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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2017 3:07 am Title: Chapter 9

Looks like Terry is on Justin's good side.  Maybe he can help?  Michael has just lost two friends, one by trying to tell Emmett that he won't be Ted's friend if Ted doesn't agree with him and the other by being a snook.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 8

Well now...this is interesting! Love this switch up. Mel is with Leda. I like that idea. Ben is now father to Mel's Annie. I like that as well. He'd be such a great father. Also good that in this he doesn't have HIV. Definitely makes for some change ups. Surprising that Mel is so supportive of Brian. 

Poor Gus. Must be so mixed up. I knows that his Mom, (Lindsey) is useless and seemingly uncaring as a mother save for how she seems publicly. He's simply a tool to get what she wants from Brian. That seems pretty obvious from what Gus has said as well as their interactions. He's not close to her, yet he's still hearingwhat she says about Brian. I hope he's willing to give Justin a chance.

Lindsey....well, I guess she's trying to discredit Brian as much as possible. Doesn't want him to have a life outside of her. (or Michael). Her giggling responses about his tricking were completly infantile. At least Justin is mature enough to not take in what others are saying and allowing his own impressions of Brian take a front seat. What's with her attitude towards Ben? Aaaaahhhhhhh. I guess she doesn't like being told she's a shitty mom? Typical. I look forward to seeing more of that. 

Not sure what to think about this Terry dude. I know he's Justin's agent, but he seems to be over stepping. Justin has already made a name for himself and could paint anywhere, and just show up for shows etc. something about him is niggling at me. How close is he to Lindsey? Is she trying to manipulate him somehow in order to have him interfere with him and Brian's relationship? Yea....not trusting him at the moment. Again, looking forward to reading more on that.

Thanks!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 7:04 am Title: Chapter 8

Bright WASP against jealous WASP: interesting match; too bad it's in front of Gus who doesn't deserve that.

I hope Brian will dump her sorry ass.

So glad Mel is back with Leda and Ben is the father.

 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 3:10 am Title: Chapter 8

Ouch take that Lindsay!!Brian should have dump your asses a long time ago together with some of the so called friends and family..
I like Mel's character in here,she seems not to let Lindsay get to her and she's with Leda is just a bunos..And Ben as a father to her kid is something new and even better than the whiny brat...

As for Justin,yap that's our little spitfire and ever so polite wasp twink..Good for you sunshine always dealing with that cunt in a deadly waspy way is better and more effective...

Thanks for updating😙

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 3:05 am Title: Chapter 8

Now that was an interesting twist.  Mel and Lindsay not together sounds good.  Ben being Anne's father beats Mikey and JR.  Now if only Gus likes Justin and isn't influenced by Lindsay.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 2:58 am Title: Chapter 8

Lindsay was her usual charming self I can see why Gus doesn't want  to be around her, Mel is with Leda and Ben is spending time with his daughter Anne?

Mel wants to be friends with Brian? Hello Bizarro Land lol

I love that Brian is standing  up for himself and fighting for his chance  at happiness instead of just taking the crap the others dish out.

Terry would be wise to remember that he handles the art but Justin is in  control at all times and if pushed it won't be too hard to find a new agent or a new friend.

Notice Lindsay didn't freak about the baby did she tune that out or has it not hit her yet?

Can't  Wait for the Next Chapter :)

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 2:32 am Title: Chapter 8

I like this Brian.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2017 2:23 am Title: Chapter 8

Loving this turn of events! Mel and Brian getting along; Justin putting Lindsay's pretentious ass in her place; Mel with Leda which is a MUCH better fit and Ben is a Dad!!! Not only that but the selfish cow is on the outskirts of her children’s lives and even they don't want anything to do with her! Poor Gus to have Lindsay’s DNA!!! If only there was a way to remove the strain...

