Date: Aug 31, 2018 5:55 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!! OH DEB... I really have to hand this to you. Right when I was going to read this, I put a lozenge in my mouth. Huge, HUGE, mistake! When I got to the part when you descrubed Mikey's outfit, I started giggling, and by the time I got to Justin, whispering to Brian that it was see-through, I lost it! IT was frickin hilarious! I'm so happy you pointed out in one other reviews that this was based on one of your Plot Bunnies, so I made sure to read it. I noticed it wasn't you that placed the #5 bunny, but cakdg, so sorry about that. I went through NoChasers stories again, also checked her chapter end notes, still never foind the stories... hmm... oh well. Thanks for all your contributions both in your writing and your Plot Bunnies.
Hugs, Cathy
Author's Response:
LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed it, Cathy! Maybe I should put a warning on it: No food, drink, or lozenges while reading! LOL! I got the idea for writing this one from a review by YumYumPM who visualized Michael dressed this way. I snatched it up and ran! Bwahahaha-ing all the way! :) It was a lot of fun writing everyone's reactions.
Cakdg has a lot of really good bunnies posted. I'm hoping more will be snatched up soon.
Thanks for reading and reviewing my plot bunnies and stories! I really appreciate it!
*Hugs*
Deb
Date: Aug 25, 2016 11:03 am Title: Chapter 1
HAHA... loved that... I figured there had to be a twist, and I was thinking naked or even the apron, but damn, the stilettos got me... but then picturing the same outfit from Lindsay, I actually laughed out loud LOL
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I was able to make you laugh! Thanks for the review! :)
Deb
Date: Aug 24, 2016 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1
hahaha! Hilarious!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it and thank you for the review! :)
Deb
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2016 10:32 am Title: Chapter 1
ROFLMAO! A more perfect story I've never read. Thank you.
Author's Response:
:) You're very welcome! And thank you for the plot! I never would have written this if you hadn't reviewed my other story! LOL The image you described certainly deserved a story!
Thank you for such a great compliment and for the reviews!
Deb
Date: Aug 23, 2016 10:18 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm still laughing. Really enjoyed this...
Author's Response:
I'm happy I could make you laugh! I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the review!
Deb
Date: Aug 23, 2016 7:27 am Title: Chapter 1
This is hilarious (the different reactions from each visitor is so much fun).
I will have to bleach my eyes after reading this; the apron was worse than the shoes.
I also loved Justin's comment about the lasagna and Brian's reply.
Thank you for this morning delight!!!
Author's Response:
You're very welcome for this morning's delight! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and that I was able to make you laugh!
Thank you for the great compliment and review!
Deb
Date: Aug 23, 2016 4:04 am Title: Chapter 1
LMAO!!! The reactions of Brian and Drew!! That would have been my reaction as well! In the meantime, you have made me laugh so hard with this little plot bunny. It's scary to think what might be going on passed Michael toppling over on the heels. Gotta grudgingly give him credit though since not many women would attempt those shoes in a kitchen much less anywhere else.
Great job weaving this short but WONDERFUL tale!!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thanks, Nicelle! I'm glad I could make you laugh! To be honest, I'm not sure I want to imagine what went on after Michael toppled over! That is definitely a scary thought! :)
I know I'd never try walking in stilettos; I have enough trouble barefoot!
Thanks for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Deb