Date: Feb 13, 2017 4:40 am Title: Chapter 6: Tuesday, November 7th
I didn't see that one coming. The name Thomas didn't ring a bell, but Kip did. Will that push Brian to change?
Author's Response:
Just discovered your earlier review - we very much appreciate your comments on each chapter.
Glad to hear we surprised you with Kip Thomas. Brynn is especially chuffed that her intentions with that scene panned out. :)
The Thomas incident should be quite the wake up call for Brian. We do think he's taking heed of the warning, but we'll have to see what happens next.
~Brynn & Karynn
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2017 2:59 am Title: Chapter 7: Wednesday, November 8th
That was an awesome chapter...so u told us to share some love right?? There is this song i here in india a romantic song...i just love it soo much...a cute little love story...where a boy sings a song in a cafe or something...everyday..everyone praises him but one girl...he likes her very much...but she never pays him any attention...he sings same song for her everyday soo that she can know his feelings...one day a frnd of the girl sits with her they talk but here we learn that the girl actual is deaf and also cant speak...the boy was shocked but didnt give up...he learned sign language for her and next time when he sang the song he also explained the song /his feelings to her with sign language...the girl was impressed and then something special started..that was only the beginning for their love story.. i soo loved this cute love story.
The song is actually in indian language...."he tells her that he loves her very much that he cant go back now he has come so far ...you have my heart..pls be my queen and i will ur king.."
Thats it the song is long cant explain everything ....and i didnt want to bore u any more than i have...lols...so i hope this gets u the motivation to bring back some much needed love in our boys life...
Thank u for posting...keep on doing ur excellent work.ðŸ˜ðŸ‘â¤â¤
Author's Response:
What a lovely story in a song! Thank you for sharing. <3
There do seem to be some comparisons our boys and the couple in the song. Justin will never give up, so surely Brian will learn to hear him, right? We need to give those boys another talking to, I think.
Thank you for the glowing comments on the latest chapter and our story as a whole. We're already hard at work on the next chapter. :)
~Karynn & Brynn
Date: Feb 12, 2017 9:23 pm Title: Chapter 7: Wednesday, November 8th
I think it's time for Brian to go after Kip and slap a lawsuit against him.
Author's Response:
I think we'd all like to see the last of that opportunistic worm. We'll mention your idea to Melanie and Brian, but then we'll have to see how it plays out.
Thanks for reviewing, Shari - and, of course, for jazzing up our banner. :)
~Karynn & Brynn
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2017 10:07 am Title: Chapter 6: Tuesday, November 7th
I'm loving this story, especially the fact that I haven't been able to guess what happens next - the unpredictability has me hooked☺
Author's Response:
Thank you for the lovely review! We're glad we're keeping you on the edge of your seat. *evil authors cackling away*
More twists and turns to come. ;)
~Karynn & Brynn
Date: Feb 06, 2017 1:00 am Title: Chapter 6: Tuesday, November 7th
Very well done.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the compliment. We hope you continue to enjoy. :)
~KaBrynn
Date: Feb 05, 2017 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 6: Tuesday, November 7th
So, my one big observation so far is how strange Michael's behavior has been. First he disappeared the night after the burglary with the excuse about an online auction and then here there's that strange conversation with Justin. Is this significant, or am I reading too much into it? Hmmmm.
As for your interactive doc to discuss - always in favor of that stuff! :)
TAG
Author's Response:
A number of readers are suspicious of a nefarious Michael. We'll have to see what Michael is up to, but you probably shouldn't credit him with too much intelligence. ;)
Thanks for letting us know you like the idea of an interactive doc.
~Karynn & Brynn
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 7:21 am Title: Chapter 5: Monday, November 6th - Part 2
I'm all for better communication between our boys, but I don't really mind a few more lonely jerk off sessions either! I'm thinking Deb's gonna spill the beans to Brian about how Justin doesn't really have it so easy as Brian thinks. Maybe he'll find out that Sunshine got detention for not having his uniform and realize his queening out over not having sufficient time to shop for new clothes is a bit silly? TAG
Author's Response:
Those jerk off sessions have an appeal all their own, don't they? :D
We'll have to see what makes Brian get a clue. Comparing Justin's makeshift uniform with his designer clothes may be a big ask for our label queen. LOL Thanks for reviewing! ~Brynn & Karynn
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2017 1:07 am Title: Chapter 5: Monday, November 6th - Part 2
Fabulous....waiting for more...thank u for sharing..😊☺
Author's Response:
We're so glad you're contnuing to enjoy our story. There will be a lot more to come. :)
~KaBrynn
Date: Jan 29, 2017 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 5: Monday, November 6th - Part 2
Brian is so mean with Justin.