I find disgraceful yet funny that she continually fixes her lips to point out Brian's 'lifestyle.' Yet the man owns two successful businesses while she is constantly chasing the temporary D*ck Sam's slinging. Talk about a trifling tramp!! Yeah, it's definitely time for Brian to drop some dead weight beginning with Lindsay and the Novotnys. I'm still on the fence about Emmett but Mel can definitely hang around. I'm wondering about which side of the issue Terry will fall on though. Hopefully he won't end up like another Jennifer In all this. I can understand looking out for his client's career but Justin does have the ability to see what he wants and how to get it. Perhaps he should keep that thought in mind when Justin finally calls him back.

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 3:23 am Title: Chapter 7

I like Justin's character,being so independent and blunt...Standing up against his mother is really new to our always polite and obidient son..I don't like much Jen here,it's like anybody can dictate her what to do,but listening and agreeing to Debbie is beyond me..Not the Jen we know and love..And so is Emmett,what happen to the bright queen who can always see through Brian's b""""""t??It's a good thing Ted didn't tolerate his being disrespectful toward Brian and let him know about what he felt about his bestfriend depending the whiny brat..Go Ted,i cheer for your loyalty toward Brian,you're the best one to get the title Bestfriend of him..

Loved it,thanks for sharing!!

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 12:36 am Title: Chapter 7

Loving the way Brian and Justin met and are willing to see where a possible relationship may take them despite of the baby.

Jennifer really needs.... a dildo, a man, a brain, ALL OF THE ABOVE but most of all she needs to find herself AWAY from the Novotnys. It's quite funny that she took Debbie and Michael fishing for information as interests. I do declare that Justin's financial independence makes him the most attractive of all.

As always, Michael makes me want to write a bulldozer into YOUR story to run his blank-brain butt over! How the hell does one arrange an orgy in someone else's house and then call mommy when the expected reaction doesn't go their own way? Yeah... Only Michael MITCH Novotny could do something so underhanded and stupid. Is there really any wonder why he is of no interest a self-assured man like Justin? I doubt very seriously that David dropped Michael because of Brian's interference. It was surely because of Michael's constant obsession with all things Brian and he no longer felt he should be a placeholder. In addition to that, Michael's intelligent-deficient and childish ass is beyond off-putting! Who the hell would want to be involved with a manchild who is still attached to his mother's tits?

Well now that Brian has removed himself from Michael's orbit, what will be the excuse that the asshole can't get a man now? As for the other idiot who can't let Brian go, Lindsay's going to turn into a green-vomit-spitting devil when she finds out that she isn't special anymore and that there is another blond who is keeping Brian's attention and having his baby through the good old-fashioned way. WHOO-WEE!! Brian, Justin, Terry and Daphne are about to really have their hands full. I hope Brian has an iron-clad agreement in place for Gus because we all know that Bitch ain't gonna be happy!

Definitely looking forward to the rest of this story!!

happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 12:31 am Title: Chapter 7

Well, the talks could have gone better.  But after trying to fix eggs and sausage I don't see how.  I am loving Ted in this.  Emmett, while sweet, is backing the wrong horse. Maybe he should stay with Mikey and Deb?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2017 12:17 am Title: Chapter 6

Deb and Jennifer are really, really acting like asses.  Emmett unfortunately is having foot in mouth desease.  Mikey is acting like a five year old.  Love how Molly tried to stop the impending doom.  Ted and Brian are being very supportive.  I'm sure Daphne felt like screaming.  And now it's official, Brian and Justin are in a relationship.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 7

He called their moms? Who does that?  Mikey you will never get Justin this way.  And planning an orgy is just wrong.  Brian has self control even if you don't believe that.

As for Jen and Deb, wow, I hope they see the light and cut the cord. Brian was right to threaten Deb.  Jen needs to listen to Justin she has no say in his partners. Emmett better wise up! 

I love that Justin is bitchy.  I love that he yelled at them and put them out.  Brian seems to know what he wants and Justin is it.

