Date: Oct 15, 2024 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 17
I've read some of the reviews for this chapter and I agree with everyone who is steamed about the munchers practically demanding to know how Brian will be providing for *their* children.
It's beyond obsurd that they even have the nerve to ask about Jenny, but to be honest, I haven't seen anyone say how obsurd it is for them to ask about Gus! I mean, we all know Brian is going to make provisions for him, but *legally*, which ought to be *all* up in Melanie's wheelhouse, he has absolutely no obligation whatsoever to provide any monetary assistance where Gus is concerned. Why is that never mentioned?
Also, we all know Mel can be a bitch, but I respected her character more because, at least, what you saw was what you got, but I thought Lindsay was worse! I absolutely loathed her character. She was a sneaky, conniving, spoiled bitch if there ever was one. I am enjoying these stories, but I do have to admit...the *intimate Wendy/Peter* moments between Brian and Lindsay are nauseating.
Date: May 28, 2021 7:55 pm Title: Chapter 20
The plot thickens!!! This was a great chapter, and definitely an eye opener for Joan!! She really got an up close and personal look into Brian and Justin's life and everyone included in their family and, if I'm not mistaken, may have even had a revelation. Could she actually be coming around? I sure hope so!!
Date: May 12, 2019 7:50 pm Title: Chapter 17
I love your storytelling. You have a beautiful imagination. I am currently re-reading this series. I loved it the first time and still find it as beautiful the second time. However, you are waaaay too forgiving when it comes to Michael, Melanie, Lindsay, Joan, and Craig. I think Joan and Craig deserved the attitudes the family had towards them. They asked for it with their behavior and belittling of their children. I don't feel that Joan has any right to expect Brian to pay for anything regarding her. As far as Michael, Melanie, and Lindsay are concerned, I'd tell them to kiss my ass and mean it. Brian is not responsible for their bills, their choices, or JR. JR is a wonderful child and we all know Brian and Justin will look out for her future anyway because she is family and they love her. But Mel and Lindz have no right to try to force their hands when they chose Michael as the father. They knew he wouldn't be able to provide for her when they asked him to be the father. Their choice, their consequences. And if anybody talked to my spouse or myself in such a denigrating way, their would be no friendship after the first three warnings were ignored.
Date: Jan 17, 2019 6:35 am Title: Chapter 17
really love this story, but in the future will the fact that JR is not Justin and Brian's daughter be adressed? I mena ralistically, she would not be treated the same because ther is a difference, and also the fact that the relationship between Brian and Mel, and also Brian and Micheal arent good.
Author's Response: That may be an issue from time to time. The fact that she is Gus' sister is more important to them.
Date: Oct 01, 2018 5:31 am Title: Chapter 17
Mel and Lindsey are creedy bitches.
Author's Response: You could say that.
Date: Sep 23, 2018 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 20
A cliffhanger! And Craig is being an ass as usual.
It's great for Brian and his mother to have this opportunity to have a new beginning.
Author's Response: Craig never changes.
Date: Sep 23, 2018 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 19
Chapter heavy on emotions! Is the end a new beginning for Brian and Joan?
Author's Response: That's very possible.
Date: Sep 23, 2018 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 18
Finally, everything went well, except Emmett's queening out; at least, it made Brian laugh so hard that he forgot his bad thoughts.
Author's Response: Emmett is always helpful ;)
Date: Sep 23, 2018 5:01 pm Title: Chapter 17
The munchers are greedy and mean bitches!!! I hate them! How dare they ask Brian to provide for JR when Mel made it clear that she didn't want Brian as the father of the second child. He is only good to help the kids they decided to have without thinking at the cost of said kids. Talk about irresponsibility.
Daphne is to come: good news!
Jennifer and Craig: she must feel so stupid for keeping her marriage afloat for so long.
Author's Response: The munchers never seem to hesitate to ask for money.
Date: Sep 23, 2018 1:14 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wonderful family life!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: Sep 23, 2018 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 15
Sydney is a great human being, a rock for Justin, after Brian of course.
The name of the cottage(s) is a wonderful idea and tribute to Edna.
Author's Response: Glad you like the name.
Date: Sep 23, 2018 11:47 am Title: Chapter 14
Brian can smirk all he wants in front of Father Tom, he can't speak in front of dear Mother Joan. It shows how deep he is wounded and how afraid he is that Bree would turn against him one day. He is lucky to have found Justin and his brother.
Author's Response: Brian still has some deep wounds.
Date: Sep 23, 2018 11:01 am Title: Chapter 13
Emmett barging in early morning and the frog: 2 of my favorite running jokes of this story/saga.
Author's Response: Thanks very much.
Date: Sep 23, 2018 6:59 am Title: Chapter 12
Justin has been tricked big time!
Author's Response: You think so.
Date: Sep 23, 2018 6:44 am Title: Chapter 11
Maybe Lacy finally sees that Justin is out of her reach, for so many reasons.
Author's Response: Obviously he is.
Date: Sep 23, 2018 6:25 am Title: Chapter 10
Genetic's wonder.
Author's Response: lol
Date: Sep 23, 2018 6:12 am Title: Chapter 9
Even if Gus understands Brian/Bree relationship, he must feels bad sometimes.
Joan is snaking her way back in Brian's life via people she didn't want to consider.
Author's Response: I don't know about Gus feeling bad. He had a pretty good childhood in this story.
Date: Sep 23, 2018 5:51 am Title: Chapter 8
Key discussion between father and son. Gus might be disappointed with Lacy as she is fascinated by Justin.
Author's Response: We'll see.
Date: Sep 23, 2018 5:29 am Title: Chapter 7
A hidden child: I bet they are going to go after her.
Author's Response: You think so?
Date: Sep 23, 2018 5:10 am Title: Chapter 6
I'm wondering how Lacy could pass for a boy while hustling; if it was only for BJ I could understand, but if it was not, how could she hide that she was a girl?
Author's Response: I guess it depends what the john wants her to do.
Date: Sep 23, 2018 1:36 am Title: Chapter 5
The end is hilarious: the frog and Brian stopping swearing just in time.
Author's Response: Those frogs keep popping up in our stories. lol
Date: Sep 22, 2018 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh, Patrick did drop the bomb!
Author's Response: LOL
Date: Sep 22, 2018 8:04 am Title: Chapter 3
Joan on hunting mode can't get good results.
Author's Response: Probably not. lol
Date: Sep 22, 2018 7:36 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh, the kids saw them and they better tell their husbands before it's outed.
Author's Response: We'll see.
Date: Sep 21, 2018 6:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I hope Justin won't have a nightmare and John won't have to deal with that.
Author's Response: That would be scary for both of them, but I'm sure John would handle it.