[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2016 1:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Hurricane Psycho violated the restraining order with her crazy phone calls so now she has been arrested, if her parents or sister come to bail her out they need their heads examined too.
She almost stabbed Alex with a pen which means this hurricane is going right past three and straight into five: Hide Any Sharp Objects Now category!
I think that Max should get into contact with her parents and let them know that their daughter is beyond dangerous, she is going Lethal any second now so everyone might need protection of she gets out.
Ratcheting Up My Heart Rate Here!
I think I might need a vacation after this story lol *Wipes sweaty brow*
Author's Response:
I'll just write a funny one so you can relax. I already have an idea. LOL
Date: Aug 12, 2016 1:34 am Title: Chapter 23
OH HELL NO!!! This.... <humming MORE Negro Spirituals!> I wonder if they can arrest her NOW that she literally threatened Alex for telling her the truth about her delusional ass. Brian and Justin are right to worry now that this bitch is completely unhinged. The messages to Justin were just...WHEW! They should play those messages for her parents to make them see that the bitch NEEDS help!
I swear fo' goat cheese that this story is ratcheting up my anxiety and making me angrier than a rattlesnake from being disturbed by turns. Looking forward to MORE!
WRITE On, Star!!
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I have one more finished but with three days to write who knows what will happen.
Date: Aug 12, 2016 1:11 am Title: Chapter 22
OH LAWD MAKE ME OVER....these two mofo here.....They have me over here rewriting the Negro Spiritual "Come on in the Room" to say You gon need a doctor to write out ALL yo' scriptions and give you a SHOT for medicine in the Room!" This is a dual review so bear with me....LAWD!!!
As if dealing with one Insane Idiot isn't enough we STILL have good ol' Lindsay to take up arms in the Asshole Department. This bitch here is outright dangerous. There is no worse Nut than a SMART NUT (see Timothy McVey, Jeffrey Dalhmer, Charles Manson, Lavinia Fisher- who was the first female serial killer in history). Telling Nancy that she and Justin were to be married was just..... just...... 
As for Lindsay's viewing of the interview: should she really be surprised that she wasn't mentioned AT ALL! Why would Justin want everyone to know that he was in a sense stabbed in the back by someone he once considered a friend who is NOW the bane of his existence? I swear if this was a cartoon, I would happily drop an anvil on her head... or in this case a LARGE fist doused in some Holy Water to knock the sense into her...
WRITE On, Star!!!
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I love your review it makes me want to let Linds escape. LOL I forsee a long future in a hospital for Linds at the end. Thanks for staying on crazy train with me.
[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2016 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Uh Oh..Oh No! I Think Justin Is Going To Need More Security Lindsay is pissed and has gone from Tropical Storm CrazyLady to full blown Hurricane Pyscho, I honestly fear her finding out that they are in New York.
Michael might actually be getting a clue at long last! Of course it could just be the rocks shifting around in his head lol
Keep Up The Awesome work:)
Author's Response:
I love the rocks shifting in his head, I might have to use that. Thanks for joining in my madness.
Date: Aug 11, 2016 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
shit....read your ansewrs. Meds are aready. My anxiety is already up. lol. Can't wait!! I saw that you had an ending in sight, but thrilled to sread that there was quite a bit more to come. yee ha!!
Cheers
Elaine
Author's Response:
I might need some of your meds. LOL
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2016 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 22
Darn them, they get worse and worse with each chapter and I don't think there's anything that can save them. You have to help Justin, Brian and the girls!
Author's Response:
I promise no harm will come to the Kinney - Taylors.
Date: Aug 11, 2016 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 22
Oh snap!! Lindsey is PISSED!!!!!!!! Oh man...what's she gonna try to do know? An angry stalker is all kinds of bad. She was already scary, how she who knows what she's capable of. And Poor Justin has no idea that hisinterview will have caused her to become even more unhnged. So many twists adn turns in this! I get an idea that you're going to go one way...then wammo...you take a different turn. So exciting!
OMG........has michael had a break through?? Has he finally realized just how far he's gone? Can we trust this sudden enlighenment adn will it last or will he once again make expalnations for his behavior?
Another chapter!! Fan frigging tastic! thrilled beyond belief. thank you thank you thank you!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
I kind of scared myself with the end of the next chapter. Just peep between your fingers at the last line. LOL
Date: Aug 11, 2016 6:44 pm Title: Chapter 21
One of the things I like about this story is that nothing is going the way I think it will go. So much of this fresh and original that I hope there are fifty more chapters.
