Date: Jul 31, 2016 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 15
HAHAHAHA! You write the most hated Michaels... I love it! Great story, as usual.
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2016 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 15
I am really going to miss this. Mikey still dosn't get it. This is the kind of story that you could continue on forever.
Date: Jul 31, 2016 9:34 pm Title: Chapter 15
LMAO!!!! LMFAO!!!! And so we have reached the conclusion of Planet Delusion. I am so sad to see the end of this but what an ending it WAS!!
Michael finally had to take responsibility for being an ass, even if I thought the prison sentence wasn't long enough. It was nice to see that Debbie wasn't asking for Michael to be pardoned or defending him. It was even nicer to see that she held herself up as being his primary enabler. That showed such growth on her part!
I think Brian's assessment of David's choices in partners was spot-on! I think that he expects tricks...oops I mean PARTNERS to fall into his lap simply because he's a doctor. One would think that he would have learned not to hold himself up as a willing flunkie since he was burned by Michael not once but TWICE!
Happy to know that Ben is on the right track in restoring his relationship with Hunter. I'm also happy to know that he's moved on from Whineville and is designing a new life for himself. Sad to know that he and the gang couldn't have remained friends but I totally understand why! Ben picked up where Debbie had left off in defending Michael's behavior, even going so far as to jump on his "Blame Justin" bandwagon and that was unforgivable in so many respects. If Ben hand't learned to judge all of them based on their own merits after knowing them for so many years, then he didn't deserve to remain a part of the 'family.' I think it was a wise move on their parts since none of them are that easily-influenced or deluded.
As for Michael himself: LMAO! LMAO! LMAOOOOOOOoooooooooooo!!!!! That little twerp is the epitome of "This is your brain on drugs!" Talk about a faulty memory. I swear that fool must have had LSD for blood since he always seemed to be TRIPPING! I couldn't help but laugh at his speech before the court. Once again, he gave the ADA an open and shut case simply by being himself. To call him childish, idiotic, ignoramus, jackass, ridiculous, stupid and a host of other adjectives to describe him would be doing a veritable disservice to the english language and the words themselves.
Blake and Justin are such Brats but in the BEST way possible!!! OMG! I LOVE THEM! I would have done the exact same thing if I was in their positions. It is no shortage of amazing that those two became such good friends. In their professional lives, they are both successful but in their personal lives there is no shortage of fun, laughter or innocently-portrayed vindictiveness. Gotta love blonds with cutting wits, wicked senses of humor and the glimpses of brilliance disguised behind innocent facades. Brian and Ted have their hands full with the mischievous duo and I'll bet they wouldn't have it any other way!
Looking forward to your next fic!! God's Good Gravy, Darling!! You have finished 5 well-written, thoroughly-engaging fics in a little over a month and I am so grateful for your gift of writing!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 31, 2016 8:39 pm Title: Chapter 15
This is delicious: I love how you make Justin and Blake so evil and so nice at the same time. They are really great together; it's a shame they didn't get along like that in the series.
Michael is the only one complaining but then, he has to drink Coke while he loves Pepsi; what a nightmare...
Thank you so much for this story; can't wait to read what you have in your sleeve for the next one (hoping there will be one).
Date: Jul 31, 2016 4:33 pm Title: Chapter 14
I haven't read Nichelle's comments yet but I'm sure she likes what you wrote about Dumb the First; in fact, I'm quite sure everybody likes it.
Thank you for the entertainment!
Date: Jul 31, 2016 4:19 pm Title: Chapter 13
Excellent ending as well!!
Date: Jul 31, 2016 4:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
The whole chapter is a delight but the end is hilarious!
Michael is going to fall hard.
Date: Jul 31, 2016 3:49 pm Title: Chapter 11
Dr David is going to LOVE what Michael told the reporter...
He wanted to bash Justin and got bashed in return.
Very good job to highlight 2 things that could have damage Justin and in fact have turn into a positive feedback.
Date: Jul 31, 2016 3:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
Yep, Michael jumped right into a new hole and Dr David doesn't like it at all.
Good for Justin to reply with David's pole dance and Divina being Michael's father.
Date: Jul 31, 2016 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow, David's back: that's an amazing idea to add some trouble into an already shaken situation; well done!!
Date: Jul 31, 2016 2:45 pm Title: Chapter 8
Nice thinking from Brian: “Well, when he offered to replace Justin, I figured it was a way to tell him to get lost.”
Date: Jul 31, 2016 2:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
Happy to know that Brian found out about the "Kip's debacle".
Michael is keeping digging the hole that will make him disappear; one can hope!
Date: Jul 31, 2016 8:36 am Title: Chapter 14
Okay I am sorry this is coming to an end...seriously I fist pump, get comfy and start from the beginning with every new posting - and I only do that with a few stories....BUT can you please please please open a large canowhipass and pour it over Mikey's head and then crush said can onto said head for good measure.
A pleasure to read and look forward to more fics
MissMerlot xxx
Date: Jul 31, 2016 4:07 am Title: Chapter 14
And now we're looking into Planet Delusion which has skipped its commercial break in favor of more foolery!!
