Date: Feb 05, 2018 7:10 pm Title: Chapter 30: Friday, December 1st
Holy long chapter!! So great! Really enjoyed it.
Looks like Brian will be eating some humble pie at some point in the future. How soon will be up to him. Was SO proud of Justin though for standing up for himself there. He may still love Brian, but I don't think he likes parts of him. He's also realizing that he CAN live without him. Sure he'd prefer to be with him, but Brian has to work for it. Seems like justin has really matured in the past little while.
Loved Justin and Daph's convos. can justimagine his look of horror asking about her getting a boob job. LOL! They are such good friends. He's going to make himself VERY ill though. No way he can do all the jobs he's doing plus school.
Such a good update!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Believe it or not, this chapter isn't even in the top five in length. :D Insanely enough, we're averaging nearly 10,000 words per chapter. :D
We're chuffed that you enjoyed this installment. We knew our readers were chomping at the bit for some action, but it took a while to build to this point.
Justin is an incredibly strong and proud man - very much Brian's equal. We're thrilled that you liked the way he stood up to Brian. :) You're right that Brian will probably have to eat humble pie, but you know our favorite brunet will try to squirm his way out of an actual apology.
Both the boys are so darned stubborn. One can't even admit to himself that he's been in a relationship, since he doesn't do those; the other one has acknowledged to himself that he might not be able to do everything, but he's by no means ready to quit trying just yet.
We're glad you're enjoying Justin and Daphne's banter. Their friendship - possible boob job and all, lol - is such fun to write.
Thanks for the wonderful review, Elaine. :) It made us smile. A teaser for the next chapter is availabe in the FanDoc.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Feb 05, 2018 5:52 pm Title: Chapter 30: Friday, December 1st
Wow I have just read all the chapters in one go I am really enjoying it thank you
Author's Response:
We're made up that you're enjoying our story, Chris! :) That was a lot of reading in one go. :)
We're working on the next chapter now. A teaser is availble in the FanDoc, if you want to check it out.
Thanks for commenting!
~ KaBrynn
Date: Feb 05, 2018 10:39 am Title: Chapter 30: Friday, December 1st
Great chapter! Justin really learned from the master for sacarsm and irony! I like to see Brian lost in front of Justin, he wants him so much! And he have to apologize Operation Twat Retrieval really! Well Brian must give the best of himself because now we want some reunification and Justin have to stop dancing ! Hugs ladies !
Author's Response:
Justin is very much Brian's equal. :D He's definitely capable of outsmarting the master. :D
Karynn takes a bow for dreaming up Operation Twat Retrieval. :D That campaign's going to need a lot of fine-tuning before Brian will be able to reel Justin in, however, so don't expect an immediate reunification.
Thanks for another wonderful review, Marie-france! :) Hugs back atcha!
~ KaBrynn
Date: Feb 05, 2018 7:24 am Title: Chapter 30: Friday, December 1st
Excellent Update
Finally some SERIOUS interaction between BJ ...lols...brian is getting impatient (so are we😉) thats why he was soo going to get his ass kicked by justin ..."Operation Twat Retrieval." Seriously girls..
Thats was hoelarious 😂😂ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
loved the fun banter between B-T-C they are like little kids .
Happy Birthday to u Miss.Karynn ...stay happy stay blessed.
Author's Response:
We noticed our readers were getting restless. :D It just took some time to build to this point. :D
Yeah, Operation Twat Retrieval - Karynn takes a bow for that brilliant name :D - is definitely going to need loads of fine-tuning if it's going to work out in Brian's favor.
We're made up that you're enjoying the banter between Brian, Ted, and Cynthia. Ssh, you aren't supposed to reveal that they're behaving like little kids...
Thanks for the birthday wishes, Navneet! Reviews are exactly what Karynn wanted for her birthday, and you came through, as always. :)
We're working on the next chapter. In case you haven't peeked, a teaser is available in the FanDoc.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Feb 05, 2018 1:43 am Title: Chapter 30: Friday, December 1st
Happy Birthday, Karynn! Nicely done chapter. Just wish Justin would let go of working at Babylon.