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 8:37 pm Title: Chapter 7

Emmett wake up and smell the reality Michael doesn't need a friend he has his mommy to fight all his battles, stop opening your mouth and open your eyes Michael isn't a friend he is a user.

Deb should no better then to take on Brian he knows the key to her closet  and if she keeps spewing her vitriol not only would I open it, I would invite what comes out to Family Dinner.

When are people in Glass house going to learn not to throw stones?

Jennifer is going to lose her children and any access to her grandchild if she doesn't remove her head from Michael and Debbie's Ass!

Treating Justin like a child is not the way to garner his respect and at this  point she is walking a fine line of being tossed to the sharks.

 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 8:23 pm Title: Chapter 7

Finally, Brian tells Deb and Michael part of what is on his mind. As it won't be enough, I can't wait what will happen next.

Jennifer is too much like Deb, but Molly is not going to stay silent.

Ted is to die for: honest and faithful, and so much more; a true "best friend".

Emmett is still digging; if he continues, the tide will arrive and he will drown in his own stupidity. Too bad because he's a sweet guy who doesn't want to take side. Sometimes, it's mandatory to do so.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 8:00 pm Title: Chapter 6

What a mess!!! I don't know who is the worse from Emmett, Michael, Jennifer and Deb?

Maybe Deb, because she is trying to disqualify Brian to push Michael forward.

And Emmett, he should have a zip on his lips...

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 7

Not sure if what Justin said to Jen will actually sink in or be at all effective. I think he's serious about not having a relationship with her, so she'd better listen up. He's right in that Deb and Michael weren't being inquisitive for the sake of getting to know Jen adn Justing etc, they're quite simply busybodies just like he suggested. Perhaps Deb was already planning to try to get justin and Michael together, especially knowing his background and current status.

Debbie needs a smack like she gives to Michael. to think she actually believes that brian wanted Michael. Admittedly, I shivered in revulsion at the thought....yick! She also needs to realize that Brian will spill the beans if she's not careful. I think however that he will just end things with both of them. He's had enough. Can't blame him, and they've brought it upon themselves really.

I want to shout from teh rooftops that I adore Ted in this! He's telling Emmett exactly what he needs to hear. Now we have to see if Emmett will listen. Like he said, his mouth keeps getting him into trouble, but there are ways to stop it. He just needs to start thinking first. Stop assuming the best of Michael and the worst of Brian. Ted standing up to Emmett, supporting Brian was most excellent. Emmett certainly wasn't expecting that at all. While justin will attempt to smooth things over, he'll only put up with so much. He's going to let Emmett know that he won't put up with any crap. Emmett can stay friends with Michael if he so chooses, but he can't bring Michael into his home, his life or his relationships.

Many truths brought home in this chapter. Now we get to see of anyone listens or actually believes what they've been told.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 7

Emmett stop digging you're about to hit China!!!

Really, Jen is that anyway to get Justin to let you back in?

That is what  I have come to expect from Deb and Michael SMH

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 6

I am really enjoying this! I've so wanted to read a fic where Emmett's tendency for gossip, and inability to stop what inevitably comes out of his mouth lands him in hot water. I have nothing against him!! I've read so many fics where he, without any intended malice, has gossiped without any repercussions. I love him dearly, but in those kinds of fics, I've always wondered why the issue was never persued. Thank you for feeding my need! :) I get that he's doing it innocently enough, that his intention in some cases is looking out for his friends, or just opens his mouth and stuff comes out, but if it were you or I (real life) there'd be trouble. I don't see him as the bad guy, just as someone who really needs to learn to filter, adn to think before he speaks. 

I KNEW Michael was going to call Jen and his mom. I just knew it! ARGH! Glad Justin kicked them out. I do want to know what happens now though, now that they know about the baby. How far will these three go? Will Jen risk losing all contact with her son (and grandchild) or will she stick with Deb and Michael in this? She has alot to loses here, but will she take Justin seriously? I get the feeling that Molly will try to get away from her as well if she continues.

