Date: Jul 28, 2016 5:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
I waited anxiously for this update all day and was thrilled by it.
Michael trying so desparately to hold onto his place in Brian's life. I don't think he relaly cares one hoot about the others in all honesty, but they come as a package deal with Brian. His delusional thinking that Emmett or Ted would sympathize with him is funny. (pathetic too) His constant "Brian is my best friend" diatribe is falling on deaf ears, yet he can't seem to get a clue. This downward spiral is wonderful to watch. LOL.
Ted is a joy to behold. He's realized the meaning of real friendship and won't let Michael colour it. He knows that Brian looks out for his friends and has really "grown up" into an honest to goodness good man and true friend. His relationship with Blake is great. blake won't let anyone push ted around or try to manipulate him. Great partnership!!
Justin of course was awesome! funny as hell. Pulls no punches and loves playing with the timy mind of Michael. All of Michael's attempts will fall with a resounding "klunk". Justin is just far to smart adn will recognize Michael's machinations for what they are. Let's face it. Michael just isn't smart enough to challenge Justin in this playing field. Justin is far too self assured.
Am sooooooo enjoying this and aticipate every simgle update. Can't wait for the next one!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jul 28, 2016 2:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh Poor Micky, no one wants to listen to his whining tonight...
Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 28, 2016 3:54 am Title: Chapter 7
This chapter brought tears to my eyes, a lump to my throat and laughter to my soul!! It was so GOOD to see Michael getting what he has deserved since....FOREVER! He has run out of friend-sources to be used and abused at will for their kindness.
Emmett's 'conversation' with DDS had me fist-pumping and cheering aloud! You know that you are an asshole if your friends would rather join 'See the Light' rather than hang out with you...DAMN!! LOL
I LOVED that Blake had no qualms in pointing out Michael's shortcomings and then when Michael thought he would repay it in kind, his points fell flat. I LOVE Ted in this! It is easy to see that he's adopted Brian's 'No Bullshit' policy but more than that Ted has his own backbone and he isn't afraid to stretch it!
Oh and then the little peanut-brained bastard tried to pull the 'Brian's my best friend' card twice. The first was with Blake and he was immediately shot down. I will NEVER figure out why he thought that tactic would work on someone as self-assured as Justin/ I LOVED the way Justin calmly- and laughingly- dismantled Michael's lies. And then had the nerve to lie without checking the facts first. Brian's remarks about Mutton-mouth and the VIP section was priceless! I still marvel at the Peter Pan reference though since Brian is the one with TWO successful businesses while Michael can't and doesn't pay his own rent on his comic book store. Go figure! Justin makes 20-50K per painting but Ben and Michael regarded him as childish...But meanwhile Ben is working his ass off while Michael is playing plug-in-socket with mutton mouth while his comic shop is empty- NOT CLOSED- but EMPTY...LOL Yeah, and the STFD Golden Chair Award goes to: Michael Charles Novotny-Bruckner!!
I honestly can't wait for the next chapter of this!!!! LMAO this made my night!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 28, 2016 2:57 am Title: Chapter 7
Gotta love how Michael turns everything around. Even with all his old friends telling him he's a pretentous prick, he still feels the need to badmouth Justin and Blake. So much to do to Mikey and I can't wait to find out what you have planned next.
Date: Jul 27, 2016 4:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved everyone's reaction! Lindsey is reight in this one...why is anyone surprised? I guess, since she grew up WASP, it's something she was more than likely expecting at some point. An Justin just being so non-chalant about it afterwards. I think it will take time for Mel to get used to this side of Justin. I love how they both were so impressed that Justin stood up for the group, not just Brian
Brian of course was completely turned on. No surprise there. LOL
Ben Ben Ben...I really don't know if he'll be able to come back from this. He's burned alot of bridges. His behaviour has been comopletely inexcuseable and totally unforgivable ESPECIALLY when it comes to Hunter and JR. Justin can handle Ben and Michael's attitude towards himself, and even the others. but when it comes to the kids......look out! JR is too young to really understand, but hunter! OMG...my heart broke at that. I get that Ben is only now realizing his behaviour has been beyond reproach...but still. To take that attitude with your child!! To put your husband and your frigging friends before the needs of your own kid?!?! I don't know. I think perhaps maybe possibly he and Hunter can at asome point become tentative friends, but hunter will never completely trust Ben I don't think. I honestly felt sick to my stomach at that point of the fic. so well done!
