Date: Feb 03, 2019 2:31 pm Title: Chapter 40: Tuesday, December 12th
thank you for update
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: Feb 03, 2019 11:34 am Title: Chapter 40: Tuesday, December 12th
The joy of reading �’�😠*dreamily .....
It reminds of my time of NET paper, all same. You nailed every descriptions, every moment, students anxiety, exam instructions.
"You should make a beeping, backing up like that." So do Ted leering at Justin like that. ;) . Love Syd's name game, the whole diner scene , group of them playing it. Micheal's stupidity is given. That underwear should given him clue that Brian & Justin are still together doing it. Btw Thanks David. I'm not gonna eat dumpling now. Yupp!.
Brian should really stop Micheal annoying behave towards Justin. In Qaf directors were like trying to hide Micheal's every wrong behaviour. As at many times Micheal was one to blame.
I love Brian name for Justin "Breathtaking" â¤. One of the name I love Ted's given "Territerial" for Brian is for Justin. Enjoyed it all very much.
You and Ted. :D :D Both proceeding dreamily... :D The 'joys' of those all-important, do or die, standardized tests are really relatable, right? Thanks for letting us know we nailed it. The diner scene was a real hit with our readers. Michael is offended that you don't think he'd be better for Brian than the blond wonderbutt. :P You can look forward to at least one more round of the one-word description game. We may even solicit our readers' input, so keep an eye on the Facebook groups. We're so proud of our favorite brunet stud for 'breathtaking.' Talk about nailing it. :D :D And Ted really did have the last word. Thanks for reviewing, Pushpanjali. :) Our wonderful readers motivate us to keep writing. A snippet for the next chapter is available in the FanDoc if you want to take a peek. ~ KaBrynn
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[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2019 10:30 am Title: Chapter 40: Tuesday, December 12th
I loved this chapter he is very funny. The Dinner game was perfect with Michael still so silly. I hope that all will succeed their SAT. I also liked that Brian accepts that Justin had put the alarm and therefore he is not responsible for the burglary. And for the doc Tricky fan there is no automatic translation so it's hard for me to understand but I'm waiting for the updates and I'm never disappointed for everything that happens.
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting us know you enjoyed this latest installment, Marie-france. Maybe you can copy from the FanDoc into Google Translate to get a rough translation? We know the translations sometimes don't make sense; perhaps Alois would be willing to help if you get stuck. That's what a beta is for, right? :P
The diner scene was a hit with all our readers. There will probably be at least one more round of the one-word description game. Maybe Michael will excel? :D :D
It's amazing what three little words - I believe you - can accomplish. We're proud of Brian for reaching the point where he does believe Justin.
Thanks for reviewing. :) It motivates us to keep writing.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Feb 03, 2019 7:46 am Title: Chapter 40: Tuesday, December 12th
I’ve really enjoyed this story so far but especially this chapter. Funny, sweet, sexy... all my favorite things!
Author's Response:
We're made up that you're reading and enjoying our story. :) It looks like we have a few favorite things in common. :)
Thanks for commenting!
~ KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2019 4:44 am Title: Chapter 40: Tuesday, December 12th
Same as the queen said ****
"Wow." Emmett fanned himself with one hand. "You almost made me combust, without removing a single stitch of clothing."***😉
That was a Juicy , Sexy , Erotic Update ...😉😉😃
Game was entertaining ..mikey is still pathetic like always no surprise there... but he sure is a joker of the gang ..so amusing.
Thank you for the Superb update.
Author's Response:
'Juicy' is the word of the day. :D :D
Our favourite queen's reaction is spot-on, as usual.
Thanks for the fun comments, Navneet. :) A snippet for the next chapter is up in the FanDoc if you want to take a peek.
~ Karynn
[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2019 2:31 am Title: Chapter 40: Tuesday, December 12th
This is literally me every day....Spot on..😅😅😅
"Ugh, I swear every single pore in my skin is sweating," Sydney complained, wiping off her damp palms on her uniform skirt as the queue inched forward.
"I know, right?" Daphne agreed. "I'm so freaking nervous. If my results on the SAT are bad, my mum will kill me. My dad might even help-"
"How do you think they would do it? Chop you up and feed you to a pack of wild dogs?" the blonde pom-pom girl inquired, gruesome relish dripping from her words.
Justin shivered, no longer bored. He was going to have nightmares if Syd kept this up. He didn't want to say anything and look like a wuss, though.
Author's Response:
It's really relatable, right? It's happened to all of us. :D
~ KaBrynn
Date: Feb 03, 2019 12:51 am Title: Chapter 40: Tuesday, December 12th
So much happening in this chapter.
