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Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2018 3:59 am Title: Chapter 7

Just found this story yesterday and wow what a story.  Used up more tissues than usual.  I kept hoping that it was Justin being out of it, but was afraid it was true about Gus.  Thank you for the happy ending.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2017 7:39 am Title: Chapter 7

This is an amazing story. So real and emotional. Thank you for sharing it with us. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2017 7:35 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh thank god. Please tell me this is reality. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2017 7:25 am Title: Chapter 5

I'm crying here. This is so sad. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2017 7:07 am Title: Chapter 4

Why does he keep dreaming of Gus? It sounds like he is in the hospital as well. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2017 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 3

Poor Justin. He must be so confused. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2017 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

OMG this is so sad. But why did he hear Gus? And where is Brian?

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2017 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Noooooo. Please let Gus be alright. 

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2016 7:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Excellent story! The suspense was killer. Thanks for writing and for posting this here on KD! TAG

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:52 pm Title: Chapter 7

Ok, now I am just crying happy tears... this was soo good, thinking I figured it out, then doubting it, then to find out I was thankfully right... great story!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 6

I'm so freaking happy right now!!!!!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:39 pm Title: Chapter 5

Ok, I'm starting to think when Gus is visiting him, he is really in a coma... they is the hospital letting him visit. Justin took the bullet for Gus saving him, and this is all playing out in his head while he is recovering...

 

please please let my theory be right! **fingers crossed**

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 4

I really hope Justin's thoughts aren't true and that Brian and Lindsay wont be able to be near him because he happened to be the one with Gus when it happened :( 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:30 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm sure it's not, but I am hoping like hell this is all a coma dream or something and Gus is alive, but I'm sure this is a story about coping and dealing with this horror

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:26 pm Title: Chapter 2

OMG, I think my heart just broke... I'm sitting here sobbing like this is real and I am in mourning

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG... please let Gus be alright!  

Reviewer: Wendy Dawn Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2016 3:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Such an emotional roller coaster you created! Great job explaining about head injuries and hallucinations. Poor Justin! I cried with him and Brian, then was so happy it was all a dream. 

Wonderful job and imaginative twists. 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2016 11:36 am Title: Chapter 7

Loved this story.  Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2016 11:30 am Title: Chapter 6

Thank you so much for making that all a dream! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2016 10:07 am Title: Chapter 7

I got my happy ending.  Thank you!

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2016 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 6

While I've read this before, it's a nice reminder to read it again. I found myself in tears reading it alothough not for teh first (of 5th) time. still gets to me every time.

Poor justin's confusion. Must be awful for him thinking Gus hadn't made it. Trying to figure out reality from his dreams. which one was which...

Such a lovely and heart wrentching story.

Looking forward to teh next chapter so I can put it onto my kindle.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2016 4:40 pm Title: Chapter 6

Yes, yes, yes.  Happy dance.  Loving this story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2016 4:35 pm Title: Chapter 5

It's good that Brian is able to talk Justin into staying with him.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2016 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 5

Again, you have me crying a ton of tears.  This story is so heart-wrenching.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2016 2:24 am Title: Chapter 4

I like your story I really do.  But I keep wishing that Justin was in the coma and Gus was alive.  Did you have this posted elsewhere? 

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