Date: Jan 03, 2018 12:37 am Title: Chapter 27: Tuesday, November 28th
Love love love Ted & Cynthia together! Tag teaming Brian! Lol
Ben & Ted are adorable! Of course Brian is going to want to protect & look after his friend. More romantic cuteness please!
Justin is so cute with those voicemails to Brian lol Those two need to do it soon!!! Long the long chapters!
Author's Response:
Yay! We're chuffed that you like Abbott & Costello together. :D
Aw, you like the romantic cuteness between Ben and Ted. Brian, however, is groaning at the idea of being subjected to more of that mushy stuff. "Doing it," he says, "is much more my style."
Thanks for the wonderful review, Glo. :) Wishing you a happy, healthy 2018!
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 02, 2018 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 27: Tuesday, November 28th
What a fabulous chapter! So many things happened.
The idea of Ted and Ben is interesting: they are both very smart and as Brian would say "boring"; they should match and be a better couple than with Michael.
I'm curious why Dr David is owing Brian. Is it because Brian saw him at the bath house while he was supposed to be at a business meeting?
Justin is making real progress in Brian's opinion, even if the information is coming from David. At least, the name of the new agency is his idea. The cheerleader is as daring as mean. I don't feel her too much for now. I hope she won't play some trick to Justin as he is just trying to help her. Maybe Daphne would help to keep Sydney under control.
The drawing is amazing.
Author's Response:
We're completely made up by your review, Claire. :)
It's good to hear that you like our pairing of Ted and Ben. :D Your comment about them both being 'boring' cracked us up. That sounds spot on for canon Brian for most of seasons 1-4, although he started to appreciate and get to know Ted more during the cancer arc.
David owes Brian for reuniting him with Michael at Michael's 30th birthday party. He clued the doc into paying better attention to Michael's likes and dislikes (i.e., grasping that Michael's favourite food wasn't seafood). More importantly, he put a bee in his bonnet about the perfect birthday gift for Michael - the Captain Astro stand-in.
You're not the only one distrustful of Sydney. We'd love to get a debate about her going in the FanDoc. If you have a moment, drop by and give your opinion. :)
You may be onto something as far as Daph sussing out whether Syd is on the up and up.
Justin was talented from the get-go, wasn't he? Brynn did a great job of 'recombining' the screen caps into one sketch.
Wishing you a healthy, happy 2018!
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 02, 2018 10:53 am Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000
Forgot to say...HAPPY HAPPY HAPPPPPYYYY NEW YEAR LADIES....THANK U FOR THE UPDATE...lots of love.
Author's Response:
A very happy 2018 and lots of love back atcha!
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 02, 2018 10:47 am Title: Chapter 27: Tuesday, November 28th
Absolutely Fabulous...fantastic...superb...amazing...marvelous...excellent...mindblowing ...too good...brilliant.. Awesome update.
Happy new year....Enjoy life ladies.....well done...love ur writting...u guys rock.
Author's Response:
You are such a fabulous cheerleader (much better than Sydney, lol) for our story, Navneet. :)
Thanks so much for commenting.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 02, 2018 5:11 am Title: Chapter 27: Tuesday, November 28th
Interesting! I'm not a fan of Sydney, though she did have her good points. Love how it turns out Doc Dave found the perfect place for Kinnetik. Justin's three for three. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Phyllis, for again being the first to review. :)
You're not the only one who's skeptical about Sydney. Maybe you should air your opinion in the FanDoc. It would be great to get a debate going.
We're chuffed that you liked our twist with Dr Dave discovering the bathhouse.
~ KaBrynn
P.S. We're getting closer to awarding your prize for the 100th review on AO3, although it's likely a couple chapters in the future. :)
Date: Nov 11, 2017 3:14 am Title: Chapter 26: Monday, November 27th
Read the whole chapter again...almost a month without any update...feeling sad...i hope RL is treating u good..nothing bad is going on...take care..missing the update very much..please update soon....take care guys..love u and hugs to both.
