The argument between the PITA Foundation was EPIC and I am still laughing!! Both of them are complete and utter assholes BUT I'm glad that Lindsay is not finding the ally she thought she would in Michael. For once his vitriol comes in handy. And now the idiot is on his way to the Diner to wait in vain- and not the Bob Marley kind either! LMAO!

As for Brian, my heart really went out to him. I LOVE reading and writing about the many facets of Brian Kinney and it's good that through this story, Ted is discovering some too. I'm really happy that Ted was there for him with some sage advice and that he also talked to Justin, giving him the real deal about Lindsay's ramblings. I hope that Justin will remind Brian that "people cause their own pain" and Michael and Lindsay aren't any different; just deranged in their own rights. 

Ms. Plans and Mr. Pathetic are surely about to get their comeuppance and I CAN'T WAIT!!!  

WRITE On, Star!

~Nichelle

P.S. A little advice from one author to another: I know that you were concerned about not being able to see the ending in sight. Keep in mind that a story will ALWAYS let you know- although some authors don't follow that edict. That said, keep calm about it and although you may outline (those are good for plot points but you still have to allow for the dialogue to go where it needs to), allow the next chapter to flow through you. Trust me, with all the twist and turns; the delicate weaving of the plot that you have placed into this sixth fic of yours (Good Golly Miss Molly- SIX ALREADY?!), no one is getting bored or feeling like this is going on too long. Keep Writing until 'it' tells you that it's the end, Darling! As long as it's thoroughly engaging, entertaining, well-written and brings about a satisfying resolution, who cares what length it is! You're doing a WONDERFUL job! *HUGS!* 

Thank goodness for Ted being such an understanding friend to just let Brian vent out his anger, fear and sadness that his supposed friends have inflicted over the last few days, they just took and took and took until Brian just yelled he had enough and cut off their supply and still they want to take, take, take.

Justin is doing the right thing by listening to Max and not responding to Lindsay, he can't feed into her delusion anymore, besides no one can argue with crazy they love the illusion too much to comprehend reason.

Lindsay going to Michael was sad because neither one wants the other to get their fantasy, they are to self-absorbed to realize that neither one stands a chance with either Brian or Justin but they need to hold onto the unrealistic dream in order to breathe.

Lindsay is getting desperate if she has to seek out Michael for help I wonder if she will try Deb or Emmett, the longer she goes not hearing from Justin the more scary this situation can become.

You have me glued to my kindle waiting for the next chapter lol 

This BITCH is NUTZZZZZZZzzzzz! She needs to be choked to sleep! I feel like Max on reference to Lindsay's insanity and Michael's desperation. One by themselves is off the charts crazy but both plotting together would be CERTIFABLY INSANE! 

I LOOOOVE Jen! And I believe she ready would lay hands on Lindsay if she threatened Justin and the kids. I definitely love how her relationship with Brian has grown and that she sees Brian- flaws and all- as her other son. Her and Deb would definitely be forces for Captain and Sargenat PITA to reckon with! 

Mel and Brian handled the meeting with Broomhilda well all things considered. It was imperative that they get the paper revoking CPita's parental rights regardless of the delusional bitch's pronouncements and provocations. I doubt very seriously that Brian's yelling was directed at Ted but at that Sanity-devoid Shrew causing all the problem. Ted was just a sounding board.

Blake....gotta LOVE Blake and his wisdom! Lindsay's psychotic behavior couldn't have been dissected any better than the analogy of a Crystal Meth addict. Her belligerant response to being told she was being denied her "candy" gave true credence to Blake's assessment. I can't wait for her to run into Mr. 6-foot-6 and whomever else Max has guarding Justin. 

Honey this is soooooo freaking Addictive and yes darling I am READY for my next fix!!! Getting in my pajamas, pouring me some Beam and NOW ready to stalk the Most Recent page! LOL

WRITE On, Star!

~Nichelle

Woah......I mean WOAH! 

Well...they got her to sign teh papers at least. Poor Brian. I know he felt bad about the way he had to go about it, bit it was definitely for the best. At least gus will be protected now.

I can't BELIEVE lindsey called Jenn!! Talk about big balls! Jen handled it perfectly, but I know she's very worried about all of them. Can't blame her it the slightest. Lindsey is full on NUTSO!

So she's been served the retraining order. We all know she's not going to abide by it. Problem is...what is she going to try to do before she gets caught and put away? How far will she go? 

Anxiety is still there. Heart is racing. this is really quite thrilling!

Cheers,

Elaine

The thought of Lindsey adn Justin is just ...EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEW!! I'm trying to figure out if she thinks she's a better agent for him or a better partner. I'm guessing both. That she assumes she can be there for him professionally and personally. Sadly it's all about her though. She sant's to further Justin's career, or be by his side personlly only to benefit her. so that SHE can be seen in teh right places and live the kind oflife she seems to think she's owed.

Intersting way you portrayed Lindsey in this. You used actual canon material to begin the stalking and then had her twist it to make her seem like the super stalker. I honestly never would have thought of it that way. Well done!! She is however freaking ne out even more as is Max. Everything he adn Brian are saying to Justin is so legit! the manipulations she chick had right from the start is scary!!

Off toread more! 

Cheers

Elaine

That was awesome!! Man...Michael really is pathetic. I don't get people who think that they are always moral;ly superior to everyone else. I mean really.......Is it a chemical deficency ir what? Did he really think that he could hide all thiat stuff?! I mean Brian even warned hin about trying this again. He just sluffed it off assuming that the girls were at fault...not hom. Oh no.............Not Michael. Sheesh. What a buffoon!!

His lawyer was obviously less than thrilled. and rightfully so. Glad that Michael only has supervised visitation. As the judge said....he really does need help. I'm curious if he will stop now or if he will go aheaad and try again in court despite what his lawyer said.

Well done!!

Cheers,

Elaine

(I have all weekend's updates to review so bare with me.)

Star, you defintely have us all adddicted!

Waiting for  the next suspenseful chapter.

What a wonderful chapter.  You've caught Lindsay perfectly.  Now we just need to find out where she is.  Mel thinking she won't have to worry about Linds anymore is delusional.  Lindsay's going to be messing with everyone before long.

Omg Lindsay is seriously psycho... she's way beyond obsessed with Justin and his career. Obviously delusional as well...as if Justin would abandon Brian and their kids to live with her in New York and have kids with her! That rant of hers to Ted was both frightening and hilarious. Nice job and can't wait to see how this turns out😊

Looks like Ted was right.  Lindsay is on the crazy train.  Love this chapter and can't wait to see what you have planned next.

I tried to hold out and not start another WIP but I just couldn't stop myself -as usual. I love this story, it is so full of craziness, but shows the strength of Brian and Justin's relationship as they attempt to rein them all in. Anti Michael and Lindsay stories are such fun!

Looney Tunes!!!

Ok, Lindsey is definitely smoking the good stuff if she thinks Brian is going to leave Justin.  The guys in the little white coats need to capture the loose monkey cuz she's bananas!