Date: Oct 27, 2018 2:40 am Title: Chapter 6
This is a great plot line...I wish it was longer!
Date: Aug 20, 2017 6:58 am Title: Chapter 6
That's exactly how Brian would handle it. Great work.
Date: Aug 20, 2017 6:48 am Title: Chapter 5
When will he tell him?
Date: Aug 19, 2017 7:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
So Carl is going to talk to Debbie first. That's probably a wise decision.
Date: Aug 19, 2017 6:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
I actually think Brian would be okay with Carl being his father. Although he will be hurt that that's the reason Jack hit him. He will probably feel very betrayed by his mother.
Date: Aug 19, 2017 5:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
Carl? Wow, I didn't expect that. I wonder what Brian will think about that.
Date: Aug 19, 2017 5:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
So Claire did help him when they were younger? What happened to change that?
Date: Nov 09, 2016 2:30 am Title: Chapter 6
Love that Brian called Joanie out about how she only ever thought of herself. Deb was great not only with Carl but with Brian as well; she behaved like a true mother. And of course, Joanie didn't disappoint either. She kept to her holier than thou attitude even when talking to Carl. Wonderful story!
Deb
Date: Nov 09, 2016 2:05 am Title: Chapter 5
Certainly glad that Debbie was a lot more understanding than I thought she might be. But like she told Carl, we all have pasts.
Looking forward to more!
Deb
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2016 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
I think Brian is happy to know the truth. Shame Carl didn't at the time, the difference it could have made of Brian's life.
Date: Nov 08, 2016 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
I would love more to this story please!!! How they end up getting along, reactions from
the rest of the family AND the further progress of Brian and Justin since B said I love you 🙂
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2016 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 5
Rats, who would have thought Carl was a coward. Or does he plan to talk to Joan first?
Date: Nov 08, 2016 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
I want everyone to know, it will be a shock, but I think Justin will be able to help Brian deal with it AND Brian would have the "reason" Jack was always so awful to him, maybe he'll open his heart more!
Date: Nov 08, 2016 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
I can't believe joan would keep the news from Carl! And watching Jack beat Brian, and still say nothing!!! Ugh
Date: Nov 08, 2016 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
I am so happy Justin stayed!
can't wait for Brian to find out! Carl would have been a GREAT father
Date: Nov 08, 2016 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
I LOVE the secret!!!
Date: Nov 08, 2016 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Remembering the scene from the show made me sad and angry again... The flashback was just heartbreaking
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2016 7:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wouldn't it be nice if we had a picture of Joan back then to see what attracted Carl to her. Michael seems to be okay with Justin getting back with Brian.
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2016 7:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
It's good to see Brian back with Justin. It's funny how Justin would go out of his way to help Brian even though they are no longer together, when Michael, Brian's 'best friend' never even tried. What will happen when Carl confronts Joan? A Joan who put her religion first yet had an affair?
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2016 7:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
So Brian is really Carl's son? That's a twist and one I like.
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2016 7:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
So Claire wasn't always mean to her brother?
Date: Nov 08, 2016 4:16 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh, Joanie, Joanie, Joanie, you little sinner you! Poor Carl... or maybe not! Makes you wonder how Joanie would have turned out if she had left Jack and stayed with Carl. But then, Brian wouldn't be the Brian we all know and love.
So glad to see that Brian will be more considerate of what he says around Justin and that Michael is finally a grown up! :)
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Deb
Date: Nov 08, 2016 4:12 am Title: Chapter 3
I love how Brian admits that Justin has always belonged at the loft. Beautiful reunion!
Oh, I wonder how Carl is going to handle all this.
Deb
Date: Nov 08, 2016 4:09 am Title: Chapter 2
Uh-oh! Now we know why Jack hated Brian. Carl?! OH MY! How is everyone going to react to this little bit of information? Debbie? Brian? Joan? Claire? I'm betting there's going to be a few upset people!
Love that you included Justin getting Brian's bracelet back and proving that John lied about Brian. They always took care of each other even when they were apart.
Deb