Fortunately, Deb, Vic, Emmett and Ted are still nice to him.
I hope Deb will let Brian know why Justin has to work and that he's getting detention because he can't access his clothes.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review - the first one on chapter five. :)
Debbie loves both Brian and Justin, so we'll have to see what she does. She may leave it to the boys to work things out.
~KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2017 2:03 pm Title: Chapter 4: Monday, November 6th - Part 1
It doesn't sound like either of the boys are enjoying their Monday. Maybe they should get together and commiserate? Brian could get that orgasm he needs and Justin wouldn't feel so alone. Just a suggestion . . . Lol. TAG
Author's Response:
Hmm . . . we think that solution might be a little too easy for our boys, but we'll ask them to take it under consideration. ;)
Thanks for reviewing!
~KaBrynn
Date: Jan 25, 2017 12:21 am Title: Chapter 4: Monday, November 6th - Part 1
YumYumPM's first review of Chapter 4 (accidentally deleted):
This was a well thoughtout chapter. I can't blame Justin from having nightmares especially waking up in Michael's old room. shudder. Glad to see that Cynthia is firmly on Justin's side. It's nice that Justin has one ally on the school staff. Hope something happens to the grill sargent for his attitude.
Thank you again for the lovely review!
Cynthia's a treasure - doesn't take any guff from Brian. :)
Thanks also for the comment on the banner in your postscript review. Shari is the most amazing banner queen!
~KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2017 4:24 pm Title: Chapter 4: Monday, November 6th - Part 1
PS - love the banner.
Author's Response:
Apologies! - accidentally deleted your previous review of chapter 4. :( Here's part of the response, though:
Thanks so much for the lovely compliment about our story - that it's very well thought out.
That room would give most people nightmares; we're shuddering with you.
We'll have to see what develops as far as creepy Bauer and Dixon.
Thanks again for reviewing! :)
~KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2017 3:38 pm Title: Chapter 3: Sunday, November 5th - Part 2
Oh well, Justin ended up at Deb's house anyway. Love that Gus' first word was Jusun. Michael is being a pain. Enjoying this.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing!
We were happy that we could give Justin more of a choice about staying with Deb. He didn't have many options, but it was still a mutual decision. Both siblings are glad to have him there, although we think Justin might like to redecorate the room he's staying in . . .
We think every reader is chuffed by Gus' first word - such a clever little tyke. <3
More this coming Sunday,
~KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2017 1:34 am Title: Chapter 4: Monday, November 6th - Part 1
Wow....brian is an asshole...when will he forgive justin...going great...looking forward for more...thank u.
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting us know we kept you riveted with the latest installment of our story.
Brian has a rather steep learning curve, but we have faith in the big guy. :)
Thanks for reading & reviewing - and for the fun 'comments' on FB.
~KaBrynn
Date: Jan 23, 2017 12:59 am Title: Chapter 4: Monday, November 6th - Part 1
Interesting cast of students . I feel a new twist coming. Good for Cynthia.
Author's Response:
Yay! We're happy we're keeping you entertained.
There may be few plot twists as this story develops. :)
Thanks for reading & reviewing!
~KaBrynn
Date: Jan 22, 2017 9:35 pm Title: Chapter 4: Monday, November 6th - Part 1
How I want to strangle Hobbs and Dixon! Daphne is a real best friend.
Brian taking care of Gus is quite funny and sweet at the same time.
Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next part.
Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thank you for being the first to post a review on this chapter - on either website.<3
We're glad we succeeded in putting you through a gamut of emotions in regard to Hobbs and Dixon, Daphne, and Gus. :)
We're thrilled you're enjoying our story.
~KaBrynn
Date: Jan 17, 2017 7:39 am Title: Chapter 3: Sunday, November 5th - Part 2
OMG I was so happy to see another chapter. I love that Gus's first word was Justin and that it made Justin's day. I love how he's handling everything and am so disappointed in Brian. They never did give any hint of who robed him though it could be like you said the numerous tricks that he brings over and who saw his code. Anyway I anxiuosly await the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
Aw, we're glad we could make you happy with another chapter. :)
We were also delighted when Gus' first word was Jushun - three times in fact. What a clever boy.
Isn't this mature Justin a delight? He is still a teen, though, so he may slip up from time to time. And don't give up on Brian just yet . . . he just needs to grow up too. As Justin once said, he's the most mature person Brian knows. ;)
We'll have to see what evolves in regard to the burglary.
Thanks for reviewing! Next chapter in a week.
~KaBrynn
Date: Jan 16, 2017 7:15 pm Title: Chapter 3: Sunday, November 5th - Part 2
La suite, LA suite, LA Suite, LA SUITE !!!!!