Michael and Deb...I mean, they don't even know Justin, yet Deb has the audasity to reprimand him...to have expectations of him! ?! Unreal! Kudos to Justin for yelling at the three of them! Not sure what Michael will get up to, especially if he has Jen and Deb on his side pushing their own agenda. This is going to get incredibly interesting!!!! Can't wait for more.

I wonder What Lindsey is going to do now as well once she hears about teh baby. Her claim of having "Brian Kinney's baby" will no longer hold water. Her sense of entitlement for this will be gone now. Wonder if this will lead to an eventual battle over Gus? How will Mel be during all of this?

Terrific chapter. Fantastic story so far. It's amazing how with some stories I get so charged up emotionally! I eman I was reading this chapter and getting so utterly FURIOUS at Jen, Deb and Michael. I was getting so frustrated at Emmet as well, with hope that he learns something. Such fun when we get taken along for a ride when reading. Thansk for this!!

Cheers,

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 2:36 am Title: Chapter 6

Wow Debbie,Jennifer,&Michael are living in their own world..How can they just show up and told Justin what he should do..Jen should know better,or maybe she wants her own son to hate her again..And Debbie wow insulting Brian like he's not in front of them is just so low..I think B&J would better off away from them..And i don't like Emmett in this one..When they move in together hoping they wouldn't let anybody knows where only Molly and Daph could know...

Excited for the next chapter,Thanks for sharing!😙

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 2:20 am Title: Chapter 6

Okay all caught up and I am wondering why Emmett is still in the house because he needs to be on the outside with Jennifer, Deb and Michael.

Feeding into Michael's behavior is the reason  why Justin is getting upset when he shouldn't, Emmett better start apologizing and groveling or he can walk his Ass home. (Emmett is working that nerve for me)

Jennifer needs to go get laid so she can stop interfering in Justin's life before he decides to get a restraining order against her, unlike Michael he doesn't need to hang on his mama's leg to get attention, Justin is strong enough to stand on his own so she better wake  up or view her first grandchild through a photo taken from ten feet away.

Great they are in a relationship!

Boo the Idiots are pushing on that button that is going to make Brian and Justin snap and it will not be pretty, but it will make the fourth of July look bland in comparison.

So looking forward to Lindsay joining this show and badmouthing Brian heaven knows we haven't heard enough about that, will Mel be coming abroad aswell?

My goodness the next nine months are going to be very interesting:)

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 1:54 am Title: Chapter 6

Boy you can really make me hate Michael😄 WTF Deb and Jen??? Another great chapter.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2017 12:57 am Title: Chapter 4

So much for hiding the relationship.  Seriously, Mikey should have paid attention they had already met.  And trashing your best friend is a terrible way to start a relationship.  Frankly, Emmett is ticking me off too.  If Brian is so bad then leave him alone.

Judging from the kiss Justin is squarely on Brian's side.

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2017 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 5

Boy, Mikey is on a roll, can't wait how he will react to Brian and Justin having a baby.

Fabulous update, thanks for sharing.

Looking forward to MORE!

JoAnn

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2017 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 5

Emmett has really shot himself in teh foot in this one. He's going to have to really make amends if he wants a real friendship with Brian and even Justin may question him now. He went about it all wrong. It's fun seeing Emmett in a different light. I know he always means well, but he does have a propensity for gossip and that tends to lead to trouble. I'm curious how far he'll go now. I know Ted has called him on it as has Brian (and rightly so) He's even admitted to the fact that he behaved like and ass. Will he change his tuen now that he knows that Justin is pregnant?

Michael is in for alot of heartache. First his unrequited love for Brian and now Justin. neither will ever see him as more that a friend, and even that will be questionable. Michael seems to be hinting that Brian and he really aren't friends, so we'll see how far he's going to go in any plans against him.

Terrific chapter.

Cheers

Elaine

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