First, glad the Sats are out if the way. I know they all did well. Nice of OG to make those gifts for Justin.
The game in the diner was fun. Doesn't Brian really know how smart Justin is. Too many things surprise him.
Michael, stupid as usual. Great that Sydney picked up the invested comnent.
Sex as always...🔥 🔥🔥
Author's Response:
Justin, Sydney, and Daphne are all heaving sighs of relief that the SAT is done and dusted. They could relax if it weren't for those pesky finals... Well, and if they didn't have to wait weeks for their results...
OG's a gem and she holds her own with Sydney. :D
Brian has a good idea how smart and talented Justin is, but there are always new things to discover... like all the meanings for 'juicy.'
We're glad the closing scene heated you up too. :P
Thanks for commenting, Sherry!
~ KaBrynn
Date: Feb 03, 2019 12:42 am Title: Chapter 40: Tuesday, December 12th
Holy shit! Justin certainly did make Brian cum undone didn't he? Love it! I'm always up for a good rimming! Oops, did I share too much? "I believe you", that's all it took.
I like that game! Gonna have to try it in my next party setting with friends. We, as QAF fans & fans of this particular fanfic could participate too. That would be fun!
Michael, Michael, Michael.....you poor idiotic fool.....give it up already but seriously, Brian needs to tell him to stop with the fucking insults. Ugh, it's so annoying that he's not defending Justin.
Boy! Did I need this chapter, thank you ladies! Brilliant
Author's Response:
"Ssh!" Brian hisses. "There's no such thing as too much when it comes to rimming."
It's amazing what three words can accomplish. :P
We borrowed the idea for the one-word game from Amy Richards’ post in the QaF U.S. Addiction group. Another instance of no such thing as enough. :D :D We'll have to see what we can come up with so our readers can participate in the next round.
"What are you talking about?" Michael sneers. "I'm way better for Brian than the blond muppet."
Thanks for the entertaining review, Glo! Check out the FanDoc for the teaser for the next chapter.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Feb 03, 2019 12:01 am Title: Chapter 40: Tuesday, December 12th
One thing Michael will never understand is that Brian likes Justin for his witty and smart mind maybe more than for his responsive and willing body.
Ted and Ben are witnessing that and they can see that the attraction is not limited to the physical part.
The "bug" gag is very funny. The game is very revealing as how people are seeing Justin and Brian. Michael's answers were both hilarious and woeful, especially after the rules were explained at least twice.
Author's Response:
Thanks for being the first to review the latest chapter, Claire. :)
Michael is pouting. He's sure he's wittier and smarter than Justin, never mind a whole lot more willing. :P
Fahad really knows how to twit Michael - and he's willingly aided and abetted by Justin and Harry.
The teaser for the next chapter is up in the FanDoc if you want to take a peek.
~ KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2019 3:03 pm Title: Chapter 39: Monday, December 11th
Excellent chapter ... Cyn and Ted love teasing Brian ...Same with Jus ...vic never misses a chance to make Justin Blush ...that entertains us so much..lol..we live through it only.
Thank u for the Fabulous Update...looking forward for next update.
Author's Response:
Vic saved the day with BOB 2.0. :) And Justin immediately made good use of the toy. :)
Brian frowns, grumbling, "Who the fuck is Bob?"
Thanks for all the wonderful reviews, Navneet. :) We're working on the next chapter, although it will be a while before it's finished. In the meantime, a teaser is available in the FanDoc, if you like to take a peek.
~ KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2019 2:09 pm Title: Chapter 39: Monday, December 11th
Had to stop here..cant stop laughing_____He started giggling as he envisioned a trick opening Brian's medicine cabinet, finding the Butt Paste, and running stark naked out of the loft, spreading a rumour that the Stud of Liberty Avenue was really a bottom boy. Not that anyone would believe the trick, of course, but it was a funny image.____
ME GIGGLING LIKE A FOOL HERE😅😅😅😅😅😂😂😂😂...my brother is thinking i am laughing at him ...he is glaring at me...😅😅😅😜😜😜😞😒
Author's Response:
That Butt Paste is real! Google it and you'll laugh even harder. :D Share the images with your brother! :P
~ KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2019 1:53 pm Title: Chapter 38: Sunday, December 10th
Fuh gah ....OMG...OMG...THIS CHAPTER was Absolutely Fuh gah Amazing ...LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVEEEEEEEEEDDDDD IT.
This part was Adorable and so cute (don't tell Brian 😉 please)👇👇
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"I think he misses your long hair, Sunshine," Brian whispered into Justin's ear. "So do I," he breathed out, the words barely audible.