Author's Response:
Thanks for being such a faithful reader and reviewer, Phyllis! :) Your comments are exactly what Karynn wanted for her birthday.
Stubbornness is a flaw that both Justin and Brian share, which sometimes causes big headaches. We'll have to see what might spur Justin to change his mind about the dancing...
A teaser for the next chapter is available in the FanDoc, if you haven't checked it out yet. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: Feb 05, 2018 12:01 am Title: Chapter 1: Saturday, November 4th, 2000
Happy birthday Karynn!!! Hope your day was wonderful!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the birthday wishes, Glo! All the reviews from our readers made it just perfect. :)
~ Karynn
Date: Feb 05, 2018 12:00 am Title: Chapter 30: Friday, December 1st
Jesus, Justin is so stubborn! He may be a kid with lots of energy but Daphne's right, he's not Superman....he's only human. He needs to quit something & the dancing is the logical one.
Operation Twat Retrieval - perfection! Lol Brian is going to have to really try, be nice & apologize to Justin if he wants him back in his bed & his life. Was hoping they would have some sort of sexual interaction this chapter. When is that happening?
Author's Response:
Stubbornness is a character trait for both the brunet and blond studs. Sigh. Logic doesn't really enter into it for either of them, not when they try to apply it to themselves.
Karynn takes a bow for naming the campaign Operation Twat Retrieval. :D That campaign's going to need a lot of fine-tuning if it's going to be effective.
Your wish is our command. You'll just have to be patient until we post the next chapter, which we're working on now...
Thanks for reviewing, Glo! You always make us smile. :D
~ KaBrynn
Date: Feb 04, 2018 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 30: Friday, December 1st
Happy Birthday Karynn!!
Thank you for this very long chapter!
Always funny to see Brian failing to get Justin; maybe it's worse because Justin sees right thru him. At least, he had some release with the blond guy, but it wasn't nearly enough.
I hope that Justin will drop his go-go dancing as he won't be able to follow during his class, which is with his nasty professor.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the birthday wishes and for leaving another review, Claire. :) That's exactly what Karynn wanted on her day.
This chapter is actually of middling length if you can believe it, at a bit less than 13,000 words. We're averaging about 10,000 words per chapter. Yes, we're insane. :D
You're absolutely right that Justin sees right through Brian; our favorite brunet really appreaciates that you pointed that out. :D
Justin's almost as stubborn about thinking that he can do everything, as Brian is about refusing to acknowledge that he's been in something so ghastly as a relationship.
We're working on the next chapter, and a teaser is availabe in the FanDoc, if you haven't checked it out yet.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 29, 2018 10:01 am Title: Chapter 29: Thursday, November 30th
i like Brian's staff and DC wow I want a brother like him !!
Michael is cruel but he is Michael Does he really want a 'Mouton Chardonnet" ? Haha drinks just coke and shut up !
Finally Brian asked Justin to work for him and I like how Justin tells him that he does not have to tell him what to do. Poor Brian again with his right hand !!
Thank you ladies for the update!
Author's Response:
Yay! DC is a hit with you, too. :D Maybe you could borrow Kerri's 'brother' - see her review below. :D
Michael is trying out his version of frenching, hahaha.
Justin's a proud little fucker - he's not going to take any guff from Brian. Too bad the brunet stud didn't phrase his concern about the go-go dancing better - and he calls himself an adman. Tsk, tsk. Maybe his brain fart was caused by overdependence on his right hand. :D
Thanks for the wonderful review, Marie-france! :) A teaser for the next chapter is now availble in FanDoc, if you want to take a peek.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 28, 2018 4:42 pm Title: Chapter 29: Thursday, November 30th
Wow! From over 20 thousand words to 9000. Huge difference but just as compelling. Love Brian & his new posse's dynamic, they are hysterical! Question:when Brian was talking to Justin in the break room, why didn't he just ask him then to go to the loft or ask if he needed a ride?
