[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2022 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 6: Exodus, Part 2 (aka Aftermath, Part 2)
Aw yay everyone lives happily and hornily ever after :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the trail of comments on this porny romp <3 You've made my weekend!
This tale was one of my earliest efforts and was the first non-RPS story I wrote. (RPS isn't to everyone's taste; it's still weird to me that I started with that). I don't know if I'll ever expand this universe, as was my original intention, but I'm satisfied as is.
~ Karynn
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2022 5:45 pm Title: Chapter 5: Exodus, Part 1 (aka Aftermath, Part 1)
Brian is a grade A teacher. Why was him telling Justin to kiss True so sexy?
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2022 5:21 pm Title: Chapter 4: Revelations, Part 3 (aka Initiations, Part 3)
Justin is so caring, Brian too, he just wont ever admit it lol
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2022 4:54 pm Title: Chapter 3: Revelations, Part 2 (aka Initiations, Part 2)
I love everything about this. How hot is possessive Brian? My ONLY criticism, and my gosh, it is so small, is just how often they call each other stud and twat. I think they do call each other that, but that is just me being a fussy bugger haha.
Thank you for writing this.
Author's Response:
Justin certainly doesn't seem to mind possessive Brian :P
I welcome concrit! This tale was intentionally over the top (duh), but I may have overdone it with stud and twat. If I ever go in to polish the story (I have made other edits to fix typos and broken links), I'll have a look-see.
~ Karynn
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2022 3:55 pm Title: Chapter 2: Revelations, Part 1 (aka Initiations, Part 1)
I need me a fan to cool myself down. What a lucky boy ol' True Sin is haha
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2022 3:13 pm Title: Chapter 1: Genesis (aka Interruptions)
Okay, this is so so hot. I always wanted a story like this, but where Cynthia gets off watching them, but this is even better. Way to go, Daphne, go save that boy
Author's Response:
Daphne never disappoints, right? ;)
Thanks for the wonderful compliments!
~ Karynn
Date: Jul 04, 2020 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 1: Genesis (aka Interruptions)
Such a fun read! I love the narrator's tongue in cheek tone. Fab!
Author's Response:
This comment made my Fourth of July! 😊 Thank you! I'm thrilled you enjoyed this cheeky romp.
~ Karynn, aka eureka1
Date: Jan 26, 2019 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 6: Exodus, Part 2 (aka Aftermath, Part 2)
kinky but good one
Author's Response:
Kinky can be good, right? :P
Thanks for leaving a note. :) It's great to get a comment on one of my older stories.
~ Karynn
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2017 5:59 am Title: Chapter 6: Exodus, Part 2 (aka Aftermath, Part 2)
lovely morning after with Daphne and 'quickie' shower sex. Cracked up with the FN Easter Egg and the brunch and the hand off to Todd.
Way to go on this very porny and tongue in cheek story. Love when humor finds a way into a plot without being forced. You handled it well here with drunk True Sin and pouty Brian and other examples to numerous to name.
Very well done and looking forward to more.
Saje
Author's Response:
Funny how those FN Easter Eggs keep cropping up. ;D
Thank you so much for the lovely compliments! I'm not sure I could write a story without humor - maybe I need to challenge myself.
Many, many thanks for all the comments. Now I'm averaging slightly more than 4 per chapter - makes this review whore very happy!
~Karynn
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2017 5:41 am Title: Chapter 5: Exodus, Part 1 (aka Aftermath, Part 1)
Justin the Angel allowed to give a kiss and Brian's internal emotional debate over it. Wonderful.
and no, you can't keep a good gay down..
Saje
Author's Response:
A touch of romance mixed in with the humor in this chapter . . . glad you enjoyed it, Saje. <3
~Karynn
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2017 5:31 am Title: Chapter 4: Revelations, Part 3 (aka Initiations, Part 3)
Lilliputian asshole!? I haven't muredered anyone with it yet!? Holy Christ you two are killing me with the one-liners!
And Daphne! Oh, to be her with the ringside view, or at the very least her stash of bestie porn and Thrusty!
Saje
Author's Response:
More happy dancing that I made you laugh with my one-liners.
I definitely have a little of this Daphne in me - okay, make that a lot. LOLOL What else did you expect from one of the inspirations for Backdoor Adventures? ;)
~Karynn
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2017 5:22 am Title: Chapter 3: Revelations, Part 2 (aka Initiations, Part 2)
Load shooting contests, rocket launchers, cum everywhere and blowies that last for an entire chapter. Whew!!
and let us not forget, Justin is the one with self control...lol
Saje
Author's Response:
More laughter and lots of sexual prowess on display. Such talented men!
Justin learned from the master. :D
Thanks for another review, Saje.
~Karynn
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2017 5:14 am Title: Chapter 2: Revelations, Part 1 (aka Initiations, Part 1)
Todd! Daph! Bets! Bum Chum!
hahahahahaaaaahahahaha!
Saje
Author's Response:
Methinks I made you laugh - success! :D
Thanks for the review.
~Karynn
Date: Feb 08, 2017 8:44 pm Title: Chapter 6: Exodus, Part 2 (aka Aftermath, Part 2)
To answer your question: nothing specific, but I love stories with Daphne and Emmett, and Gus as well. Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your input, Claire. :)
I can promise plenty of Gus, Daphne, Emmett, and other canon characters in the story which will precede IRBIH in the same universe. I haven't yet started writing that fic, which will start immediately post 5.13, although I have reams of notes, lol. Some of the plot threads in IRBIH may be introduced in that longer fic. Drama, romance, some porn - of course, family/friends, a dash of angst...