Author's Response:
You are the best cheerleader for our story! Fortunately, you already know that we're diligently writing away and hope to have a new chapter out soon, maybe even - fingers and toes crossed - by New Year's Day. :)
Thanks so much for all the comments, Navneet. We appreciate each and every one. :) All the gifs of the boys and the videos of Harley help keep us inspired.
Wishing you a wonderful year ahead!
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 24, 2017 1:16 pm Title: Chapter 26: Monday, November 27th
I really like your ‘Carl’ here - it would have been great to have him in the Picture first season. TAG
Author's Response:
We're made up that you like our Carl. We agree; there should have been more of the gruff detective from the very beginning.
Apologies for the 'slight' delay in responding to your comments. Real life threw a wrench into our writing schedule, but we are now working on the next chapter. :)
Wishing you a happy, healthy 2018, TAG!
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 20, 2017 3:13 pm Title: Chapter 25: Sunday, November 26th
Brian still didn’t get around to asking Justin back to the loft - darn! TAG
Author's Response:
His balls are very, very blue. Poor stud.
Thanks for commenting, TAG!
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 20, 2017 6:16 am Title: Chapter 26: Monday, November 27th
Loved the chapter...u guys rock as always...spectacular work...daph and justin together are adorable....and justin and carl are developing a special bond there...brian is cranky as always...come on stop torturing him and give him some hot ass cute twink already..lols...thanks for the superb update.
P.S- sorry for the late read...was very busy with all the festivities going on in here...had little to no time to read.
Author's Response:
We're chuffed that you enjoy Daph and Justin. Good friends like that - all the camaraderie and teasing rivalry - are hard to find.
Justin's lucky to have found a second father figure in Carl. You're spot on that they're developing a special bond. :)
Oh, come on. How could we possibly stop torturing Brian? It's way too much fun. Hmm, it seems Brian has a 'hot ass cute twink' in his sights, but the stud still seems a trifle clueless about an effective approach. :D
Thanks so much for commenting, Navneet. We're maybe a 'trifle' more delayed in replying to you than you were in posting a comment. :D The good news - as you know - is that we are writing away on the next chapter. Fingers crossed that we'll be be able to post by New Year's Day.
Wishing you a happy, healthy 2018!
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 18, 2017 7:20 am Title: Chapter 24: Saturday, November 25th
Now I’m starting to wonder why a homicide detective is investigating a burglary too... TAG
Author's Response:
Good. We've piqued your curiousity. :D
Thanks for commenting, TAG.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 18, 2017 5:40 am Title: Chapter 26: Monday, November 27th
You write in such detail about Justin's everyday life, I sometimes feel sorry for him. You have him trying to make the best of his situation. Poor Brian, is he ever going to get laid?
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for commenting!
We are producing awfully short chapters, aren't we? :D All the detail has become part of the slow-burn romance between our boys. Thank goodness for their lovely memories as they - hopefully - find their way back to each other.
Justin is lucky to be surrounded by friends and family who love him. They're helping him through the tough times.
Oh, yes. Woe is Brian. It's amazing he can function with being so sexually frustrated. What will the beleaguered stud do?
Apologies for the 'slight' delay in responding to you. Real life hit and interfered big time with our writing. The good news is that we're diligently working on the next chapter. With a bit of luck we'll be able to post by New Year's Day.
Wishing you a happy, healthy 2018!
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 17, 2017 3:19 pm Title: Chapter 26: Monday, November 27th
What a jerk Dixon can be: I hope you will get him some punishment in return.
Justin and Daphne: always having the other's back and being true friends.
Brian and Debbie: I love their interactions and how Debbie is onto Brian, not letting him off the hook.
Justin and Carl: it's great that he has another father figure apart from Vic.
Great update! Thank you!
Author's Response:
We also want Dixon to get his comeuppance. In the meantime, the way Justin stands up to him is frustrating the maths teacher to no end. :)
That's so very true... Justin and Daphne are the epitome of true friends, always there for each other, including the friendly rivalry and joshing.
You're right about Debbie being on to Brian; that's the way mothers are - eyes in the back of their heads. :D
Justin's very lucky to have two father figures like Carl and Vic. We really enjoy writing his interactions with both of them.
