[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2016 4:39 am Title: Chapter 17
Got to admit I thought Justin was smarter then that. So while everyone is arguing about how to get over the fence Blake went over and came back and nobody noticed. Cool. But does he think Emmett should be told or shouldn't be told? It's a forgone conclusion that Kyle and Gus are going to end up together, for which I'm very happy.
Author's Response:
Blake thought Emmett should have to wait.
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2016 12:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Three funny chapters that just made my night!
I can't wait for Emmett to see his surprise I just know he will love it, Michael as usual has no filter around small ears, though Stuart running around without his clothes made me giggle (Sure he isn't Brian's kid? lol).
Kyle is really apart of the gang cause they all like him, Gus might not wait two years, but I bet it would be fun to read about Kyle trying to hold off Gus for that long.
Don't want this to end but I know I will enjoy reading it over and over again :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I decided to write a whole story next then post it when I finished. This one is going to be done in two more chapters. It might be a while before I post after this. I appreciate everyone reading my crazy thoughts.
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2016 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wow! Wonderful chapter. Using Elle as an excuse to see what's behind the fence. That would spoil the surprise. Though if Michael really worked on the comic story it would keep him out of trouble. Two years how is Kyle going to last. It looks like most of them will want him to hang around. You've made me hungry with talk of the luau.
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2016 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 15
It looks like Gus has finally won Kyle over. Good job. Poor Emmett, I'm surprised that Mikey's still alive. Good thing the kids are on the second bus. Jen will keep them in line and not traumatise them like Michael would. Wake me when the movie is over.
Date: Aug 20, 2016 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 14
I don't want Kyle to go back to NY... I like him as part of the gang :)
Author's Response:
He has to go, because he needs to grow up. He has things to do first.
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2016 4:18 am Title: Chapter 14
Hahahaha! Can't get over Michael and his pictures. Even Ben isn't going to be there. No matter what Michael always brings the conversation around to Brian. Like how well Kyle is fitting in. Don't make him go home to New York!
Date: Aug 19, 2016 2:09 pm Title: Chapter 13
I appreciate this story so much... such a nice perspective of the whole gang
[Report This]Date: Aug 19, 2016 1:01 pm Title: Chapter 13
Another sucessful non-interview. I often wonder if Michael ever listens to himself when he talks and if he actually believes half the stuff that comes out of his mouth. Like how you throw stuff we saw in the series in this. The dialog is soooo amusing. Keep it up.
Date: Aug 19, 2016 5:14 am Title: Chapter 13
The last 2 paragraphs say all what we feel from this story and the series; I guess that's part of why we love QAF so much.
Author's Response:
Thank you for enjoying the stories. I am almost done with this one. My next one will take a while.
Date: Aug 18, 2016 10:40 am Title: Chapter 12
that is the PERFECT wedding for the two of them... quick, no fuss, and where they both reign!
Date: Aug 18, 2016 5:24 am Title: Chapter 12
Yeah!!! They did it the simplest way possible: in the gay temple with their family.
Gus hitting on Kyle is so entertaining. Poor guy/kid, there is always somebody to get to his ear.
I love Melanie dry humor and how dumb (but not too much) you portray Michael.
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2016 4:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I love the fact you let Brian and Justin get married the way they wanted not the way the gang would have done it (I love Emmett, but this is Brian and Justin here).
Hope Kyle doesn't get drunk or Gus won't wait until he is eighteen and he won't have to worry about writing his story because Brian will kill him lol
Michael getting interrupted was just perfect and makes Brian and Justin's wedding day so complete.
Now they can go on their honeymoon and continue their "Talking" which is always HOT and no Michael Can't Come!! *rofl*
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2016 3:15 am Title: Chapter 12
Michael just can't keep his mouth shut. Even Kyle's had enough. This chapter was funny, delightful and just what one would expect from Brian.
Date: Aug 17, 2016 8:25 pm Title: Chapter 11
And the "talk" is back:
- Jennifer with Brian: hilarious how she jumped in
- Gus with Kyle in his continuous flirting
- Brian about Michael and Ben lack of
Another amazing chapter where discussions were going in every direction. Too many things for Kyle to remember; he's not near having another article ready for the next publication.
Date: Aug 17, 2016 8:08 pm Title: Chapter 10
It's amazing how you build these banters between all these persons.
It's funny, sweet, fluid and there is no down time.
Poor Kyle, chased and teased by Gus, unable to get any article ready for his boss.
Date: Aug 17, 2016 8:07 pm Title: Chapter 11
can't get enough.. post away... quickly LOL
Date: Aug 17, 2016 7:59 pm Title: Chapter 10
love the levity of the entire story... funny, but brings up some special times! <3
Date: Aug 17, 2016 7:50 pm Title: Chapter 9
I think Gus hitting on Kyle continuously is so fabulous... reminds me of Hunter always after Brian LOL
Date: Aug 17, 2016 7:47 pm Title: Chapter 9
This is soooooo good!!
I love how you describe Brian and Justin still into each other that much and how they asked the other one to get married.
The exchanges between Gus, Kyle, Brian and Justin are delightful (Justin realizing he's becoming like his parents).
We got a small "talk" joke.
Date: Aug 17, 2016 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love that Kyle is still trying to keep up.
Obviously he has been accepted (pretty much) since he showed them his article and his intentions and everyone talks to him and nobody seems to hold back which is fantastic!
Date: Aug 17, 2016 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
Gus and Kyle exchanges are delicious.
Gus and Jenny exchanges are a "brother vs sister" classic (very funny).
Justin and Michael exchanges are based on many years of resentments; but we feel that they have moved on.
Great chapter!
Date: Aug 17, 2016 7:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
What a crazy family! Kyle is out of his mind; poor guy.
I loved: “Want a tour of the house? I can show you the stables.” Gus says to me.
Gus is as subtle as his father when he is determined.
Date: Aug 17, 2016 6:53 pm Title: Chapter 6
Another hilarious chapter.
I loved how Emmett was poking Michael.
Mel and Brian continue to tease each other but not in a negative way.
All the talking / conversation jokes (now also with Jen who is so in) are so much fun!
Drew's proposal was as witty (the talk again) as moving.
Date: Aug 17, 2016 6:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
I loved this one: “Kyle, if you want to talk in the bathrooms, we can go get it out of the way.” Gus tells me.
Emmett and Brian as an item was surprising (not sure it's accurate though, if I remember the series well).
Mel and Brian poking at each other is really funny.
Poor Kyle, he's completely lost in all the information thrown at him or around him.
Date: Aug 17, 2016 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
Yep, it's a zoo all right and we love it that way.
This whole chapter is a delight: the banters are funny, witty (except from Michael), sassy, sexy.
The TALK idea is really good and I love how Brian is using it (for himself and Justin, having a lot of talk to do at any moment and also about Michael and his honeymoon).
It seems Kyle is falling for the Kinneys father and son; who could blame him?