




Date: Mar 08, 2025 6:37 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Afterburn
These truly are the best of times. Perfect ending. If this could have been a season 6, it's a much better ending than the series.
Thanks for the great story.





Date: Mar 08, 2025 6:27 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Salvage
It's different when you're doing it to prove something. Sounds like something Mikey gets his jollies out of.
I love the non-wedding vows. See? Brian can be a sweetheart.





Date: Mar 08, 2025 6:20 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Overhaul
I love a Brian who's not afraid to say what he feels! A big house in the country; a swimming pool, and a tennis court. ;)





Date: Mar 08, 2025 6:06 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Ashes
FINALLY! Thank you, Brian. About time. The floor didn't open up and swallow you!





Date: Mar 08, 2025 5:59 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Smoldering
I wish I could shake Brian! What's his problem? He needs to lighten up. He's thinkling one thing, and saying another.





Date: Mar 08, 2025 5:47 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Backdraft
I was a little nervous about the chapter title. Backdraft means the fire could restart. Knowing Brian was in there, I was afraid this time, he'd get hurt.
Now it's time to talk.





Date: Mar 08, 2025 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Flashover.
Oh, Justin! Please try to talk to Brian. I know Brian doesn't like to talk, but try to get around that.





Date: Mar 08, 2025 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Hotspots
"But Brian does." WOW! What an impacting and sobering statement.





Date: Mar 08, 2025 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Combustion
Oh, please Brian. Still not an apology?





Date: Mar 08, 2025 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Accelerant.
Glad Justin's burns aren't too serious. But come on, Brian, you should have been groveling with apologies. At least taken some blame.





Date: Mar 08, 2025 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Spark.
Oh, Brian! I hope that wasn't intentional lying to Justin!





Date: Mar 08, 2025 4:24 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Smoke.
What a beginning! Wow! I'm gonna take for granted Brian isn't in there. Is he in the hospital? Was that a fireman trying to pull him out?
Date: Aug 08, 2018 5:07 am Title: Chapter 12 - Afterburn
I read this from start to finish. God, I never tire of them. I love writers that keep me caring by the shear visuals of their words. Thanks
Date: Jul 10, 2017 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Afterburn
The perfect ending for a great story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Date: Jul 10, 2017 9:55 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Salvage
The perfect commitment for these two.
Date: Jul 10, 2017 9:50 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Overhaul
Who wouldn't fall in love with him?
Date: Jul 10, 2017 9:48 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Ashes
OMG. Finally exactly what Justin needed to hear.
Date: Jul 10, 2017 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Smoldering
Oh Brian. Why can't you just say it out loud for once.
Date: Jul 10, 2017 9:38 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Backdraft
I hope they both listen well.
Date: Jul 10, 2017 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Flashover.
This is really sad.
Date: Jul 10, 2017 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Hotspots
Justin needs to think really hard about what he wants out if this relationship.
Date: Jul 10, 2017 6:53 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Combustion
Why does he have to be so stubborn?
Date: Jul 10, 2017 6:48 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Accelerant.
Brian should just have apologized in my opinion.
Date: Jul 10, 2017 6:45 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Spark.
That will be a hard one to explain.
Date: Jul 10, 2017 6:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Smoke.
Wow, what a start for a story. I hope no one was seriously hurt in this.