Author's Response:
We're made up that fewer words didn't detract from the impact of the chapter, lol.
That's a great way to describe the advertising agency staff - Brian's posse. :D DC prefers to keep his own inches separate, thank you very much. :D
Brian was off his game in the break room; he'd planned to be the one who approached Justin. :) At first, he was trying to fend off the notion of intervening in the Ben-Michael situation, and then he - foolishly, as it turned out - put his fledgling agency's needs ahead of his very blue balls. He also assumed he'd be giving Justin a lift; after all, nothing could possibly interfere with his master plan two nights in a row. Poor stud.
Thanks for the fun review, Glo! :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 28, 2018 10:51 am Title: Chapter 29: Thursday, November 30th
The beginning with DC, Cynthia, Ted and Brian is very funny. DC is quite a character.
It seems Brian is going to have to use his right hand for some more time. At least, he seems to have Justin agreeing to work with/for him.
Michael is such a great friend with Ted! How can he dare talking to Ben like this and make a so subtle move? I hope Dr Dave will hear about that.
I laughed when I read "bottle of ‘Mutted Chandon"; Michael trying to impress Ben and badly failing. Also when Emmett let out "Not everyone can meet the love of their life underneath a lamp post." even if Brian' repartee was quite mean.
Author's Response:
We're glad you enjoyed DC. :D You should check out Kerri's comment down below. It had us laughing that Karynn imagined (amalgamated a couple of people into) a real person.
That right hand of Brian's is going to start cramping soon. :D
Subtlety isn't exactly Michael's forte, and he's rather a fair-weather friend to Ted. The situation is still evolving, so we don't yet know whether Dr Dave will find out or not.
Brynn is taking a bow for Michael's mangling of the French champagne and Emmett's line. We'll have to forgive the stud for being mean to Em - the concept of romantic love gives him hives.
Thanks for another wonderful review, Claire! :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 28, 2018 12:28 am Title: Chapter 29: Thursday, November 30th
Thank you, thank you. This chapter was all I could hope for. The only problem is I don't know if Mikey realizes he was turned down! He was so cruel.
Author's Response:
Yay! We're made up that you like the way we fulfilled your wish, Phyllis. :)
It's rather difficult for us to penetrate the muddled grey matter that fills Mikey's head, but we did our best, managing to ameliorate what he originally intended to say - yes it was actually worse. :D Whether he realises that he was turned down; well, we're just not sure. He's most certainly already forgotten that he behaved in a less than exemplary fashion.
Thanks so much for your support of our story, Phyllis. :) We're motivated to continue because of readers like you.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 27, 2018 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 29: Thursday, November 30th
Okay ladies, please try to understand that I’m not trying to be a Debbie downer, but I tried and I mean really tried to get back into this story but, it’s just waaaaay too slow for my taste. I understand the slow burn factor, but....I don’t know how to explain it, I just thought we would have more at this point. With that being said, stay the course as you have planned and continue to share your talents.
Author's Response:
Thank you for commenting. We will definitely take your advice and continue writing.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 27, 2018 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 29: Thursday, November 30th
What a gift to wake up too! Made my Sunday morning! Loved DC - he's a character who very much reminds me of a man I call 'my brother'. Michael (LOL, Oh, the irony!) is English, and it was his voice I could hear in my head while I was reading. I found the Brit-speak sprinkled a little more heavily through this chapter - I grinned several times over that.
LOved how Ben shot Michael down, and that Justin gave Brian something to think about. Love, love, love this story. Thanks for the perfect wake up today. xxx
Your review had us utterly chuffed yesterday - well, yesterday afternoon for Karynn, early on Sunday for Brynn - especially when we saw the 'number' you had hit. :D Were you aware of your accomplishment? :D DC is an amalgamation of a few different people. It's priceless that your 'brother,' Michael, is the embodiment of DC. :D Brit-speak? What Brit-speak? LOL Thanks so much for the enthusiastic support of our story. We love that you love it, Kerri. :) Karynn's loopy from too little sleep - stayed up most of the night two nights in a row to watch the Australian Open finals. She and Brynn had a running commentary going on (from northern California to Prague and back) throughout the women's final as they polished off this chapter. The reward for staying up so late last night was watching Roger win his 20th slam. :) Okay, back on topic - Karynn will be in touch with you soon via FB Messenger in regard to your prize. :) ~ KaBrynn
Author's Response:
Date: Jan 26, 2018 10:18 am Title: Chapter 28: Wednesday, November 29th
Oh yes it was very looooong! But I liked the discovery of the baths! And in the end Brian jealous is the reward of such a long chapter haha!