"Yeah?" Justin turned his head, a shit-eating grin on his face.
Twat. Brian could almost hear the words whirling around in the blond's head - You sooo care about me. Brian Kinney cares about me.😘ðŸ˜
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This one was hilarious 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
"It's my boyfriend!" Michael instantly shot off the couch and trotted over to the door.
The blond snickered, a Cheshire Cat-like grin on his face.
A beat later, Debbie started laughing. "Sunshine, you did that on purpose!"
The little shit, Brian mused admiringly.😅😅😅
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This one...omg i literally had a spoon in mouth full of Halwa ( sweet pudding) thank God it was not liquidy i would have thrown up.
***Gag me with a spoon***
Gus is damn adorable just like his Dada (don't mention this to Brian pls)
At last the sex ....finally ..😙😙😙😙😙😙😙
After centuries it happened and that too both ways😉😉😉 ...huh...took me by surprise ...i was not expecting it...so soon.....NOT...😄😄
U GUYS AMAZE ME EVERYTIME..HATS OFF LADIES.ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘ðŸ‘â¤â¤â¤â¤â¤â¤â¤â¤â¤
Author's Response:
Yes! A fuh gah amazing chapter! The best rating ever.
Brian's still busy trying to figure out who in the heck that BOB fucker is, so he's not paying attention to us. :P
That blond boy is really, really sneaky... :D :D He's taken a leaf out of Debbie's book. :D
Yikes! You wouldn't want to waste halwa on those gag-inducing endearments.
"What was that?" Brian looks around alertly. "Who'd you accuse of being adorable?" *pregnant pause* "Oh, my Sonnyboy. That's okay. The little blond twat is kinda adorable too."
B/J 'live' sex for the first time since the first chapter! Woohoo!
Thanks for the wonderful comments - and for making us laugh - Navneet. We love hearing about what the highlights of the chapter were for you.
~ KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2019 10:27 am Title: Chapter 37: Saturday, December 9th
Ok..so finally got the time to read something ..the first one i chose TB ...had to refresh my memory so started from here...A jealous Brian is damn funny and adorable (don't tell him this 😉)
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Justin looked over at Brian, who laughed, pretending to be amused by something Emmett had said.
The nelly queen raised his eyebrows. "Give the man an Academy Award," he joked. "That was some acting."
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I could not stop laughing ..u guys are so ridiculously talented.
Author's Response:
Aw, we're honored that you chose to catch up on TB first, now that you have time to read. :)
Brian never hears any of the things we say about him. Especially in regard to jealousy, which he absolutely, never ever does.
We figure one of these days someone's gonna give us an Academy Award for our amazing writing. :D :D
Thanks for going back and leaving another review for chapter 37, Navneet. You know how much we hate receiving multiple reviews for the same chapter, right? LOL
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 26, 2019 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 39: Monday, December 11th
Can't wait for the SAts to be over and winter break to begin. Sick and tired of Dixon ad all his bullshit.
DC is everywhere isn't he? Not surprised McFrland is his cousin.
Nice of Vic to replace BoB, after all it was his nephew that caused for it to be replaced in the first place. Vic should figure out a way to get Michael to repay him. Ha!
Brian and Justin need to move things along. Pick up the pace of getting back together
Author's Response:
You and Justin and the girls - everyone's ready for the SAT and finals week to be over.
DC does get around. :D Where will he pop up next?
BOB 2.0 is a hit, right? :P Whether or not Vic has a ‘talk’ with Michael, he and Harley did a pretty good job of making Mikey squirm in the last chapter.
"Yes! Exactly that!" Brian firmly concurs. "Get that blond boy back to my bed, now."
"Are you ready to tell Justin how you feel?" the authors ask. "You don't have to use those three dreaded words. There are others that will do, you know."
Silence. We'll have to see what happens...
Thanks for commenting, Sherry. :) Btw, you've submitted the 300th review, which means you have a prize to claim. Karynn will be contacting you about that. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 23, 2019 8:41 pm Title: Chapter 38: Sunday, December 10th
Eww! How hard up is Michael that he'd even touch someone else's sex toy? Poor BoB. Poor Harley.
Twink retrieval is going well Brian. It's just going to take a bit longer.
I loved Brian and Gus. No socks. Like father like son. Brian hates wearing them. And Gus' new word, yeah Mel's at fault for that. It was such a nice peaceful afternoon until Mikey and the gang showed up. Justin gave back exactly what the mama boy deserved.
Living apart or together, their sex is always always hot.