Michael as usualy looks everywhee else to blam rather than looking at himself. He'll get no sympathy from anyone and his plan to have himself adn Brian find new partners.........yeah...like that's gonna happen. there's no way Justin will fall for his crap. There are too many others to support him, who will derail anything Michael has planned. I'm really looking forward to reading what you have up your sleeve in that regard. and can't wait to see the outcome! LOL. will he and Moany keep hooking up?
another great chapter and really really really looking forward to the next chapter(s).
Cheers!!!!!!!
Elaine
Date: Jul 27, 2016 1:42 pm Title: Chapter 6
Bruckner bridges falling down, falling down, falling. Bruckner bridges falling down, OH the DUMMIES!!!! LOL
Well the aftermath of Sunshine Supernova are having some very interesting effects on Planet Delusion! I guess that from the DDS point of view, Ben should blame Justin for Michael playing plug-in-socket with Mutton-mouth, too. My goodness, his sense of entitlement is astounding. Well both Captain Denial and Dumbass Denial Stupid along with Elite Egotist and the Mutton Man got taken down by a true WASP and none of them could handle the sting of truth!
Mel cracks me up! I would be shocked too if someone I've known for 8 years who always had the sweetest disposition turns out to possess MORE venom than his Alpha counterpart. I LOVED that she realized that Justin wasn't just defending himself but everyone else in his inner circle. And I loved Lindsay's response, 'Why are we surprised?' Why INDEED! She is married to a Wasp but didn't know that Justin has the same tendencies? LOL I think they all know now that sweet little Justin can be extremely bitter too.
Looking forward to the continuing burning bridge of the Bruckners and to Michael realizing that he truly has no one left!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 27, 2016 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
So So good... can't wait for more....
I don't read WIP, but this looked just too good... update quickly please! keep this cookie happy :)
Date: Jul 27, 2016 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG, this was THE BEST... take that assholes!!!! Mikey and Monti... ewwwww lol
Go Justin!!!!!
Date: Jul 27, 2016 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
Michael just infuriates me... I hope Kevin joins the fun group lol
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2016 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
Love everyone's view points on Justin's little talk with Michael and Ben. Glad they told Emmett, who got to Debbie before Mikey could. Ben's realizing that his excusing Mikey's behavior was partially to blame. But Mikey's supposed to be a grown man. He acts more like a kid then the kids do. Great chapter.
Date: Jul 27, 2016 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ben thinks Justin and Brian act like kids and drag Michael down???? what the hell planet is he living on??? Even Deb can see it! ugh
Date: Jul 27, 2016 11:54 am Title: Chapter 2
Again, Mikey is an ass, but I am glad the rest of the people all see it too... and it almost makes me feel better it isn't Justin alone he targets. At least everyone sees it!
Date: Jul 27, 2016 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow... Mikey is awful, but not quite in the way I expected... he doesn't want Brian, but doens't want Justin for him...
Now nobody is good enough??? ugh, Mikey makes my skin crawl!
Date: Jul 27, 2016 9:13 am Title: Chapter 6
Can't wait to see if Michael will dare coming to his Mommy.
Date: Jul 27, 2016 9:11 am Title: Chapter 5
So happy that Gus asked if he could call Justin Papa.
Michael's reaction when Mel asked about Ben being JR's papa: what a jackass.
The whole scene at the zoo; too many things are happening to comment but the lashing out at Michael and Ben was the best of all.
Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Date: Jul 27, 2016 9:05 am Title: Chapter 4
Excellent chapter, as always.
Eli and Monty are so snobs; the same type as the Good Doctor David.
Yeah, the girls are coming back.
So glad Brian and Mel getting along well.
Eli and Monty clashing Brian and Michael doesn't say anything the protect his "best friend": that tells everything about Michael deviate mind.