Thanks for being such a faithful reviewer, Claire. :) Our apologies for the 'slight' delay in responding. Real life interfered big time with our writing schedule, but we're getting back on track. We hope to post an update soon... maybe even by New Year's Day.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 17, 2017 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 26: Monday, November 27th
Justin and Carl have a good meal. Carl takes care of Justin like a father.
I can't wait to see what Wen could do at St James!!!
Justin is really brave with what he suffers at St James happily Daphnée is a really good friend.
Thank you for the update !!
Author's Response:
We really enjoy writing Justin with Carl, so we're made up that you enjoy reading them. :)
There may be a lot of flies on the wall in Jerkins' office, listening to Wen give him a dressing down, lol.
It's really sad how many kids were (and are) bullied for their sexual orientation. :( Justin's situation is pretty dire but not, we think that far removed from reality. Justin's lucky to have good people on his side, including Daphne, to help him get through.
Thank you for reviewing, Marie-france. Our apologies for the 'slightly' belated response. Real life has been a right pain, but the good news is that we're hard at work on the next chapter. With a bit of luck, we may be able to post by New Year's Day. :D
Best wishes to you for a happy, healthy 2018!
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 17, 2017 1:33 am Title: Chapter 26: Monday, November 27th
Crappy teacher....great best friend and understanding cop.Great chapter
Author's Response:
We're chuffed you enjoyed this chapter. There will be more of the besties, Carl, and - unfortunately - Dickhead Dixon to come.
Your comments are much appreciated. :) If you'd like a sneak peek, a teaser for the next chapter is available in the FanDoc.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 16, 2017 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 25: Sunday, November 26th
Brian is an idiot...just tell Justin he misses him. Yeh that's going to happen
Author's Response:
"I miss you" sounds suspiciously like "I love you" to the stud. He wants to try out his fuckbuddy concept before he does anything else. We'll see how that goes. :D
Thanks for commenting. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 16, 2017 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 26: Monday, November 27th
Wonderful chapter, but I really want to see Wen have a go at Dickshit. It was nice that Carl and Justin had a meal together. Shame Brian couldn't join them.
Author's Response:
Get in line. :D We all want to see Wen give Jerkins the what-for.
Carl's becoming an incredible surrogate father and mentor for Justin. One of these days... maybe... Brian will join Justin and Carl for a meal. Right now, he's still recoving from all those Thanksgiving carbs. :D
Thanks for reviewing, Phyllis. :) A teaser for the next chapter is up in the FanDoc.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 16, 2017 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 26: Monday, November 27th
I am so not looking forward to eastcoast winter! I hate snow! Justin has got to get a proper winter coat & boots, jeez... he's so stubborn. That's so awesome that he can count on Carl. Nice dinner they had together. I wish Brian & he had a scene together....you're killing me ladies! At least he had B.O.B. lol
Author's Response:
Wow! You must've gobbled down this chapter right away, Glo. :) You were the first to review
'Stubborn' is definitely a good word to describe Justin. Undoubtedly why he's such a good match for Brian.
We're having a great time exploring the developing father-son relationship between Carl and Justin.
Yeah, yeah, we know. You cheeky readers want more of Brian and Justin together. :D Battery Operated Brian and Glass Dildo Justin will have to do for now.
Did you get why Karynn said the gif you posted on the AO3 page was relevant to this chapter? *cough* It's because of the 'boob' discussions in this chapter. :D
A teaser for the next chapter is up in the FanDoc...
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 14, 2017 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 23: Friday, November 24th
So Brian’s finally thinking about making up with Justin again? I approve! Lol. TAG
Author's Response:
The stud wouldn't couch it in those words, but the process has started. Now to see whether he can get any satisfaction...
Thanks for reviewing, TAG. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 14, 2017 7:55 am Title: Chapter 22: Thanksgiving, Thursday, November 23rd
Boy, that was some Thanksgiving! Lol. TAG
Author's Response:
This chapter was a story within a story. :) We'll have to post a link to this chapter when it's closer to Thanksgiving so the KD members can go into a food coma. :D
Thanks for commenting, TAG.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 05, 2017 5:05 am Title: Chapter 25: Sunday, November 26th
Terrific chapter...awesome work guys...kinney is getting tired now i guess or he is getting impatient ...what is he gonna do?? Very very good chapter...the story gets more interesting when temmet is there with little sunshine..lols..thanks for the update...looking forward to see what happens next .