Author's Response:
It's difficult to imagine what Michael could have been thinking when he BOB-napped Justin's toy, but 'irrational jealousy' probably comes the closest. Thankfully, Vic's right - Justin doesn't need to worry that Michael would have used the toy. Okay, enough of that brain bleach-worthy topic. Bleurgh.
"This whole patience thing is getting old," Brian mutters. "As long as it ends with the blond boy back in my bed, though, I guess I can hold out a little longer..."
Gus really is a chip off the old block, huh?
The heat factor is always off the charts with those two men. :)
Thanks for reviewing, Sherry. :) We were made up to hear from you.
~ KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2019 9:30 am Title: Chapter 39: Monday, December 11th
The librarian is really nice thankfully that Justin has her. The other teachers are horrible Detective Wen needs to come back. I love Daphne Sydney and Justin more and more. And Vic really BOB 2.0 hahaha
Author's Response:
Some of Justin's other teachers are pretty decent people, if not as special as Frau Rose - she's a real gem. :) Unfortunately, Dixon, Perkins, and Bauer make all the other faculty look bad. Grrr. The administration and faculty had better watch out if Wen has to return to St James!
Aren't Justin, Daphne, and Sydney a hoot together? We're glad you're enjoying them.
BOB, in his new incarnation as BOB 2.0, remains a fan favorite. :D
Thanks for reviewing, Marie-france. :) We've put a snippet for the next chapter in the FanDoc, if you want to take a peek.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 20, 2019 9:45 am Title: Chapter 39: Monday, December 11th
*in Brian voice " I'm glad you updated. Thanku, its always a pleasure to read more of this fic."
I love their intimacy. Hot! Hottest couple ever! excited for Brian's next move of his OTR.
I wonder if Mikey ever knew about Brian bottoming for Justin, more than often, hard in nights. Micheal's delusion a** would be farting probably. 🤔*ðŸ˜
Aside from Brian & his *Operation Twat Retrieval, one of my fav. is Justin, Daph, Sydney scenes. Also the snowy atmosphere described during Justin's walking. Hugs to Deb n Vic for taking care Justin (SAT, Bob) .
Kudos for your writing!â¤
Author's Response:
Ooh, Brian is being super polite. He must want us to convince Justin to move back in with him ASAP... yesterday, preferably. :D
OTR? What the fuck is that? Brian wants to know. My one true rump, maybe? Yeah, yeah, keep believing that, big guy.
That might be too mild a reaction if Michael ever finds out about Brian bottoming for Justin, but it would certainly raise a stink. lolol
Thanks for letting us know what you enjoyed most about the chapter. It's great how each reader almost always has one fave that is different from everyone else's - in this case, the snowy atmosphere. :)
Thanks for reviewing, Pushpanjali. We got a kick out of your comments. :) The teaser for the next chapter is available in the FanDoc, if you want to take a peek.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 20, 2019 2:39 am Title: Chapter 39: Monday, December 11th
Okay question: why on earth would Justin put a condom on his own personal sex toy? Lol
I guess it was too much to expect B/J actually together in 2 chapters huh? I thought Brian was picking up Daph & Justin from school?? Did I miss something?
Author's Response:
He didn't want to have to clean off the dildo before using it - probably had residue from the plastic casing, and he couldn't know how it had been handled when it was packaged. :D Hence, the condom.
Pay attention, girl! You must've been too busy salivating over Justin and Brian's reunion in chapter 38 (Sunday) to realize that he'll pick Justin and Daphne up on Tuesday, after the SAT. :P Just kidding - we're forever fact checking ourselves.
Thanks for reviewing, Glo. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 20, 2019 2:15 am Title: Chapter 39: Monday, December 11th
Thanks for update
Author's Response:
You're welcome. :) Our pleasure.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 19, 2019 9:57 pm Title: Chapter 39: Monday, December 11th
So happy to see a new chapter!
I love this part, revealing how deep Brian is missing Justin: "It wasn't only the sex that he missed either; it was the intimacy of sleeping together, waking up with one of them wrapped around the other, skin to skin. Heck, he even missed the less desirable elements - pointy elbows jabbing him, morning breath, poorly-timed farts, the smallish teenager taking up most of the bed so that Brian almost ended up on the floor."
And BOB 2.0! What a great gift!
St James is such an awful place, except for the library.
Author's Response:
Karynn takes a bow for Brian's revelations about how much he misses Justin. When Alois (our beta) read that, she commented: LMAO! Missing morning breath... Brian, you’re officially insane 😂
Vic really came through with BOB 2.0, and our blond immediately put it to good use. We wonder whether the noise filtered all the way downstairs for Vic to enjoy. :P
At least Justin now has Sydney as well as Daphne in his corner. In addition, of course, to Frau Rose. Most of his other teachers are decent people, but Dixon (and Perkins and Bauer) make all the faculty seem suspect.
