Date: Aug 14, 2016 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 28
Absolutely loved this. Again I bow down to your skills. Feel sorry for Blake and Ted though! Glad Ben had a happy Allen ending too. Was snorting through my merlot when the ear biting happened man did she channel her inner Tyson! Look forward to more.
Date: Aug 14, 2016 10:59 am Title: Chapter 28
This was a really engaging read. I found myself checking for updates again and again, reading them and immediately wanting more. Several chapters ended with my mouth sitting open and my eyes wide... It was really good.
i have two words... Author, AUTHOR!!!!
Date: Aug 14, 2016 8:49 am Title: Chapter 28
Great story loved every chapter

Date: Aug 14, 2016 1:10 am Title: Chapter 1
BRAVO, BRAVO!!
Lindsay chocked her mother, banged her head against the wall and damn near killed that woman!
Makes me shudder thinking what she would have done to Brian if she had gotten close to him, Lindsay telling Gus that Brian and Mel wouldn't be around to stop her is enough to give me nightmares, she deserves the thirty years and to be put in a hole under wherever she is incarcerated.
Ron walking away from Lindsay is not surprising he normally just does whatever Nancy orders him to, now that Nancy is out of commission he can live his life with Freedom, I doubt Lynnette is coming over to help mommy, it's Daddy's ass she has to kissed now lol.
Okay Michael getting his ear bit off by Lindsay was funny because he deserved it for being an idiot and poking the bear. NEVER POKE THE BEAR!!!
Now I feel bad for Ted and Blake who have to deal with Michael I hope this comic book guy can take Michael away so Ted and Blake can get their life back.
Good for Ben to find happiness with a mature partner this around, glad that Allen decided to stay and that Brian is not taking any chances to keep Justin and his kids safe.
Really happy that now that Lindsay has been sentenced Justin and Brian can have their life back.
As much as this story creeper me out at times I already can't wait to read it all over again, looking forward to your next story :)

Date: Aug 13, 2016 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 28
I always enjoy seeing another chapter of whatever story you're working on. You never disappoint and have swift updates. One day you might slow down but I'm not looking forward to that day. I love how Linds got her just deserts and Nancy wasn't let off the hook. It was wonderful to see Allen joining the family and hooking up with Ben was a nice touch. Mikey - what can I say. Now he's haunting Ted. Hopefully the comic book geek that Blake wants to set Mikey up with will do the trick. All in all a happy future for Brian and Justin.
Date: Aug 13, 2016 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
What an incredible story that was! The escalation in Lyndsay's madness was terrifying to read. I can't wait for your next story.
Date: Aug 13, 2016 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 28
Wow, this was sort of a dark one, but very good....BRAVO!!!

Date: Aug 13, 2016 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 27
Another insightful chapter. It's great that Justin and Brian can now leave the house. Allen seems to make a good nanny. Poor Blake, now he's going to have to deal with Michael who, in spite of everything, still thinks Brian is going to want to see him.

Date: Aug 13, 2016 7:11 pm Title: Chapter 26
She didn't kill Nancy? Such a shame. Maybe she'll be brain injured due to lack of oxygen? Mikey is a dunce, now he's a dunce missing part of his ear. He also needs a shot for rabies.
Date: Aug 13, 2016 7:08 pm Title: Chapter 26
I feel so wrong because I can't stop laughing -- Michael is the perfect ding bat...lol Wow Lindsy is really on a crime spree and as annoying as Ron and Nancy are I can understand that pent up rage escalating the pushing and then choking of her mother.
Again, this was awesome, pure you and by that I mean unxpected and fantastically enjoyable.
And about that crack fic -- oh please let it be mpreg "that's strange there's two heart beats. You're delivering twins" lol

