Date: Dec 18, 2016 9:03 am Title: Chapter 12 - Afterburn
I loved it!!!!
Date: Dec 17, 2016 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Accelerant.
I feel sorry for Justin. Hopefully Brian wakes up on time.
Date: Dec 17, 2016 9:20 am Title: Chapter 12 - Afterburn
Loved it☺
Date: Dec 17, 2016 12:39 am Title: Chapter 12 - Afterburn
Perfect ending...soooo loved it..thanks for hard work...ur very much appriciated....hugs to u.
Date: Dec 17, 2016 12:00 am Title: Chapter 12 - Afterburn
Awesome story from start to finish. I love how you wrote both Brian and Justin. Thanks for a great story!!
Date: Dec 16, 2016 8:16 am Title: Chapter 11 - Salvage
Omg that was sooooo amazing...i love their conversation..superb...great work u have done..keep it up..i really enjoy reading ur stories..thank u.
Date: Dec 14, 2016 2:10 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Ashes
Omg omg that was sooooo awesomeee...loved it.
Date: Dec 14, 2016 1:53 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Overhaul
Oh wow...that was soooo awesome...incredible.ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Date: Dec 13, 2016 11:32 am Title: Chapter 9 - Ashes
Omg omg that was sooooo awesomeee...loved it.
Date: Dec 13, 2016 11:12 am Title: Chapter 8 - Smoldering
Wow...i am speechless.
Date: Dec 10, 2016 10:41 am Title: Chapter 6 - Flashover.
Oh wow...thats very hard decision he made... i am eagrely waiting for next chapter.
Date: Dec 08, 2016 9:34 am Title: Chapter 5 - Hotspots
Emotional one...thanks for posting.
Date: Dec 06, 2016 8:00 am Title: Chapter 4 - Combustion
Well this is depressing...😯😯 looking forward for more...thank u for the update.
Date: Dec 05, 2016 11:36 am Title: Chapter 3 - Accelerant.
Wow that was ...no words..what is he going to do now??? Really nice chapter waiting for more...thanks.
Date: Dec 03, 2016 5:31 am Title: Chapter 2 - Spark.
U scared me there... wow brian will never change ...justin made me cry...😢...cant wait for more...thank u for update.
Date: Dec 03, 2016 4:14 am Title: Chapter 2 - Spark.
Just read the first two chaps. and already looking for more.
Thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Date: Dec 03, 2016 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1 - Smoke.
Ooooooooh, what is happening??????????
Date: Dec 02, 2016 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Smoke.
An interesting start, to say the least. Very good use of varied sentence structure to convey urgency here. Good characterization for Justin and good use of limited POV. Looking forward to seeing where this is going.
Date: Dec 02, 2016 6:51 am Title: Chapter 1 - Smoke.
Omg.... what is happening here...😨😨😨 ??? Cant wait for more...super chapter...thank u.
Date: Dec 02, 2016 5:27 am Title: Chapter 1 - Smoke.
Okay . . . That's a pretty eventful first chapter! TAG