Thanks for reviewing, Claire. We're already working on the next chapter.
~ KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2019 9:25 pm Title: Chapter 39: Monday, December 11th
So much goodness, where to start. Love the Syd, Daph, and Justin parts. Love the librarian, hopefully Justin will be able to award her with a new computer when he graduates. Everything about the bookstore was enjoyable especially when DC showed up. Vic was a favorite with replacing BOB with BOB 2.0. I'm curious was the last part a dream sequence or was Brian really there?
Author's Response:
Thanks for once more being the first to review, Phyllis, and for letting us know which parts of the chapter you liked the most.
Justin may not get Frau Rose a computer, but there's no doubt she's his favorite teacher or that he's a favorite students of hers. :) GDocs keeps pushing to change 'collage' to 'college,' so maybe a computer isn't out of bounds as a gift. :D
The last scene was Justin fantasizing. He must've done a little too good a job of blurring the line between reality and fantasy.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 05, 2019 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 38: Sunday, December 10th
Please update, love it
Author's Response:
We're thrilled you've discovered and are enjoying our story. :) We're working on the next chapter now, but it will be a while before it's ready.
Thanks for commenting. :) Happy New Year!
~ KaBrynn
Date: Dec 28, 2018 3:43 am Title: Chapter 20: Tuesday, November 21st
Hmmm...was just rereading the part about not getting any worse than Dubya. Guess we all know now just how much worse it can get! 😆
Author's Response:
I (Karynn) had to scan this chapter to remember Vic's comment about Dubya. Vic probably would have expired on the spot if he'd known how much worse it actually would get.
We're thrilled that you're enjoying our story enough to reread parts of it.
Happy New Year!
~ KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: Dec 25, 2018 10:14 am Title: Chapter 38: Sunday, December 10th
Thank you very much for this Christmas Gift Ladies! It's a long chapter but it's amazing. I like Brian and Gus. So Michael is really behind the disappearance of BOB he is so childish even Gus does better than him. I hope Vic is not too sick. Justin can tell him his reunion with Brian it will please him LOL. Happy Holidays for you two!!
Author's Response:
Thank you in return for the gift of a review, Marie-france. <3 We're thrilled you're still following our story.
You're not the only one to comment that Gus is more mature than Michael - a sad state of affairs for the thirty-year old. *snicker *
We're all pulling for Vic to get better; he may just need to have his meds adjusted. You could be right, though, that hearing about Justin and Brian's reunion - in detail - would perk him up even more. :P
Happy New Year!
~ KaBrynn
Date: Dec 25, 2018 8:49 am Title: Chapter 38: Sunday, December 10th
A Christmas joy reading. Loved it.â¤
Thankyou Harley for spitting on face of the BOB-napper Micheal , he been always shitty to Justin through series. More I watch, the less i like him. Mikey is 31 yrs closet brat don't know when to shut up...badmouthed behind Brian. His nature is such manuplating.
Vic don't justifies on Micheal's behalf. Let Micheal face his f**kups. I bet Micheal is behind the robbery(also in show cause Justin been new, doesn't mean careless, directors & writers didn't cleared that robbery matter) . Truth will come out, it can't be hidden
Love the Father-Son time, Justin nearly blushing all over Gus, Harley, Vic & Deb banterings. Gus's "Dad Fuh Jusshhin" sounds like reminder. Wish Vic's health get good. Love understanding between Ted & Ben. Also David and Ben's take on Justin in undies. ðŸ˜
Happy holidays & have a great year 2019. 😊
Author's Response:
The perfect exchange for Christmas and New Year's - we write and post, and you review. Thanks, Pushpanjali. <3 It doesn't get better than that.
Harley got the perfect revenge for Michael's BOB-napping and dumping the dildo in his cage. Although Vic isn't blind to Michael's sometimes childish behavior, he doesn't know how awful Michael is to Justin, since the teenager doesn't 'tattle' to Vic.
The theory that Michael is behind the robbery is a very popular one. We'll have to wait for Carl and Wen to complete their investigation, however, to find out whether he's the culprit. The two detectives refuse to be rushed, so we can't say when the truth will come out.
Yay, another convert to 'Bented'. :D So far, all our readers like the pairing.
Many thanks for more lovely compliments - we're chuffed that you enjoyed this chapter so much.
We wish you a great 2019 as well. :)
~ KaBrynn