Date: Aug 13, 2016 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 25
I forgot to mention how much I enjoyed Nancy's meeting Justin.
“Young man we are waiting for Justin Taylor, could you go tell him we need to see him.” The woman tells me. I assume this is Nancy
and
“I think we are looking for your father, is Justin Taylor senior here?” She really should check her facts.
left me ROFLMAO
That woman is just as delusional as her daughter. Now we know where she got it from.
Date: Aug 13, 2016 10:58 am Title: Chapter 25
WOW!!! Poor crazy Lindsay.
Date: Aug 13, 2016 6:01 am Title: Chapter 25
DAMNNNNnnnnnnnnnn!!!!! Well, I think this can now go several ways: 1) Lindsay has just committed murder or attempted thereof, 2) Nancy is able to talk and decides to press charges for assault then afterwards disowns Lindsay, or 3) Ron has Lindsay declared metally incompetent through power of attorney based on her actions and has her placed into a facility until he decides he wants to check her our...which is NEVER! All three of these scenarios have merit but honestly, I would like to see her try to 'reason' her way out of killing Nancy and for Nancy's pie hole be pressed together permanently. I've never like the tart-tongued, judgmental bitch so I would not mind her meeting her maker sooner than later.
Justin went OFF!!!! WOW! I was so damn proud of him for giving them the business straight (no pun intended, LOL) with no chaser! Reminded me of his visit with Jennifer to the shrink, only more tempered but no less effective. They needed to be told the truth about Loony Lindsay and what better way than to do so within his own luxurious study? The way Nancy tried to cut him down and instead got shredded was definitely worth the wait! Great job! And then for Nancy to pull the 'public embarrassment' and 'Gus' cards for her own gain was just too low for the haughty harridan. I'm glad that Brian chose that moment to enter the room and give Justin a kiss to curl his toes which shut all of them up. I'll bet even Ron is wishing that he had never met Nancy or Lindsay at the moment right along with Dean.
SOoooooooo looking forward to the next chapter!!
WRITE On, Star!!
~Nichelle

Date: Aug 13, 2016 3:32 am Title: Chapter 25
Love how fast you give updates. Justin really told Nancy off, yippy. I feel sorry for the poor lawyer. He had no idea what he'd gotten himself into. Now I have to wait for another chapter to find out what Lindz did to her mom.
Author's Response:
It will be written tomorrow I promise.

Date: Aug 13, 2016 3:23 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG, OMG, OH MY GAWD!!!
Lindsay is never going to get out of prison now!
I Can't Believe She Did That! And yet I can because she is Hurricane Psycho and there will have to be a new category for her because five is just too tame right now.
Dean, Ron and Nancy going to talk to Justin was Amazing cause now they all have the truth and Dean is wishing he was in another line of work, Justin held nothing back when he told what Lindsay has put him and his family through, I especially liked Brian coming into to the room and giving Justin an Toe Curling Kiss to emphasize that Justin was never going to marry Lindsay.
What happened later actually made me jump.
Lindsay doesn't need to be in prison or a hospital she needs to be under it.
Author's Response:
Lorie my beta added the kiss, it really worked well. I wanted Nancy to eat her words. LOL
Date: Aug 12, 2016 4:11 pm Title: Chapter 24
Yup......am totally amped up now!! lol!! Poor Brian. Justin is fristrated, I get that, but Brian is really pissed and legitimately scared! This is his family and people are trying to mess with it. NOT a good scenario.
Am dying to know what happens when Lindsey's parents figure out the truth of everything!! will Dean stay on or will he tell Ron and Nancy to deal..or...will Ron andNancy tell him not to bother. Hmmmmmmmmm. Interesting possiblities here. I really want to see a conversation between B&J and Dean! That should be enlightening on his part!! Will he hear all the phone messages? so many witness testimonies...AH! this is going to be fun!! Mind you...he too will end up on Lindsey's shit list...but will b e worth the read! ;)
I had to chuckle at Nanacy adn claire's convo. HAHA! the fall out will be epic! Naturally she only concerned about their image, rather than any real concern for their daughter. Bitch...... ron I expect isn't going to be overly thrilled either. Lindsey thinks that they will support her, but wait till she finds out otherwise.
Her threats against Carl and teh force are falling on deaf ears. There's nothing she can do adn the fact that she thinks Justin is going to come to her aid is beyond funny!
I forsee a long stay at a psych ward in her future.
will diligently wait till tonight to carry on. and YAYA! weekend reading!
Think we're all gonna need a crack fic after this. lol!
Brilliant!
Cheerrs,
Elaine
Date: Aug 12, 2016 3:35 pm Title: Chapter 23
Interaction between Mom and Brian was priceless!! Much needed levity in this very angst filled fic. I love your touches of hunour in all your fics. That tho...funny as hell.
Max is up to his eyeballs in this now. Those phone messages?!?! WOAH! she really has flipped out!! She really is a case study for stalking. glad he's bringing in somewone from the BAU. They're going to need it!!
Poor B&J and family. What a wonderful weekend away from it all, then bang.....thrown back into the Pitt of hell. At least she's been taken into custody now, but with her parents, who knows for how long.
Alex should know there's no reasoning with her. I suppose he does, but had to at least give it a shot. If nothing else he see's the level of her delusions.
Her attemped assault with the pen adn then her threat after..........please tell me she's in her cell for awhile. No way should she have any kind of bail set after that!!
OK. Off to the next chapter. Back to having spoiled us all today. that was bloody awesome!!!
Cheers,
Elaine