Author's Response:
Thank you, when I first tried writing it was because I was waiting for updates, now it’s fun because people enjoy it. I finally found where this ends but don't worry, it still has a lot to finish telling.
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2016 6:29 pm Title: Chapter 21
Someone needs to tell Nancy that the man her daughter thinks she's marrying is already married with kids. Is Jen available. Mikey couldn't take a hint if you hit him over the head with it. Blake is so right in his assessment of Mikey. So where exactly are Brian and Justin?
Author's Response:
Nany is going she paid for the first wedding. Blake was under used, after he cleaned himself up, I always thought him and Justin could have been friends.
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2016 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Michael calling Deb and Emmett for help just goes to show that as usual he just is not comprehending that Brian is serious and he is not going to back down.
Blake explained Michael to Emmett and Ted perfectly Michael is so used to throwing a tantrum and getting what he wants from everyone, that now that everyone is ignoring him while also pushing him away he is getting worse, not dangerous just more whining (if that is even possible!), going to Kinnectic and shouting for Brian just earned him another stay in jail...Michael makes lint look smart lol
Lindsay was so close to being arrested too bad she got away again, I can't wait till Mommy and daddy find out their little girl is Bonkers and that Mommy Peterson just spent a fortune on her daughter's delusion.
Hope Brian, Justin and the kids get to have some fun in New York they could use a breather from all the crazy, just feel so bad that they have to deal with this when all they wanted was to be happy and raise their kids, instead they have to deal with the two looney tunes who just can't seem to get it through their heads that Brian and Justin Don't Belong To Them, Don't Want Them and Wish They Didn't Know Them!!
Author's Response:
I wanted to see someone encourage Linds, Nancy is the idiot I picked. Nancy is probably the character I hated most so I want to look like an idiot. LOL
Date: Aug 11, 2016 5:47 pm Title: Chapter 21
Man......Captain Dunce STILL doesn't get it. Blakes' analysis is spot on, adn yes...he sees things differently and in teh right perspective because he hasn't always been in teh group. It seemed like a good thinkg for Michael to have stayed in jail for the night, but apparently it did no good at all. He learned nothing. Not sure what's more frustrating, him in his delusional state or Lindsey in hers. Mind you, Lindsey is downright scarey, but Michael is just plain stupid! Looks like off for another night in a cell. LOL. couldn't happen to a dumber ass. Once again, no one will come to his rescue, and he more than likely STILL won't have learned anything. It will as usual, be someone else's fault...no one understands....He needs to talk to Brian....Justin is keeping them apart...yadda yadda yadda.I don't think he has it in him to be dangerous or plan anythng so manipulative as Lindsey could. She's diabolical, yet has the certainty in her mind that justin wants what she does.
Good that Brian and all will be able to get away for the weekend. No idea how it's actually going to turn out mind you. lol. Could very well be just as much of a headache as staying in teh Pitts.
Lindsey is very convincing to her mother and hermom is thrilled. Just wait till Mommy finds out how truly delusional her daughter really is...
Another chapter I could breath while reading. Moind you, I was a bit tense when Lindsey was trying to get to Britin's grounds. Thankfully Max saw her. Sadly she was able to get away form the cops.
Thak you for a mid day chapter!!!!!!! Twas a lovely break at work. Had such a happy face when I saw it! :) A bit guilty too...hope I didn't pressure you.
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
No pressure, I wrote it last night. I have the day off so I could write more. This monster is harder than other the other stories I've written. I have anther chapter written and am working on Linds in the chapter after so get the meds, LOL she isn’t going to be very happy about something Justin did. Thank you for all the encouragement.
Date: Aug 11, 2016 4:41 pm Title: Chapter 20
Is it bad that I'm a bit relived that this was a less traumatic chapter? lol. I was pretty much able to breath calmly while reading this.
what an aweful position that Justin is in. Can't even go to the store on his own. Any choice has been taken out of his hands. Glad he's sticking to it though and not rebelling. That he's realizing it's for teh safey of his family....the kids. If it was just about him and he was on his own and with or without Brian, I think he's say "Fuck you" adn go anyway, screw teh repercussions. Glad he's keeping a good head on his shoulders here. Shame Lindsey left before teh cops arrived. Not sure if she did it knowlingly, or if she just left cause the kids had, and Justin wasn't there. Not sure what she'll try to do next...hope she gets caught though, adn soon. She's dangerous! I don't mind teh threat of something happening, but having them actually taken, kidnapped or what have you is torture!!
