
Learning how Michael manipulated everything I am even more angry. His ploy for sex and affection was pathetically cruel but risking Brian's health is inexcusable! I understand that Justin is stressed because of everything but I want him to kick Mikey's a$$. Losing Brian isn't enough. When he walked in and shut whiny down it was PERFECT!
I am so glad I am reading this, nice job!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review:)
Date: Jan 22, 2017 6:50 pm Title: Chapter 13
OMG, so right now niether of them know that they were both working their way back to each other at that point???? OMG
I hope when Brian wakes up he remembers everything from before and from the past 2 years... he needs to see how much he loved Justin then and even more now... and he NEEDS to remember what Michael and Debbie did!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, hun:)
Date: Jan 22, 2017 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 12
If it is Michael in Ted's car, I'm gonna pummel him myself!!!!
Of course, Brian is upset and hurt that Justin didn't tell him, but I'm so happy that he still wants to stay and when he found out about the bashing ... OMG, this accident has got to NOT make it worse!
Oh wait... Justin has POA!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:)
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2017 2:34 pm Title: Chapter 13
Now we learn the backstory from both parties and how Mikey managed to con Brian. When Brian comes to what will he remember?
Author's Response:
I'm hoping everything.
Thanks:)
Date: Jan 22, 2017 1:07 pm Title: Chapter 13
What an amazing key chapter!
We get to understand what happened 2 years ago. I don't think Justin should be worried that much; Brian wanted to fight for him, only he didn't know it for all this time.
Michael must be fuming and very afraid Brian will recover his memories because he will be in deep trouble and will lose everything that maters the most.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review:)
Date: Jan 22, 2017 9:58 am Title: Chapter 13
Wow thank you so much for filling in the pieces of the first accident.
I was so waiting for the scene with Justin and Gus. It was just too priceless that he started screaming "Daddy's Heart."
I hope Brian wakes up soon and with all of his memories in tact. It's the only way they will be able to move forward and heal.
Patiently waiting for the next update.
Hugs,
Jessica
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, J:)
Date: Jan 22, 2017 5:52 am Title: Chapter 13
OMG!! I am so freaking devastated reading about what happened between Brian and Justin. Misunderstandings, misleading information and two funky muskrats who interfered wherever they could to get what they wanted. Now I fully understand why Justin was loathe to bring it up and why Brian's brain chose to block out the emotional trauma that truly broke him. I really hope Brian comes out of it with all his memories in tact, including the present. Michael (and Debbie by default) really shouldn't be allowed to get away with their duplicity!
And speaking of the screeching spawn of Satan, he needed his ass well and truly kicked and then fpr it to be thrown in jail, let alone out of the hospital!! I admire Ted, Em and Justin's restraint- especially Justin’s!! But admittedly he had a more important person to worry about. As for that narcissistic bitch Lindsay, she really needs to pump her brakes too. Melanie should leave the bitch and take Gus with her since it's obvious that the harpy only cares about herself and her need for constant attention. I did get a whole lot of gratification though picturing the stunned look on her (and everyone else's) face! Not only the Pain-in-the-Ass Association (aka Michael, Lindsay and Debbie) fimd out that Brian wasnt lying about being in a relationship but that he is back with Justin. Jealous much? We can all safely bet our asses that they are!
Furthermore, it must have burned Lindsay's flat ass raw to know that Gus recognized Daddy's Heart and greeted him as if she were a nonentity. She again wasn't the COA; Justin was. Emmett and Melanie hugging Justin and Ted greeting him- even though it was from afar- were truly special moments. If the other three (not that Debbie her oversized Infant matter anymore) don't fall in line, at least Mel, Em and Ted can say they understand the way of things and are happy for B &J. Incidentally, so HAPPY Nathan showed up!!! I see some restraining orders being issued in the very near future to the PITAs.
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter (or more? Hint hoped and Fingers crossed LOL)!! This is such an amazing and engaging story!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, N. I really appreciate all the great reviews from you, I wish I can tell all the reviewers how much I appreciate their efforts in letting me know how they feel about the story. Thank you all so much!
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2017 1:41 am Title: Chapter 12
It never occurred to anyone especially after Brian got hurt to do whatever they could to find Justin?
Everyone was so busy listening to Michael and expecting Brian to be the same that no one thought about his feelings even after two years and they could see him pulling away?
So now Lindsay is showing her ugly side and trying to use Gus to exert her will over Brian?
They all need a swift kick to the Ass and after what just happened I think they are about to get it.
Ted's car but Michael or Lindsay behind the wheel??
Will Brian's memories come back???
And if they do the Shit is going to hit the fan and everyone is going to feel the Wrath of Brian Kinney. (If Justin doesn't beat him to it first!
Author's Response:
If someone from the gang had tried to look for Justin, they would have a hard time finding him. They don't know his new address, he changed his phone number and deactivated his emails. Now, if they tried to go to PIFA within a month from his disappearance, they might have find him there, well, most likely. But maybe they also let it go when it was obvious that Justin wanted to get away from his Liberty ave. friends. So.. It could be either way, really.
Thanks!
Date: Jan 21, 2017 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh cruelty, thy name is Nadine, lol. To leave us hanging after the last chapter left us dangling too? Thus is terrible. What a climax!!
I kind of understood Justin's reasons, but when Vic died I just felt he really should have spoken up. However, knowing their history and seeing them together now, I can appreciate not being willing to risk it.
Brian is going to have to do for Justin what he asked him to do and just understand like Justin did with Mikey and the 9 years. Speaking of which you did a great job of making the ick factor very clear in Mikey's scheme. Between the groping and Babe I want him punished. Deb get a very slight pass because of grief.
Ive enjoyed reading and the suspense!
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Author's Response:
Haha, I just want a little suspense. Thanks for the reviews, I appreciate it:)
Date: Jan 21, 2017 7:32 pm Title: Chapter 12
No words can fully describe how this left me feeling. Proud of Brian. Listening to Ben, Cynthia and Emmett. Getting real info. Disgusted still by the rest of the gang. Little to no forgiveness imo. Am heartbroken over what's happening now. Can only pray that hospital contacts Justin. That he has poa. I'm sure you have a few more twists up your sleeve.
Am so incredibly emotionally invested in this.
Seriously can't wait for more.
Cheers
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Elaine. I'm so happy to know you still liking the story:)
Date: Jan 21, 2017 3:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
These bitches must be crazy!!!!!
Author's Response:
:)
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2017 3:28 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh dear we are back where we started. Only this time Brian is willing to admit he and Justin are a couple. Can't wait for your next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Hun:)