Date: Aug 12, 2016 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 24
Mikey seems to be almost seeing the light. Lindsay on the other hand is so firmly unhenged that I can see a padded cell in her future. My guess is Dean will be talking to Lindsay's dad and bringing him up-to-date on what the charges really are.
Date: Aug 12, 2016 4:51 am Title: Chapter 24
MY OH MY!!! I am soooooooooooo looking forward to Dean speaking to Justin about Lindsay. I think the lawyer will get more than he bargained for regarding the LIAR!
Nancy...Nancy...NANCY!!! Poor gossipy witch just couldn't keep from bragging about the bitch she birthed. Well I'm looking forward to that particular revelation. Perhaps a little bit of humble pie will teach her that it never pays to be so haughty WITHOUT proof. As for Ron, he suffers from the same "STUPID" disease that afflicts his wife. Money can't buy happiness and it certainly can't buy their daughter's sanity.
Okay so I thought that perhaps Michael calling Blake was a good thing. I mean he seemed to legitmately want information on why everyone thought that Michael was stalking Brian. He seemed attentive and open....that is UNTIL he opened his mouth and we saw his thoughts in reference to seeking help. Again, that Brian-addiction is going to be the death of him. I can see the first meeting of Michael Anonymous already forming. Justin and Blake will be the facillitators.
"Hello. My name is Brian Kinney and I'm trying to get clean from Michael overload" "Hi Brian..."
"Hello my name is Ted Schmidt and I've had enough of Michael""Hi Ted."
"Hello my name is Emmett Honeycutt and I have seen the light about Michael" "Hi Emmett."
"Hello my name is Ben Bruckner and I married the DOPE" "Hi Ben."
"Blake and I are glad that you have all FINALLY decided to perform your own individual Michael-ectomy. It has been a long time coming but we think that it is finally time to let go of the milksop you all once considered your friend and begin healing your minds and eardrums. Be FREE Gentlemen of that Child-like Whine...Loose Here Michael- your pouting and folded arms shall no longer work!"
Talk about a Michael-cism! Now only if that would work for the crazy chick in the cell! Carl's parting shot really made me chuckle. Delusional Diva just fucked up royally, even more than before. Now insane in the membrane or NOT, she will be getting jail time for hitting a cop. I hope she enjoys that gaudy orange!
WRITE On, Star!!
~Nichelle

Date: Aug 12, 2016 4:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Holy Smokes, Every time I think you can't surprise me I see another chapter posted and you do!
Michael I think actually almost listened to what Blake had to say even though he did try to justify his obsession with Brian, perhaps he will talk to a doctor and get some help to finally realize what everyone has been telling him for years, Brian has the relationship he wants with Justin and they are not breaking up anymore...Hell even death won't keep these two apart for long lol
Now for Hurricane Pyscho and her wonderful parents they are all about to get a very rude awakening, if Dean were smart he would charge Ron more because Lindsay just keeps racking up the charges, talking to Max, Brian and Justin is going to make Dean wish he had ignored this particular call.
Nancy deserves to be embarrassed in front of the country club set for going along with Lindsay's delusion without getting the facts (Who plans a wedding without meeting the groom first??), perhaps she should have embraced her daughter being a lesbian instead of acting like such a snob.
Lindsay being a lesbian sounds much better than Lindsay the Pyscho is probably what Nancy will be thinking when she sees Lindsay splashed out in the front page, and reporters camped out in their front lawn and talking to their neighbors, business associates, friends at the country club.
Nancy might need a room next to Lindsay before the day is out lol
Date: Aug 12, 2016 4:13 am Title: Chapter 24
I am really enjoying this fic of yours. Looking forward to the updates.
Date: Aug 12, 2016 3:39 am Title: Chapter 23
Lindsay is truly losing it. Here grip on reality is nonexistent and now she's threatening bodily harm? The lady needs a straight jacket quick.

Date: Aug 12, 2016 2:43 am Title: Chapter 23
Okay. Threatening to stab someone. That should be enough to keep her in jail.
I don't think her parents are going to back her up when they find out why she was arrested.
Author's Response:
Mommy is going to wish Linds stayed with Mel.
Date: Aug 12, 2016 2:41 am Title: Chapter 23
ooohhh Lindsay...seriously threatening a Dr in the presence of cops? Can't wait to see what happens next. Is there any chance of Michael talking to (I mean getting yelled at by) Brian?
Author's Response:
Brian has to be careful of his own restraining order, I was reading about them and if the person who gets the order does anything prohibited by it it nullifies it.
Date: Aug 12, 2016 2:02 am Title: Chapter 23
Well, lets hope this now gets Lindsay some help. I can't see the police not taking what she tried to do or what she said as not being a threat to harm or kill Alex.
Author's Response:
Linds is beyond help, but they are going to try.