Michael however.........well, all I can say is 1 down....1 to go. He's such an idiot! Max's description however was right on the money though I think. He's not really a threat to anyone physically, he's just selfish enough that he's an ass. He has no one to blame but himself. I'm curious if he'll ever learn or is he in a state of perpetual immaturity? Will he finally figure out that Brian is really really freigging serious and that he needs to stay away or will he still try to call? I can't believe that he went to Babylon having every intention of confronting Brian there. *sigh*....pathetic, idiotic, delusional...there's a word and I just can't think of it.
I think all are on the same page now as far as understanding how Michael and Lindsey work. They mindsets and goals.
Another brilliant chapter!! I guess you spoiled us previously with sometimes giving us 2 chapters a day. one in teh day adn 1 at night...I keep looking thorughout the day. lol. I guess work MUST come first. I get it. mine too. fortuately I'm at a desk in my own office, so I can cheat adn peek, and indulge my reading addiction here and there thoguhout the day.
Looking forward to tonights episode!! (will I need mes for this one?? lol)
Cheers!!!!!!
Elaine
Author's Response:
Get the meds for the chapter after the next one. LOL.
Date: Aug 11, 2016 4:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hiya,
I read the first 20 chapters in almost one go and am so addicted to this story I can barely wait for the next update.
Where to start? The flowing way you write makes this a very easy story to read. The creepyness of Lindz is absolutely scary and worries me a lot. I'm just waiting for her to take the step towards kidnapping Justin. Poor Mel to be married to such a psycho bitch. The same can be said of Ben. Him being married to that big baby in an adult body. He is stupidity personified. Addled brained and dimwitted. Love the way you portray these two idiots.
Loving Ted and Jen to pieces right now. Great to see Ted and Blake becoming parents. The way Ted stood up to Mickey was absolutely brilliant. I actually cheered reading that passage.
So looking forward to the next update. Faving this story now.
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response:
That really made my day. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2016 3:43 am Title: Chapter 20
Love seeing another chapter. Shame that Lindsay managed to outfox the police. Maybe they should have had pictures on those orders keeping Michael from being in any bldg that Brian and Justin owned. Reading obviously didn't work. Denial thy name is Michael.
Author's Response:
EEven with pictures Michael would argue LOL. Michael is turning but he will still be a pain. Thank you for reading.
Date: Aug 11, 2016 3:41 am Title: Chapter 20
While Michael is cooling his dancing feet off in jail, they should also give him a 'DUNCE' cap and sit his dumb ass in a corner...then make him write 1000 times, 'I will STAY my stupid ass AWAY from Brian and Justin... I will STAY my stupid ass AWAY from Brian and Justin.' Perhaps using an old grade school method, in the simplest terms, will teach the FOOL to STAY his ass AWAY from Brian and Justin since apparently if it isn't written in comic strip form it doesn't register. Defintely enjoyed that scene!!
I also enjoyed Mel's talk with Max. I think she now has a clearer understanding of how Lindsay mentally unraveled right before her eyes. Sometimes there are key instances that tend to be overlooked in the moment but when taken as a whole, paints a much different picture. Sadly, that had a trickle down theory with Justin too.
Poor Justin! My heart certainly went out to him this chapter! It's one thing if you have to go to the grocery store and don't want to but it's an entirely different thing to have to go and can't- at least not without an escort. That has to feel completely overwhelming and all because a chick went Cookoo for Coco Puffs. Lindsay may need medical attention but she also needs a knock in the head with a cinderblock! I completely agree with Brian that Justin should wait for Michael and Lindsay to in the same place before he runs them over with his car. Sure he would never do it, but THAT fantasy is definitely one worth having!!
WRITE On, Star!
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I starting to think I write just because of the reviews, LOL. It’s like reading a story, with in my story. I love everyone joining in my crazy mind. Thank you for making me laugh, when things get scary with my characters.
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2016 3:33 am Title: Chapter 1
You are really building up the suspense level here with these one chapters I so far on the edge of my seat that I think any second I am going to fall off lol
Lindsay and Michael are such idiots they really don't like being told they can't have something, even when it is spelled out in plain English they still ignore it and go after the object of their obsession, with this blind faith that just because someone told them no it didn't mean they still couldn't have it.
