[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2016 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
Gotta say you give us some great fun watching Lindsay and Michael make asses of themselfs.
Author's Response:
I try hard to be nice but then they start talking and my typing goes crazy. LOL
Date: Aug 02, 2016 4:29 am Title: Chapter 3
Where to start??? The logical place would be Sargeant Pain in the Ass, of course. But since my diatribe is still building in that regard, let's start with Captain Pain in the Ass aka Lindsay....
Where does this bish get off? She is the epitome of invasive, jealous and spiteful. Where exactly is HER career? This trick can't even keep a job but she knows what's best for Justin's?? REALLY?? I think that she was depending on Brian and Justin saying 'YES Lindsay, raise OUR kids and we'll give you more money in child support so that you won't ever have to work again.' WRONG Trick-enda!! Dead wrong! So now she is determined to make Justin 'see' that he can't have it all- the man, the money, the family and the career. If she put half as much effort into finding a job as she does into sticking her long, pointy nose into Brian and Justin's business where it is both NOT wanted or NEEDED, the bitch could be rich (well eventually).
Now for that Whiny Whimpy Sargeant PAIN in the Ass named Michael: This mofo right here is the most spoiled, selfish and self-centered asshole EVER! To yell in a restaurant with kids present, including HIS, all for the sake of being the center of attention is probably the most trifling, asinine....LAWD HAM TURKEY!!! That punkass needs to be CHOPPED in the THROAT for real!!! Why didn't Deb do that? WHYYYY??? Please, PLEASE let someone do that before this fic is over! And then to lie to Melanie so that he could pawn his daughter off on his scheduled weekend all so he could manipulate Brian (or try to) into doing what HE wanted is the exact reason why that waste of sperm should NEVER have been allowed to reproduce....EVER!!!
I'm glad that Ben and Mel seem to be getting a clue, albeit a rather miniscule one right now. I'm glad that Mel called Justin to verify all of the bullshit lies that Michael was spouting and that she nipped Lindsay's plan to join Michael in his ignorance- for once. One can't fix Stupid or Crazy and The P.I.T.A. Foundation is totally corrupted! SMH
Looking forward to more of this playing out!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I might have to steal PITA. Justin could really get creative with it. Thanks for cheering me on.
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2016 2:09 am Title: Chapter 2
Congrats on the start to another Fantastic Story!
Michael and Lindsay are such Selfish, Spiteful, Spoiled, Inconsiderate Idiots that I want to slap them!
Michael can't stand that Justin is important to Brian way more important than he could ever be so he is acting exactly like the jilted wife.
Lindsay is so jealous that Justin became what she never could be and that Justin has the life and the man that she could never have.
I am so proud of Brian and Justin holding on to their relationship despite Michael and Lindsay's conniving and pathetic whining.
Mel and Ben need to wake and stop burying their heads in the sand cause the more they try to excuse the way Michael and Lindsay are acting just gives them free reign to continue to act like spiteful, egotistical idiots.
When Brian and Justin snap everyone better take cover because they will be like a F5 tornado.
Author's Response:
Enjoy the snapping it will probably happen in every chapter. Michael and Linds think their right and everyone else is crazy. LOL
Date: Aug 02, 2016 1:31 am Title: Chapter 2
Well...well....welll what have we HERE?! The Captain and Sargeant are at war? GOOD! Perhaps they will implode! I swear Brian and Justin need restraining orders and an electrified fence to keep those two children hidden in adult bodies (well semi-adult body in Michael's case) away! I almost feel bad for Ben and Mel....ALMOST. Michael's obessession with Brian's whereabouts and Lindsay's stalking of Justin's career should be automatic grounds for abandonment. Hell, it isn't like Lindsay nor Michael would really notice if their partners left since it isn't like they actually pay attention to Ben and Mel anyway!
Looking forward to more of the foolery!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2016 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1
And soooooo we now have the Pain In the Ass Foundation! P.I.T.A. is an old organization of which Lindsay (Captain Pain in the Ass) and Michael (Sargeant Pain in the Ass) are the co-founders and stems back to Brian's childhood (even if he was an adult before he outgrew them). Their motto of "Everything Changes but MY sense of Entitlement" seems to be an ongoing theme already from Chapter 1. I will be keeping a close eye on this group of hangers-on and see what new-yet old- developments will occur. It is so nice to see that Michael and Lindsay tactics of misplaced guilt and heavy-handed shame are finally played out in Brian and Justin's existence. Hopefully Mel and Ben will also get a clue. Love does NOT equate with willful blindness and stupidity. I am already LOVING that Brian and Justin have a stalwart support system in Deb, Jen, Ted and Em! They couldn't ask for better protection against the desperate for attention foolery about to ensue!
<In my Robin Leach voice> On to the next chapter of P.I.T.A. which is already in progress!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2016 12:11 am Title: Chapter 2
LOL. Love how Linds and Mikey are being dicks and everyone is trying to escape their clutches.
Date: Aug 02, 2016 12:05 am Title: Chapter 2
Great new story!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: Aug 01, 2016 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love this universe. You mentioned everyone and gave us good updates on what they are up to.
Date: Aug 01, 2016 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Lindsey needs a slapdown from Jen, and Michael need to "take a chair, sit down and shut the hell up."
Loving the start of this story!
Sandy
Author's Response:
I got Deb to make Michael sit for you. Thanks for reading.