Author's Response:
Your comments made us laugh, Marie-france, especially the bit about the reward for reading such a looooong chapter. :D
We tried to inject lots of humour into the many scenes in this jam-packed installment - good to know we succeeded.
Thanks for leaving a review after you finally forged your way to the end of this particular 'novella.' :D We promise the next chapter won't take nearly as long to read. :D A teaser is now available in the FanDoc.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 21, 2018 12:01 am Title: Chapter 28: Wednesday, November 29th
It's great that the agency is shaping up fast.
Brian's visit to the bathhouse was hilarious.
Michael regressing to please David is pathetic.
Brian's dream was hot and he will have to do it again as Justin went with Ted. He almost got a cold for nothing.
Author's Response:
We’re chuffed that the bathhouse scene made you laugh. :D It was a blast to write. :D
It may be more a case of Dr Dave dumbing himself down to please his boyfriend rather than Michael regressing. *yuck*
Poor stud. All he got for his efforts at the diner was some goose pimples and a case (or two) of jealousy. We’re trying to clue him in that his plans to seduce Justin may not be the wisest, but he insists he knows the blond better than we do...
Thanks for reviewing, Claire! :) A teaser for the next chapter should be availalbe soon.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 20, 2018 1:54 am Title: Chapter 28: Wednesday, November 29th
That was a fabulously long chapter & I loved it but are you guys teasing us or something?? I thought the boys were going to get together somehow & have some playtime. Love Brian/Ted friendship! But Brian needs his Sunshine back!
Author's Response:
Tease? Who, us? *evil authors cackling*
We’ve tried, more than once, to drop a word in Brian’s ear about his plans to seduce Justin, but the stud’s ignoring us. We’ll have to see what happens...
Thanks for commenting, Glo. :) A *cough* teaser for the next chapter should be available soon.
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 19, 2018 8:05 am Title: Chapter 28: Wednesday, November 29th
Poor Brian killing the business world but no sex for days.
Author's Response:
Fortunately, the stud has his hands to provide some relief, or we’d worry about it withering and falling off. :D Just joking - we’d never let that happen.
We’ve been trying to feed helpful advice to Brian about how to approach Justin, but we’re not sure he’s listening... sigh.
Thanks for commenting! :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 19, 2018 7:43 am Title: Chapter 28: Wednesday, November 29th
I love you guys - like, seriously love you guys. Karynn, we have had mutual fangirling moments over each other, but can I say....wow. I just about died laughing when Brian woke up with the pillow.
Do you know how hard it is to explain without explaining why you are laughing your ass off to a twelve-year-old daughter? Well, I now do!! So thanks for that!! But considering the fifteen-year-old son caught on right quick and snorted coffee over himself? That made it all the funnier. ;)
Having had the most shitful day at work, it was made all better to come home, knowing that this was waiting for me to read. You two are a force to be reconded with, and I love how you have nailed the characters voices. I love the friendship between Brian and Ted, and my God, how dumb is Michael!!
Sheer brilliance, guys, and I continue to love this story like nothing else. Looking forward to more. Kerri. xxx
Author's Response:
Haven’t we all had moments when we’ve awakened with a pillow rather than what we were expecting? :D Okay, maybe not quite like Brian did... :D
Oh, you were brave to read in the vicinity of your kids. :D Damn, you should have gotten a photo of your son’s reaction. :D Are we right to suspect he’s a chip off the old block (you)?