Author's Response:
Once again, thanks for your continued support, Navneet. Your comments always make us smile.
Temmet are a wonderful team of two great friends. Brian never did like it when the Emmett half put his hands on Sunshine. :D By this point, Brian's balls are so blue that he can barely think, poor stud. :D
We're working on the next chapter... teaser in the FanDoc.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 02, 2017 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 25: Sunday, November 26th
Once more, Brian leaves alone... He could have followed Justin in the house at the end.
The mystery is still there with only more impact than Brian was thinking.
Author's Response:
Poor Brian... such blue balls... :D He must have a bit of trepidation about how Justin will respond to his 'proposal'.
Brian has garnered a little bit of information about the burglary, but not enough to figure things out. Looks like he'll have to wait for the police investigation to proceed.
Thanks for reviewing, Claire! We're working on the next chapter, with a teaser available in the FanDoc. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 02, 2017 4:23 pm Title: Chapter 25: Sunday, November 26th
Emmett and Ted are a good team !
I can't wait for the end of the police invesigation and Brian can apologize to Justin ! Thank you for the update, another great chapter !
Author's Response:
You're the second reader to comment on team Temmet. :) They do work well together. :)
And also the second reader who's trying to speed along the police investigation, while being certain of the outcome. :D Picture Detective Wen regarding you with a stony expression.
We always enjoy your reviews, Marie-france. Thanks for commenting!
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 02, 2017 1:57 pm Title: Chapter 25: Sunday, November 26th
So Brian's plan is to try to persuade Justin to go to the loft for a fuck? Like he actually has to try? All he has to do is say come over & Justin will be there! Lol I wish my past garage sales were like that!
"Hands off Honeycutt!" Really Brian, can you be any more obvious? Why didn't anyone call him on his actual possessiveness of Justin? Very subtle Brian! Lol
And good for detective Kinney, he'll probably be a big help in this investigation. Can't wait for that to be over, out in the open, finished...whatever, so Brian can eat his words & apologize to his Sunshine.
Author's Response:
Yeah... sure... Justin's such an easy lay. :D Brian's goal may not be as easily achievable as the stud thinks. :D
I'm (Karynn) with you. My past garage sales have been total dullsville in comparison, and the income hasn't been anywhere near as good.
Brian must figure that subtlety would be wasted on Emmett. He never has liked the queen's hands to be on his Sunshine.
Hmm... Detective Kinney... you've gotten Brian all puffed up, lol. You cheeky reader - trying to get us to speed the police along on their investigation. 'You do seem certain of the outcome. :D
Thanks for reviewing, Glo! We got a laugh out of your comments.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 02, 2017 2:35 am Title: Chapter 25: Sunday, November 26th
Terrific chapter...awesome work guys...kinney is getting tired now i guess or he is getting impatient ...what is he gonna do?? Very very good chapter...the story gets more interesting when temmet is there with little sunshine..lols..thanks for the update...looking forward to see what happens next .
Author's Response:
Thanks for your continued support, Navneet. Your comments always make us smile.
Temmet are a wonderful team of two great friends. Brian never did like it when the Emmett half put his hands on Sunshine. :D By this point, Brian's balls are so blue that he can barely think, poor stud. :D
We're working on the next chapter... teaser in the FanDoc.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Oct 02, 2017 1:10 am Title: Chapter 25: Sunday, November 26th
Another fantastic chapter. Love the bit with Justin dressed up. Bet Deb and Vic made a killing. Looks like we might get a clue as to who burgled Brian. Brian and Justin detective team? Working together might get them back to bed.
Author's Response:
Thanks for being the first to comment - again. :)
We're chuffed that you enjoyed this chapter and the garage sale. Those scenes were a lot of fun to write.
It's possible that Justin and Brian will put their heads together to try and suss out more about the burglary...
Always good to hear your thoughts, Phyllis! :)
~ KaBrynn