Well Michael is taken care of for the night now just have to wonder what Lindsay is up to and what stupid thing she might do next?
Max explained the difference between Michael and Lindsay perfectly they are both in their own way acting like a three year old throwing a tantrum in a department store, the only difference is that because Lindsay is being denied access to Justin she could is more likely to attack someone, while Michael will just whine a person to the point that they would wish he got laryngitis for the rest of his life.
I think Gus will probably go to Justin at the moment he is just not ready to talk about it, plus he might have overheard something and maybe he just needs to think about it before first.
Can't Wait For Tomorrow Night!
Author's Response:
II have more chapters done and I have a whole weekend to finish this with. LOL
Date: Aug 10, 2016 3:40 pm Title: Chapter 19
The trouble with going into the minds of Lindsey and Michael, I'm not so sure there's a way out....... YIKES!! I can't help thinking of all the stalkers that many celebrities have and to what great lengths they go to. Your trip into the thoughts of these to is rather.........Scary as hell!! LOL. Very disturbing to say the least.
Now...getting to Ted...woohoo!! He was awesome!! What he said was perfect. Sadly it fell on deaf ears. It's amazing how someone can hear the same thing, from a variety of people, go as far as receive a restraining order, yet can't see the reality of it. It's far beyond making excuses. He really is in a state of delusion. Not sure if it's as scary as Lindsey mind you, but incredibly disturbing. I think he's more along the line of how we normally see him. Immature, can't face reality...perpetually seeing Brian in his youth. I think it may be more like he's scared of the changes Brian has made. Yes. he's obsessed with him, is blind to the changes Brian has made or that he really loves Justin, but I wonder if Michael has simply conviinced himself that Brian doesn't mean any of it out of fear of everything changing around him. Many talk of Brian's fear of change, but I think Michael is just as guilty of it. He's just taking it to a totally different level. Far more extreme. He can't differentiate being best friend kind of love to being in love. He's not mature enough to know teh difference.
Lindsey..............HO-LY SHITABLLS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OK, now before she was just pissing me off. NOW...she's scaring the hell out of me!! I know she's gong to get her cumuppence at some point....but when exactly??? To what lengths will she actually get to before she's stopped and how will she be stopped...so many questions and so few answers! ARGH!!!!!! Each update is a thrill, yet by the time I'm finished reading...I'm at an even higher emotional state whether it be anger, frustration of just plain spooked. Damn...you are good!!
So will anticipate this next chapter....You know when you watch a movie and it's at the scary part...you close your eyes but still peak out between your fingers. That's kind of how each update is for me. LOL. Freaked out as to what M or L will do next, yet can't not look to see. :)
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!
cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
I promise to limit your med levels LOL
Date: Aug 10, 2016 5:53 am Title: Chapter 19
Holy crap, she's gonna go all Misery on poor Justin! The delusion twins are fruitloops!
Author's Response:
I think I wanted to see if I could scare everyone. Thanks for reading.
Date: Aug 10, 2016 3:37 am Title: Chapter 19
Ted actually made me HOT!! WHOO!!! Him telling off Michael was one of the GREATEST Ted moment I have EVER read!! It was so damn overdue!! WHOO!! His comparison of Michael and Lindsay to cockroaches was so accurate! Only when the light is turned on, the human vermin don't seem to scatter like the six legged variety. Too bad there isn't a human form of Raid called "Bitch Be Gone" but then again.....
Captain Pain in the Ass is violating the restraining order, I think, isn't she? Even being at the school where Gus and JR go to, violates that, right? I can't remember if I read that part when Max was explaining the rules of the restraining order to her but I think that it said anywhere they (Brian, Justin and Mel) are most likely to be, she SHOULD NOT be. Someone really needs to call the Pittsburgh Paddywagon for that PITA! I mean, how delusional does she have to be for someone to put her out of her OWN misery?? LOL I know that you can't fix stupid or crazy but DAMN, where is an icy flight of steps when he needs one? He could always say she slipped...LOL
Sargeant Pain in the Ass.... Sargeant Pain in the Ass....SARGEANT PAIN IN THE ASS!!! I swear fo' cheese it was like Ted had NOT even spoken! How many people have to tell the little sloth that Brian doesn't want him around? There is a restraining order which prohibits the asshole from being within 500 yards of Brian, Justin, the kids AND their businesses. What part of GET LOST is he not understanding? Well we KNOW how that is going to end up if he goes to Babylon, which he undoubtedly will Cunty Crusty Cretin that he is...My OH MY how I will enjoy his downfall!