I-800-382-5633 is hilarious but will Michael get the meaning? It seems not.
As if Justin would ever invite Dumb the Frist and the Snobs.
Date: Jul 27, 2016 5:31 am Title: Chapter 6
Yeah, Deb findly got a clue and is going to kick Michael to the curb like Ben did!
Poor Brian, has to wait for sexy time with Justin. The joys of parenthood
Date: Jul 27, 2016 4:56 am Title: Chapter 6
Brilliant....simply brilliant!
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2016 4:32 am Title: Chapter 6
*ROFLMAO* Ben got it right between the eyes and now he knows the price he paid to associate with The Fakes, don't feel any sympathy because everything Justin said was the truth and the truth always hurts.
Now everyone knows that you don't piss off Sunshine unless you want your secrets out in the open.
Nice to know about Hunter is doing well glad that Deb and Carl stepped in and gave him the support he needed when Ben and Michael turned into idiots.
Eli tossing Monty's stuff out on to the street was Hilarious, I especially liked when he broadcast to the neighborhood about Minty and Michael cheating that was such a good move.
Michael getting kicked to streets as well at least Ben was smart enough to not put his name on the house deed, perhaps Monty and Michael can live together now that their marriages are over? lol (Bet Monty will be riveted about the endless discussion of Captain Astro and Michael will drool over his pompous opinion about stuff he will never understand)
The thought of Michael trying to get revenge on Justin is laughable that I can't wait to read his attempts, Michael is not a great thinker so this just be quite amusing.
Date: Jul 27, 2016 2:33 am Title: Chapter 5
ROFLMAO!!! Go Justin!!! Super pissed Sunshine is fun.
I felt sorry for Ben for about 5 seconds, he was in the dark while Mr. Whiney and Monty were playing slap and tickle at Red Cape Comics. This is what happens when you support Mr. Whiney.
Keep it coming, I'm loving it!!
Sandy
Date: Jul 27, 2016 2:26 am Title: Chapter 5
YESSS LOL GO JUSTIN THIS WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER. BEN IS AN IDIOT
Date: Jul 27, 2016 1:46 am Title: Chapter 5
OMG the hypocrisy. A pissed of Sunshine certainly turns into a fireball. Loved it.
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2016 12:43 am Title: Chapter 5
HOLY SH!t!!! I So Love Justin!! He laid the verbal Smack Down on Ben and their snobby friends and I am rolling lol.
Justin had to do it because Ben had no right to put the blame for why JR did not want to hang with her father or the Fakes on Justin, if Michael doesn't call to find out about his daughter (Surprised he remembers what she looks like) then everyone is just supposed to wait? Bump that he wasn't worried about JR until he saw her with Justin, then all of a sudden he wanted to get loud and draw everyone into the conversation (Ass!!).
JR exerting her independence at four is good because a child can tell the difference between genuine kindness and someone being Fake.
Justin throwing out the reason why Michael follows Monty was Hilarious I was not expecting that to happen, well at least Eli can now say his relationship is exactly the heteros he so wants to emulate, Monty most be so proud I bet Ben is? :)
You threw away true friendship to hang with a group of people who are Pretentious, Egotistical, Glorified, Social Climbing Snobs one of whom is sleeping with your husband...Way to Go Ben!!!
You tossed Hunter back out into the streets because of what these two idiots said?
You let them bad mouth your mother-in-law, criticise Brian, Justin, Emmett, hang on Drew's celebrity status, ignore Blake and Ted so you could feel important and it all crashed in burned!
I can't feel bad because Ben walked into this with his eyes wide open, Ben let this happen.
Ben Bruckner gave Michael free reign to act however he wanted and now it has come back to bite him in the ass!!
I can't wait for the next chapter I want to know how long Justin has known about Michael cheating?
Date: Jul 26, 2016 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oooo burn! Go, Sunshine!
Date: Jul 26, 2016 9:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG....WTG SUNSHINE!!!! I absolutely loved every bit this! Ben deserved the truth after trying to excuse Michael of his wrong doings.