I'm not sure whether the sequel to IRBIH will merge the two stories or if it will be more of a porny stand-alone. At the moment, IRBIH is a porny interlude in the universe I'm creating. ;)
~Karynn
Date: Feb 07, 2017 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 6: Exodus, Part 2 (aka Aftermath, Part 2)
Hot and funny. Great ingredients for a wonderful story.
I hope you will continue to write as you let us think you will.
Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing! "Hot and funny" - just what I was aiming for, so I'm glad it worked. :)
Anything in particular that you'd like to see in a sequel? Let me know!
~Karynn
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2017 10:44 am Title: Chapter 6: Exodus, Part 2 (aka Aftermath, Part 2)
Very amusing and a relief that our boys did not stray too far from their "relationship" rules. Gotta feel sorry for Daphne though, all these hot men and never a hetero or even bi man amongst them lol.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you enjoyed the hilarity of this porny tale!
Our boys belong together and they're getting better at communicating their needs to each other. As long as they agree, no rules are broken, just stretched a tad, lol.
Daphne's getting a lot of satisfaction from her men while she waits for the right hetero or bi guy. He has to turn up sooner or later, right? Maybe in a sequel... ;)
Thanks for commenting!
~Karynn
Date: Feb 05, 2017 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 6: Exodus, Part 2 (aka Aftermath, Part 2)
LOVE this story and would love to delve more into this universe... and Dick In is SO not 100% hetero lol
Who wouldn't grow a crush on either Brian or Justin (in my case, both!!!), so I feel for Tru, but I'm glad Daphne caught it before it gets out of control
Deb will help set him on the right path as well!!!
more please!!!!
Author's Response:
You're review has made my day, Kathy! *doing a happy dance*
Dick In is definitely slip-sliding away on that Kinsey scale. Makes me think of a funny quote from a novel I read not long ago (not QaF, amazingly enough). Paraphrased from that story: Mormons wanting blow jobs are like coffee shops - one on every corner. (That quote could well appear in a sequel to IRBIH if the author gives permission.)
I also have the tiniest of crushes on both Justin and Brian. ;) Daphne to the rescue of all three men!
Any dangling plot threads in particular that you'd like me to follow up on? There are quite a few of them, lol. You can let me know in another review, on FB, in Hangouts, or by email.
Date: Feb 05, 2017 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 6: Exodus, Part 2 (aka Aftermath, Part 2)
Congrats on finishing an epic porn read! Lol! TAG
Author's Response:
Thank you for the five dildos up rating! I couldn't aspire to more. :D
You're wonderful - not only serving as a super-beta but also reviewing faithfully.
~Karynn
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 7:28 am Title: Chapter 5: Exodus, Part 1 (aka Aftermath, Part 1)
I'm ready for the shower sex scene, how about you? Lol! TAG
Author's Response:
Yes! Nice and steamy. Okay, okay, I'll take any sex with Justin, Brian . . . and their Sinner. :D
~Karynn
Date: Jan 30, 2017 9:31 pm Title: Chapter 5: Exodus, Part 1 (aka Aftermath, Part 1)
So much fun with Tru... I love that Brian is getting off on being a "teacher" and even allowed Justin to kiss Tru... Tru really needed to have his first kiss included and it was a good decision for the exemption to the rule!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for letting me know that you enjoyed Brian in the role of 'teacher' and approved of the expemption to their kissing rule. True is such a lucky guy!
~Karynn
Date: Jan 30, 2017 6:07 pm Title: Chapter 5: Exodus, Part 1 (aka Aftermath, Part 1)
Funny and hot: pretty good combination!
Author's Response:
I agree - definitely a good combo for our boys!
Thanks for reviewing. :)
~Karynn
Date: Jan 24, 2017 6:18 pm Title: Chapter 4: Revelations, Part 3 (aka Initiations, Part 3)
Funny and hot as Hell!!!
Well done
Author's Response:
Thank you for the wonderful review! Just what I wanted - funny & scorching hot. :)
More this coming Sunday.
~Karynn
Date: Jan 23, 2017 12:16 am Title: Chapter 4: Revelations, Part 3 (aka Initiations, Part 3)
the fact that Justin popping Tru's cherry turned Brian on so much, and the fact that he was sweet and caring doing it making Brian proud to be his partner was the best!!!
Brian has an idea??? can't wait for it!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for being the first to review chapter 4! Doing a happy dance over how much you enyoed this installment.
I just love Justin being so caring toward True. <3 Much like Brian was with him five years earlier, although it comes more naturally for our favorite blond.
Keep that idea of Brian's in mind. You'll know when to mention it again. ;)
~Karynn
Date: Jan 22, 2017 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 3: Revelations, Part 2 (aka Initiations, Part 2)
can't get enough of Jealous/Possessive Brian... he isn't fooling many and especially not Justin... love it!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're continuing to enjoy this story, Kathy. :)
Justin really has been on to Brian since day one and is pretty clever at dealing with his jealous and possessive stud. <3
Thanks for reviewing!
~Karynn
Date: Jan 16, 2017 3:47 pm Title: Chapter 3: Revelations, Part 2 (aka Initiations, Part 2)
I think my fave part is the 'Mormon Sperm Catapult'! Lolol! Great job! TAG
Author's Response:
True has mad skills! LOL
Thanks for reviewing - glad you enjoyed reading the chapter again. :)
~Karynn