Date: Aug 17, 2016 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
Poor Justin having both Brian and a mother at school looking at his ass and acknowledging it.
Michael is seeking for attention with Elle even if she is not his daughter.
I particularly loved this:
“Brian you realize I’m never going to be able to read Superman again without getting hard.” Michael whines.
“Like that would be new, Mikey.” Brian tells everyone.
Excellent chapter!
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2016 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hahahahah! This is so funny. Even Kyle is dissing Michael. Kyle's article seems to be doing fine. Wonder what he says about Emmett. Emmett is a hoot. The diners helping was wonderful. Kyle is going to have a hard time resisting Gus.
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2016 3:01 am Title: Chapter 10
Think of everything Kyle's learned. And Brian gave him permission to court Gus. Which isn't really a heartship. I like what Emmett said "You should move here, we like you." Mikey couldn't name one neat thing he's done. LOL.
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2016 12:34 am Title: Chapter 1
As hard as it is to write about the gang I think Kyle is secretly having fun with these outrageous people and their whiplash conversations.
Brian and Justin asking each other to Marry Me out such a big smile on my face and I Loved It!!
Every New Chapter just makes me laugh, especially Gus's antics with Kyle, he is way too like Julia fathers and I hope he never changes. :)
Date: Aug 16, 2016 4:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
HA! Such fun!! Love that I'm smiling through all the updates, giggling at times. Poor Kyle is in the thick of it now. LOL. good thing they all seem to be accepting him. This continual tennis match is so entertaining!!
gus is a little minx! Mischevious little shit ain't he?! Between trying to hit on Kyle and getting his little sister in trouble....you sure can tell he's a Kinney, with a heap of Justin thrown in via osmosis. :)
Michael is still a whiner but in a fairly innocent way. Still acts like he's 12 at times, but I guess it's just who he is, and the group have learned to deal with it.
LOVED the ending of this chapter! So sweet!! Big assed smile on my face!
Kyle is going to have one hell of a story from all of these guys! His editor is hopfully going to love every installment.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Aug 16, 2016 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
This is so much fun. Again, it's fresh and original with a wicked sense of humor, like your other stories. So we're up to two weddings-- I wonder if there will be three? And, I wonder if they'll be an article or a book... lol.
[Report This]Date: Aug 16, 2016 11:24 am Title: Chapter 9
PS you also take the points that bothered me most about the series and address them.
[Report This]Date: Aug 16, 2016 11:15 am Title: Chapter 9
You have the best dialogues. Do the characters talk in your head and you just write it down? It sounds like fun.
Date: Aug 16, 2016 3:12 am Title: Chapter 8
I feel sorry for Kyle, he needs a VENN diagram to figure out half the conversations.
Great story!
[Report This]Date: Aug 16, 2016 3:02 am Title: Chapter 8
Definately a fun filled day. Having to listen to Mikey, having Gus explain Mikey. Learning that asking questions doesn't always get you answers.
Date: Aug 15, 2016 9:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
Kyle's first view of the diner is pretty funny (I love the warnings Emmett and Deb gave Kyle about Brian and Justin).
And this is my favorite part:
“Emmett, if you're imagining Justin and Brian, I don’t keep you busy enough.” Drew Boyd tells Emmett. How many famous people come here?
“Drewsy, if you kept me any busier, I’d be in traction.” Emmett starts kissing Drew.
“Okay knock it off, you're just encouraging Brian.” Debbie tells Emmett.
Date: Aug 15, 2016 9:05 pm Title: Chapter 7
just giving an overall as I read all 7 chapters yesterday. this should prove to have a ton of laughs! Very enjoyable so far!
I feel for Kyle. He must feel like he's at a tennis match a bit, turning his head trying to take in what every one is saying. they are all so used to talking to and over each other, that it's nothg for then to carry on differenct conversations, and jump from topic to topic. good idea that he wrote a bit of hi experience, I can see things getting pretty confusing.
Him talking to Michael was funny. Wrong chap to pick first....or at all really. lol. Michael is still the petualnt pouty child, but is harmless. Just very immature. I didn't trust his want to be around Elle at first, wondering if it was lingering feelings to Brian, but then I remembered that you weren't really going there with this fic, so now I'm just taking it for what it is. He's getting attention, even if it is from a child. lol.
Such fun this one. I'm imagining it all in my head as I read it and loving it. Your humour in all your fics is perfect. It's either out right funny, or incredibly subtle. Whichever way to do it, it's perfect.
Well done Star!!! keep it coming.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Aug 15, 2016 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
I just love how comfortable everyone is with each other... even Mel and Brian are just playful, not mean LOL
and Mikey is whiney, but you can't fix that LOL
Date: Aug 15, 2016 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 6
awwwww, Em and Drewsie!!!!!
and Mikey is jealous his article is now a group thing LOL
Date: Aug 15, 2016 8:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
I think I love flirty Gus... he is soooo gonna be his father (if he isn't already) lol
Date: Aug 15, 2016 8:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm so happy they are including Kyle in everything... seems a bit odd especially since they know he's a reporter, but he doesn't seem intrusive... yet anyway so I like it :)
Date: Aug 15, 2016 7:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
I like that the "gang" is wary of Kyle, but giving him the benefit so far... :)
Date: Aug 15, 2016 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
I hope Kyle actually fits in well with the group... he seems nice enough.. don't cross any lines buddy!!!!
Date: Aug 15, 2016 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting and funny beginning!
I'm just wondering how Elle can like/love Michael: maybe because he has her age mentally?
So happy to have a new story from you.
You always come with new ideas, new themes, new moods; always a surprise.
I read your previous story and loved it but haven't yet commented it; the updates were too frequent and I wanted to read them fast.
;-))
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2016 4:37 am Title: Chapter 7
Kyle doesn't need to ask question. People just blurt out whatever they are thinking. lol. It's a good thing Elle love Mikey and that everyone is helping Emmett out.
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2016 4:26 am Title: Chapter 6
I thought the article was well worded. Now there's two marriages for Kyle's series. Michael is a prude.
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2016 2:01 am Title: Chapter 5
Love how everyone has something interesting to add. Shame Kyle doesn't know the backstory to half of it.
Author's Response:
Gus is going to fill him in while flirting with him, but I think half the fun is in him trying to figure out these crazy people.
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2016 1:51 am Title: Chapter 4
With everything Kyles learning he needs to start on his story. The kids have taken over.
Author's Response:
Part of what's going on is they don't really want to be interviewed so they keep him from asking questions. Well except for Mikey.
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2016 1:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Kyle is going to get whiplash trying to keep up with all these different conversations, if he had a tape recorder the thing would go on strike lol
I am laughing at all theses different conversations and the reactions of Kyle trying to figure out who or what they are talking about.
Thanks For Making Me Laugh :)
Author's Response:
Your welcome. I wanted to laugh too.
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2016 12:43 am Title: Chapter 3
I like Kyle. He can stay. He picked the wrong person to interview first though. At least Justin rescued him.
Author's Response:
I think it would be funny to sit in a room with all the charaters.