Author's Response:
Semaine prochaine, Semaine Prochaine, Semaine PROCHAINE, SEMAINE PROCHAINE!!!! :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2017 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 3: Sunday, November 5th - Part 2
Awkward dinner - interesting that Michael doesn't seem too worried about the burglary, except to use it as a chance to drive a wedge between Brian and Justin? Loved cute Gus and his first word. TAG
Author's Response:
What can we say about Michael? His efforts to help his best friend seem misdirected, at the least.
The whole family may have been glad to put that dinner behind them, especially Brian and Justin. Although Jushun did have that heartwarming moment with Gus. :)
Thanks for reviewing!
~KaBrynn
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2017 4:49 am Title: Chapter 3: Sunday, November 5th - Part 2
Omg....brian was soooo pissed and jealous as hell... awesome...loved it...waiting for more...thanks for sharing..ðŸ˜ðŸ˜€ðŸ˜Šâ˜ºâ˜º
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for leaving another review! We appreciate hearing your opinion of each chapter. :)
Brian's not in the best frame of mind right now - still very upset with his Sunshine.
More next week!
~Karynn & Brynn
Date: Jan 15, 2017 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 3: Sunday, November 5th - Part 2
Emmett is too much fun and so loyal; so happy he kissed Justin and asked him to go to Babylon. Thta's going to be fun.
Gus' first word is great as well; it shows Justin's importance in his short life.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the lovely review. We really like Emmett and his loyalty to his friends.
We just love Gus' first word, and it does indeed show Jushun's importance in his life.
~Karynn & Brynn
Date: Jan 10, 2017 1:30 am Title: Chapter 2: Sunday, November 5th - Part 1
Loving this story...now let's see what Brian has to say when the door opens and he sees his Sunshine...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the lovely review, Glo. So glad you're enjoying our story.
Aren't we all waiting to see how Brian reacts? More soon. :)
~Karynn & Brynn
Date: Jan 09, 2017 5:50 am Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000
Remember the "I've fallen and I can't get up" commercials of the late '90s and early 2000s? That system, which is called Life Alert, uses the exact same technology. The only difference is that the device that seniors wore around their necks had a push button. With ADT their slogan is "We're home even when you're not" which means that they have an electronic record of when the alarm for your home security is both turned on and turned off. The same kind of technology is used for the "On Star" system for cars as well. It works in two ways: one is by satellite (On Star) and the other by transmission devices within the system (ADT and Life Alerts systems). You may be able to google or youtube the commercials to give you some ideas... Hope this helps!!!
Happy Writing!
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thanks for the info, Chelle! We'll add it to our research notes. You and TAG have been asking pertinent questions about that security system in the loft. Can you tell we're hedging with our answers? LOL We'll see what evolves - and, yes, we do have a plan. :)
I definitely remember those ads about falling and not being able to get up. In fact, I don't think it's been all that long since I last saw one - probably a local yokel ad.
Thanks again for being such a great resource, my dear!
Hugs and Happy Writing wishes winging their way to you!
~Karynn & Brynn
Date: Jan 09, 2017 4:47 am Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000
Definitely loving this necessary redux of this particular storyline. I never agreed with Brian kicking Justin out especially when there would have been an easy way to check with the alarm company when the alarm system would have been activated and deactivated. Even back in the early millennium years, companies like ADT had this particular technology so that they could track things like burglary, medical and fire emergencies. That said, I'm Sooooo ready to smack the PISSWATER out of the yapping chihuahua!!
Michael's mouth... LAWD will someone PLEASE get that mofo a muzzle PRONTO??!!! In fact, because this act of robbery seems as if the person had a pretty relaxed timeline to clear out everything from big ticket items to something as mundane as Brian's suits (which more than likely cannot be fenced without a bunch of red flags because of their original pricetags or worn unless the person is of Brian's build), I would venture a guess that this entire act was based in jealousy and envy (in a mind-or lack thereof- like Michael's, they mean two very different things)... and it would take a rotten, ignorant ass with unlimited access to the loft to pull it off. My money is on the one person with the most to gain by Justin being removed from the picture....Michael Mealymouth Novotny with a possible assist from someone else because he is better at following plans NOT making them.
Well off to the next chapter!! Hopefully, Justin lands on his feet since it's evident he can't count on Brian for moral support right now....SMH
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
What is the deal with the burglary and that alarm system? It's a popular supposition that Michael was responsible.
Don't we all love to hate the whiner? A muzzle - great idea! lolol
Thanks for reviewing, Chelle! Third chapter will be up in about a week.
~Karynn & Brynn
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2017 4:36 am Title: Chapter 2: Sunday, November 5th - Part 1
Wow.....lovely chap...cant wait for more...great going..ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜thank for updating.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review! Glad you're enjoying our story. More in about a week.
~Karynn & Brynn