WRITE On, Star!!
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Love your reviews. Thank you for entertaining me between chapters.
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2016 3:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Being in Lindsay and Michael's mind makes me very happy that I am a sane person.
These two are children so far gone in the throws if their fantasy that they don't see how they hurting everyone else.
Lindsay is going so far into her delusion that she is even contemplating kidnapping Justin just to keep him near and solely dependent on her, thank goodness Max has someone with Justin and the girls, plus he was with Mel when she picked up Gus and JR cause I know she would have taken them to get Justin to call or come to her.
Inside her mind is a woman who became fixated on Justin when she saw that he had talent and she used everything going wrong with Brian and Justin to keep him near, even used her own child which just makes her more disgusting.
Michael is just an idiot who needs his head examined too bad their is just rocks between his ears, he can spend all day and night at Babylon Brian still won't be there.
Brian did what Michael and Lindsay didn't want him to do he grew up, fell in love and didn't need them anymore, so Lindsay turned her attention to Justin and created her fantasy life, while Michael fought against it and reverted back to his fourteen year old self.
Neither one is going to like it when they get their comeuppance.
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2016 2:47 am Title: Chapter 19
OMG! How delusional can they get. Love, love, love Ted for telling Mikey off. Shame it didn't sink in.
Date: Aug 09, 2016 4:40 pm Title: Chapter 18
A part of me wanted to reach through and shake Justin. I know he's trying to make excuses for Lindsey's behavior, but he NEEDS to face facts! He seems to be hemming and hawing about what to do...reluctant to take further steps. but he has kids and they have to take precident. I know he knows that, and they are his 1st priority, I just think there was a bit of denial there. I do think he's finally at the point that he's realizing the level of delusion that Lindsey is really at. I think he just didn't want to believe that Lindsey would ever do something to hurt him, but sadly, if left to her own devices, she will go to any length to get what she wants.
Let's face it....the girl is certifiably frigging NUTSO!! off the rails!
I must say the confrontation between Lindsey an dmicheal was hilarious!! Not what i was expecting. It was a much needed comic relief after teh stress of the previouc chapters I must say!! LOL I was actually sitting outside on the curb near my place having a ciggy (can't smoke of teh condo property AT ALL) laughing out loud. Must say I think I turned a acouple of heads. LOL. It was too funny though! funny how just the suggestions of a (or rather another) restraining order had her do an about face and leave. Was relived as any plan between those to could either be really dangerous or ridiculously funny.
Now michael is off to have a non exixtant meeting with Brian. He just can't get his head around the fact that Brian is serious. He seems to think that brian will just get over it and as always, forgive him. Don't think that's going to happen anytime soon.
Can't wait for MORE!!!!!!!!!!
cheers,
Elaine
PS...btw...I completely agree with Nicole about and ending. don't force it, let it come naturally. If it goes on for awhile, let it. Enjoy the process, enjoy how your characters are going. We all appreciate and vastly enjoy this story!
E
Date: Aug 09, 2016 11:23 am Title: Chapter 18
Poor Linds has lost it. I see a long rest in her future. Michael on the other hand is perfectly sane just an idiot. I see a bit of a rest in his future too. That difference is crucial -- while we are shocked at both it is only appropriate to laugh at Michael. That's part of what makes your writing good you make your readers feelings a part of the process whether it's laughter or sadness. All authors attempt it but achieving it is difficult.
Again, loving it, thx for writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for giving me a reason to keep writing.
Date: Aug 09, 2016 3:59 am Title: Chapter 18
I'm so glad her oh so brilliant plan is failing miserably.
Date: Aug 09, 2016 3:58 am Title: Chapter 18
Huzzah another chapter!
But for dang what the actual fudge! Wasn't sure I could swear so temperred it a bit....Husband seriously husband!!! And poor Brian forever blaming himself and Ted is just so squdgeable. L&M need to check themselves although we know they are going to wreck themselves cannot wait for how the aftermath plays out...though have to admit the d&t sniping insults had me snarfing into my wine!
This is so good I do this👊🿠and grab myself a glass of ðŸ·after doing a widdle happy dance.
And I have to admit that some of the reviews are as good as this fic...
Author's Response:
I totally agree with you on the review their a story on there own. Thanks for reading.