[Report This]Date: Sep 30, 2018 2:02 pm Title: Chapter 15
Fantastic read! And a unique plot. This was my second time reading, and it was just as powerful as the first.
Date: Jul 12, 2017 9:06 am Title: Chapter 15
What an amazing story. Very emotional and full of love.
Date: Jul 12, 2017 8:19 am Title: Chapter 14
I think suing the school is a great idea. Also I'm glad that our boys seem to be okay.
Date: Jul 12, 2017 8:08 am Title: Chapter 13
That's an extremely hard question. I have no idea what he should say to that.
Date: Jul 12, 2017 7:57 am Title: Chapter 12
Shit. But how is this Brian's fault? Like he said he can't even remedy hat the guy looked like.
Date: Jul 12, 2017 7:28 am Title: Chapter 11
Brian acknowledging all of this is a step in the right direction. I'm kind of proud of him.
Date: Jul 12, 2017 7:03 am Title: Chapter 10
I'm glad Brian realized that everything is not alright.
Date: Jul 11, 2017 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 9
Typically Michael. I can't believe he told almost everyone. How could a real friend behave like that.
Date: Jul 11, 2017 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 8
Brian's mother is a bitch. Thank god for Gus.
Date: Jul 11, 2017 9:18 pm Title: Chapter 7
Poor Justin. I can kind of understand Brian but this must be so hard for Justin too.
Date: Jul 11, 2017 8:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
I don't get how Debbie could break her promise like that. It's not her secret to tell. Brian will be furious once he finds out.
Date: Jul 11, 2017 8:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
I don't think Brian is ready to face the situation. Until than any help will be futile.
Date: Jul 11, 2017 6:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
I wonder what Brian will be like once he wakes up completely.
Date: Jul 11, 2017 5:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
This will be a real test for their relationship. I hope they make it.
Date: Jul 11, 2017 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
I don't believe that Debbie will keep her mouth shut. That's just not her.
Date: Jul 11, 2017 5:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
What happened? I hope Brian will be alright physically.
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2016 4:03 pm Title: Chapter 15
I really love this story. Love how protective and caring Justin is towards Brian. It's nice to see the hurt/comfort dynamic reversed like this. Thanks for writing. TAG
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2016 2:16 am Title: Chapter 15
A well done story with a fantastic ending. But I do wish that they'd caught the creep.
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2016 1:51 am Title: Chapter 14
Brian's fighting back! And Justin's fighting back too. But is Mel the worst lawyer Brian knows? This keeps getting better and better. Funny if the blond turned out to be Hobbs.
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2016 1:41 am Title: Chapter 13
Well, Debbie was wrong. Even if he had looked at the mug shots, there wouldn't have been a match. Blaming Brian in a crowded place will cause more harm than not. Glad that Justin's moving back in.
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2016 4:02 am Title: Chapter 12
Now buying Justin a car with a stick shift was a little over the line, though his reasoning was superb. Things were going good. Brian admitted to Justin that they were partners, then along comes another death. Deb's attitude defies description. How to make the man who was a son to her feel really bad. I admit that I do like the way Ted is in this chapter.
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2016 3:14 am Title: Chapter 11
Writing down how this has affected him may make him understand why he's feeling like he does. I love it that he's let down his walls and is trusting Justin. Deb is being a witch. She's not thinking of Brian at all.
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2016 1:51 am Title: Chapter 10
It's good that Brian and Justin are working together again and hopefully the looking at mug shots helps. I'm still mad at Deb and by extention Mikey. This episode is all their fault.
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2016 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 9
Michael and his big mouth. "I know what happened." Small brains. Very small brains. Makes me want to scream. Justin told Deb not to tell anyone. So she tells Michael anyways, who tells Ted and Ben. Stupid. Me, I would never trust Deb again.
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2016 5:01 am Title: Chapter 8
Gus, the cure for what ail's ya. It's good Justin is not bailing. It wouldn't hurt to follow Ray's advice a little. Wonder who Lindsay's having an overnight with? Deb once again putting her foot in it. Joan is not good for much, perhaps if she'd loved her kids, they would have loved her.