[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2025 3:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
All's well, that ends well. Thank god it was just Justin hallucinating. What some awful stuff to be dreaming when in a coma. There's no escaping it.
Very good story. Kept me on the edge of my seat.
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2025 3:09 pm Title: Chapter 6
OMG! I just broke out in chills. My god, this was his subconcious when he was in a coma? What relief!
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2025 3:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
Is it survivor's guilt? That seems like something both Brian and Justin would feel at this time. Then the funeral, and Justin couldn't be there to say his goodbyes.
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2025 2:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
God for the weight of guilt Justin is feeling. It's almost too much. It's nice that some of the family is visiting him.
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2025 2:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
Is he hallucinating? How did he hear Gus' voice? Is it from the shot they gave him?
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2025 2:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG! Did Gus really die? Poor Justin. Just to think he's got all this going on.
[Report This]Date: Mar 08, 2025 2:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Stressful first chapter. So... on to the next.
Date: Jan 24, 2018 3:59 am Title: Chapter 7
Just found this story yesterday and wow what a story. Used up more tissues than usual. I kept hoping that it was Justin being out of it, but was afraid it was true about Gus. Thank you for the happy ending.
Date: Jul 10, 2017 7:39 am Title: Chapter 7
This is an amazing story. So real and emotional. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Date: Jul 10, 2017 7:35 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh thank god. Please tell me this is reality.
Date: Jul 10, 2017 7:25 am Title: Chapter 5
I'm crying here. This is so sad.
Date: Jul 10, 2017 7:07 am Title: Chapter 4
Why does he keep dreaming of Gus? It sounds like he is in the hospital as well.
Date: Jul 09, 2017 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
Poor Justin. He must be so confused.
Date: Jul 09, 2017 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG this is so sad. But why did he hear Gus? And where is Brian?
Date: Jul 09, 2017 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Noooooo. Please let Gus be alright.
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2016 7:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excellent story! The suspense was killer. Thanks for writing and for posting this here on KD! TAG
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ok, now I am just crying happy tears... this was soo good, thinking I figured it out, then doubting it, then to find out I was thankfully right... great story!
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'm so freaking happy right now!!!!!
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ok, I'm starting to think when Gus is visiting him, he is really in a coma... they is the hospital letting him visit. Justin took the bullet for Gus saving him, and this is all playing out in his head while he is recovering...
please please let my theory be right! **fingers crossed**
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really hope Justin's thoughts aren't true and that Brian and Lindsay wont be able to be near him because he happened to be the one with Gus when it happened :(
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm sure it's not, but I am hoping like hell this is all a coma dream or something and Gus is alive, but I'm sure this is a story about coping and dealing with this horror
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG, I think my heart just broke... I'm sitting here sobbing like this is real and I am in mourning
Date: Nov 08, 2016 5:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG... please let Gus be alright!
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2016 3:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Such an emotional roller coaster you created! Great job explaining about head injuries and hallucinations. Poor Justin! I cried with him and Brian, then was so happy it was all a dream.
Wonderful job and imaginative twists.
Date: Nov 08, 2016 11:36 am Title: Chapter 7
Loved this story. Thanks for sharing.