So this little entitled, spoiled, petulant bastard thinks that David and everyone else owes him something, eh? They all owe him what he has given them which is absolutely NOTHING!! I think some time in jail for the thieving bastard to cool his heels is in order!! I laughed every single time the lying booger squealed on himself. And the Idiot of the Year Award goes to: Michael Charles Novotny. As you can see Michael is winning a lot of awards for being an asshole...or I should say for being himself! I mean how do you call someone who you want to be your lawyer and then tell them to shut up? Dumb + Ass = Michael!
I am so damn proud of Debbie right now!! She has put her foot down with Brian. Let Michael finally pay for his actions instead of buying into his "You owe me" syndrome. Sorry that it took her being ridiculed and basically assaulted for her to see what a brat Michael is but hey, better late than never.
Blake and Justin crack me up! They are such troublemakers...and I LOVE them for it! I would say that while Michael is in jail they put him in touch with a shrink since he seems so fixated on blaming Justin, but I wouldn't wish that voice on anyone. Perhaps Brian is right that Michael will get shanked the minute he whines in jail. If that's the case though, perhaps they should just put the rat-bastard in solitary confinement with a muzzle on. Hell, it semi-worked for Hannibal Lecter so why not for someone whose tongue as just as vicious only without the whole cannibal thing?LOL
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2016 4:02 am Title: Chapter 14
Darn I am going to miss this. Mikey has surpassed himself in stupidity. Maybe that can get him off on an insanity plea? After all nobody would believe he's that stupid.
Date: Jul 31, 2016 3:31 am Title: Chapter 14
Omg....he will never learn.
Date: Jul 31, 2016 2:54 am Title: Chapter 13
I almost feel sorry for Michael....almost
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2016 2:47 am Title: Chapter 13
Could Mikey get any stupider? I think not. Great Chapter.
Date: Jul 31, 2016 2:02 am Title: Chapter 13
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!! The devil is coming due for Michael Novotny!! YES!!!!!!! This was a BRILLIANT chapter! I couldn't help but smile the entire time.
I'm glad that David's talk with Ben really helped him to see what type of opportunistic and pretentious idiot Michael had become. I may not like David for ANY reason but I wouldn't have wished such a 'Weasel' plague on him! I'm glad that he is having Michael arrested for credit card fraud. It's about time that he learns to stand on his own two feet and stop looking for others to put out the fires he creates with his words and deeds. Keep on burning those bridges, Mikey. Hell, I'll even give him the damn matches since watching his world crumble is so entertaining!
And can I just say that I LOVED Brian's last comment!! If that wasn't perfect, I have no idea what was. Michael still thinking that he can depend on anyone else after the stunts he's pulled is why I continue to call him Dumbass Denial Stupid! He is the only inhabitant left on Planet Delusion and I'm glad he is being left there.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 31, 2016 2:00 am Title: Chapter 13
Michael is his own worst emeny. ROFLMAO
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2016 1:48 am Title: Chapter 13
He Charged $15, 000+ on David's credit cards? Michael brings a new definition to King of the Morons. I hope he enjoys jail because it looks like he will be spending some time there! *ROFLMAO*
I am sitting here smiling as I write this review because everything Michael does is so stupid that I have to laugh or would pull my hair out.
He is spending money like he has a money tree in the backyard or another rich boyfriend who will just allow him free reign over his money, not that David did that he was just trying to be nice and he got kicked in the ass for it.
Brian's reaction to the call he got from Michael was BRILLIANT and just what the little weasel deserved, Michael burnt all his bridges and now he needs them to save his puny ass, but no one is coming to help.
Looking forward to everyone's reaction to the latest Michael Drama, in the meantime I am going to sit here and crack up :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2016 7:26 pm Title: Chapter 12
David is going there flip his lid when he finds out how much Michael spent and I can't wait, boy was he dumb to give Michael that credit card and now he will never get his money back *evil laugh*
Michael still hasn't realized that using his old stand 'But I'm His Best Friend' no longer works no one wants to talk to him, I am surprised that Emmett even went to lunch with him, Nice that Emmett's business is doing so well I bet that party he is planning for Drew and his teammates will be AMAZING!
Justin handled Michael perfectly with the photo of him and Brian, Michael still hasn't learned that he can't compete with Justin because he is still sitting at the kiddies table.lol
Why do I get the feeling Michael is going to try to finagle an invite to the party, especially if he finds out everyone else is going?
Waiting Patiently for the next chapter ;)
Date: Jul 30, 2016 3:46 pm Title: Chapter 12
I love this!!! Lol
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2016 7:09 am Title: Chapter 12
ROFLMAO! This is tooo funny! Thank you.
Date: Jul 30, 2016 6:33 am Title: Chapter 12
**I receive a picture message from Justin. I opened it and it was a picture of Brian kissing Justin's ass. The text said that he would have told me to kiss his ass but prefers Brian to do it.**
This is priceless. LOL... Cryin' here.
Love this story!
Roni