Yay! that you think we’re keeping the guys IC. Admittedly, Michael isn’t (usually) that dumb in canon, but he’s great for comic relief in our story.
We’re chuffed that we could make up for a shitty workday. You’ve made us grin in return.
We hope to have a teaser for the next chapter up soon. :) Thanks for the delightful review, Kerri. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 19, 2018 4:33 am Title: Chapter 28: Wednesday, November 29th
"Where are they getting these from? Some kind of specialised muncher dictionary?"
I would like to know the answer of that one...haha.
That was an entertaining chapter...Poor Brian...omg...how long are u planning to make him suffer,,?? Is this his punishment for pushing justin away after robbery? Damn...u guys ...i am speechless.
Excellent update...really enjoyed it.
Thanks
Author's Response:
That level of nauseating cuteness may be beyond even the munchers... Dr Dave and Michael are in a league of their own. :D
If anyone is punishing Brian, it’s the stud himself. We keep trying to hand him clues about how he should approach Justin, but he’s positive his tactics are failsafe. We’ll have to see whether he’s right...
We love the multiple reviews! You should keep your eyes peeled, Navneet. Maybe you can hit the magic 200 - really close here on KD. :)
We hope to have a teaser for chapter 29 up soon, now that we’ve recovered from necking that bottle. :D
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 19, 2018 4:13 am Title: Chapter 28: Wednesday, November 29th
"First, I'll take a hello kiss," Em purred, tugging on Justin's arm until the lad obligingly bent over, and bussing him on the lips.
Brian scowled. No one but him should be kissing the blond brat. "Quit pawing at the kid, Honeycutt!" he demanded.
Emmett rolled his eyes, mocking, "Whatever, Bri. No need to-"
BE JEALOUS BRIAN...omfg...that was sooooo GOOD.
had to say that...ðŸ˜
Author's Response:
Emmett loves to yank Brian’s chain, and we love to help him. :D It’s so hilarious that Brian thinks he doesn’t do jealousy.
Thanks for letting us know you enjoyed this scene. :)
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 19, 2018 4:10 am Title: Chapter 28: Wednesday, November 29th
Damn...would u stop torturing poor brian..lol..ok...going back again.
Author's Response:
Uh, no can do. Torturing the stud is way too much fun. :D And, we saw that lol, so we know we’re making you laugh. :D
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 19, 2018 3:27 am Title: Chapter 28: Wednesday, November 29th
Just a quick reminder...U GUYS ARE EVIL...SUCH A TEASE.
Now going up to read further..😀
Author's Response:
We don’t need a reminder that we’re evil. :D And you’re only encouraging us to tease... :D
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 06, 2018 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 27: Tuesday, November 28th
I can't tell you how much I love this story. I full fledged did the happy wiggle when I saw you had updated. Looking forward to more. x
Author's Response:
Oh, wow, we're completely made up by such a compliment about our story. :D
I (Karynn) am likewise enthralled by your story, The Butterfly Effect. I'm ducking my head in shame for not yet leaving a review, although I favourited it and left kudos on AO3 some chapters ago. I was so good about reviewing before I started writing. *sigh* I will leave the rave review your story deserves soon - promise.
We're working on the next chapter now, although it will likely be a while before we post. Brynn's intensive master's programme comes first, as it should. :)
A teaser for chapter 28 is up in the FanDoc, in case you haven't peeked at it yet.
Wishing you a happy, healthy 2018, Kerri!
~ KaBrynn
Date: Jan 05, 2018 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 27: Tuesday, November 28th
What a good longer chapter. Many things are happening. I love the complicity of Ted and Cynthia and very slowly Brian misses Justin and he wants him back! Thank you for the update!
Author's Response:
We're glad you're still reading and reviewing after the long hiatus, Marie-france. :)
Poor Brian, with the way his employees are ganging up on him. :D Such a trial for our favorite adman. :D
Brian's been a bit slow on the uptake where Justin is concerned, lol. Will matters run smoothly now that he's starting to figure it out? That might be too simple...
Wishing you a happy, health 2008!
~ KaBrynn