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Date: Feb 20, 2018 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 17

I love thatMel admitted that Brian is a good father. It was time. 



Author's Response: It took her a long time to come to that conclusion.

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Date: Feb 20, 2018 9:43 pm Title: Chapter 16

I'm about to give up hope on Michael. Joan and Jennifer in one car? Brian should be scared lol. 



Author's Response: lol Wait and see.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2018 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 15

Oh Michael. Can you try to not be jealous just once in your life? It's exhausting. 



Author's Response: Interesting, because I find Michael exhausting too.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2018 10:52 am Title: Chapter 14

I can understand Bobby's concerns and I'm glad he and Rachel talked it out. 



Author's Response: Rachel doesn't play a big part in our story, but she is always there when needed.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2018 10:43 am Title: Chapter 13

This whole Trevor thing creeps me out. I'm with Cynthia.  I don't trust him. 



Author's Response: You'll have to see what Trevor is about.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2018 10:16 am Title: Chapter 12

That was very brave of Gus. Most teenagers would have been too scared or embarrassed to say something. 



Author's Response: Gus takes after his father in that respect.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2018 9:08 am Title: Chapter 11

I like Owen. All this is new to him but he seems to be very open minded. 



Author's Response: Owen is a good head.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2018 8:31 am Title: Chapter 10

I think Brian's explanation of love is pretty accurate. And Gus is right. Adults are weird. Personally I think it comes from all the expectations we have, in ourselves and others. It changes how we behave. 



Author's Response: Interesting comment.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2018 9:28 pm Title: Chapter 9

JR seems so shy. I hope her time at the cottage will help her. 



Author's Response: She has two high powered mothers, so it's hard to stand out.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2018 5:15 pm Title: Chapter 8

OMG There are two ways this could go. They either laugh or are mad at Brian. I love that the girls want Gus to stay with Brian. 



Author's Response: You'll have to read which way it goes. lol

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Date: Feb 19, 2018 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 7

The mural sounds amazing. And I'm not surprised by the fireplace at all. 



Author's Response: There is a tradition for this.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2018 11:55 am Title: Chapter 6

I'm glad Owen stands behind Molly in her decisions. It makes for a good marriage. 



Author's Response: That's so true.

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Date: Feb 19, 2018 10:28 am Title: Chapter 5

It's so cute that they can't sleep without the other. Bree doing gar gar on her own is just adorable. 



Author's Response: We try to make Bree as adorable as we can. lol

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Date: Feb 19, 2018 10:15 am Title: Chapter 4

I have seen those houses on TV. I would have loved to have one as a kid. 

Kudos to Molly for telling Craig what she thinks. It's his own fault but I'm sure he doesn't see it that way. 



Author's Response: Wouldn't we all have loved one of those houses?

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Date: Feb 19, 2018 10:06 am Title: Chapter 3

I'm pretty sure that playhouse will be the best playhouse ever. Bree will be ecstatic. 



Author's Response: Only the best for our little girl.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2018 9:50 am Title: Chapter 2

The quality time for Brian and Gus is great. It helps to strengthen their bond. 

You made me hungry by the way. Now I want some cupcakes. 



Author's Response: lol The power we have.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2018 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

What is wrong with Melanie. She must have mood swings. That's the only explanation. 

I love that Brian and Gus are meeting Simon and Ken. 



Author's Response: Melanie is kind of a loose cannon.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2017 1:47 am Title: Chapter 20

Love this description of the boys' return to Babylon! They still got it, huh? And what awesome parents - taking Gus out for his first taste of clubbing, but making sure he was safe at the same time. Excellent parenting skills, imho. TAG



Author's Response: Thank you, we thought so too.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2017 12:54 am Title: Chapter 7

I'm so jealous of Briana's 'Wendy House'. What a lucky girl. Lol. TAG



Author's Response: Only the best for our Miss Bree.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2017 2:57 pm Title: Chapter 20

Memories, memories.  A last time for the gang.  But things are best at home.



Author's Response: Home is where the heart is.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2017 2:34 pm Title: Chapter 19

Mikey got his time with Brian.  And Emmett took advantage of Brian's generosity.  But a fun time will be had by all.



Author's Response: Hopefully a fun time.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2017 2:22 pm Title: Chapter 18

This chapter is basically a review of Brian's life.  Brings back memories, all good, except for when Joanie tried to scuttle the auction.



Author's Response: I'm glad they brought back good memories.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2017 1:55 pm Title: Chapter 17

Melanie really doesn't come off good.  She and Michael both need some changing.  It could take years.  Gus and Raymond could be the start of something new.  



Author's Response: Michael and Melanie may be two of a kind.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2017 1:30 pm Title: Chapter 16

Michael thinking that Brian needs is permission to make friends is sad.  He needs to grow up like all his friends.  Joan and Jennifer are becoming close.  It's hard to believe.



Author's Response: We do have some minor miracles in our story, but Michael isn't one of them.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2017 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 15

It was a given that Ken and Emmett would get along.  Michael on the other hand is determined to be a wet blanket.



Author's Response: Isn't Michael always?

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