Date: Jul 26, 2016 9:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
That damn Michael.......
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2016 8:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, this was gooood. I can't believe Mikey and to find he's fucking Monte! Go, Justin!!!
Date: Jul 26, 2016 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG!!! OMGGGG!!!! OMGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!! I'm laughing so damn hard right now! Well now we all know WHY DDS was hanging on Mutton-mouth's tip so much...it's because he's been sucking it too! YIKES! Michael topping? Personally I prefer to think that he's a eunuch and only uses a tube to pee....*shivers and blech* I now NEED Brain Bleach!
As for Captain Denial.... Ben really did deserve having all that self-righteousness thrown right back in his face. Can't understand why no one wants to be around you? Well I don't think there is a misconception left since Justin put it all plainly. While his new friends and his husband are busy being hypocrites, he's too busy attaining the perfect level of snobbery to receive a SMACKDOWN- WASP style, which Justin delivered in spades!!
I'm with Brian....Never Piss Justin Taylor OFF!!! LMAO! I know there is more coming soon from Planet Delusion. Ben has had a lot of revelations at the zoo and will have to decide what to do with Monkey...oops I mean Mikey, LOL
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 26, 2016 8:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
Smack down at the zoo! I love it!
Is it wrong to love seeing Michael verbally taken down by Justin...
Hugs ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 26, 2016 8:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
O!!!M!!!!G!!!!!!!!!! That was so AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! I read and re-read that a couple times. Completely blindsided! Did not see that one coming from a mile away. I'm with Brian on this one. Do not piss off Justin! Will Ben FINALLY see things as they are now? Will he take his head out of his ass and see exactly what kind of people Mondy and Eli are or will his sismply comiserate with Eli. Blame everyone else because he and Michael were never included? I mean according to he, Michael and their 2 newest friends, it's always someone else's fault.
I'm almost bouncing n my seat wanting to find out what happens next!! LOL.
Typical Michael blaming Ben. I can't wait to see what Deb's reaction is going to be!!
Hunter ran away??! No wonder if shit like that is going on in their home. He'd feel completely unwanted around the likes of those 2 being influenced by M&E.
good for JR standing up for what she wants. Even in her 4 year old mind she knows that the other "adults" aren't fun for her.
Terribly excited to see what bring to this in teh upcoming chapters!
I'm still cackling over Justin's take down.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jul 26, 2016 4:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
Michael's wants to empress everyone with his friends status, yet he's embarrassed my their partners careers. I wonder if he see the irony, that he's just like them. His partner is a professor, and he sells comics...
Later Hon ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 26, 2016 3:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
"I like Justin and Brian but they still act like kids and it drags Michael down with them." I think Ben's got it backwards...
So glad to see a new chapter, and I still have one more to read!!!
Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 26, 2016 3:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
You know what cracks me up about the attitude of Monti and eli. The ytry so hard to be "like the straight people"...yet the straight people are no different. Some want marriage, some don't belive in it. Some are sluts and take promiscuity to a whole new leverl, others are more choosy. How is that any different that those who are gay? A snob is a snot is a snob. doesn't matter the sexuality, the colour or the religion.
Ben needs to realize that Michael is the problem, not the gang. He stands aside allowing Michael to have the most abhorant behavior...just lets it slide. I don't get it. He's beginning to blame the others for Michael's behaviour...that they aren't including them. well...why should they? The fact that both Michael adn Ben allowed fo rthe stotty behaviour of Monty and eli to continue...to treat Deb they way the did!! WOW...I can't believe Michael told Deb that. Glad she gave back to them the same as she got. Never....and I mean NEVER allow someone outside insult your mother! Especially some social climbing, elitist stotty assholes!
The 1-800 number was BRILLIANT!! Laughed my ass off on that one! I really have to remember that one!!
I do have 1 little favour to ask. When changing the POV's on the characters...could you go back to labeling that way? It makes reading it a bit smoother so I don't have to figure out who's talking. allows for the flow to go smoother. At least for me.
another great story. am really enjoying the approaches you are taking on each of them. also, how each one has different relationships. I mean, in this one B&J and the girls are getting along...another, Lindsey is a psycho, or Mel is...or Mel is cool. I like how you mix it up. In this one it's Michael and surprisingly Ben is being an ass. Enjoying your perspectives!!
Cheers!!
Elaine
Date: Jul 26, 2016 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow I'm not liking Ben very much right now....he is sounding like Deb
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2016 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
ROFLMAO. Mikey is alienating everyone. HE wants to impress everyone with HIS friends. He told Ben he was going to see JR? That's going to bite him on the ass.
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2016 4:36 am Title: Chapter 4
Michael and Ben are so delusional that they are getting on my nerves with their snotty, pretentious attitudes, I mean you know it is bad when even Debbie doesn't want to be around her son lol.
Monty and Eli are just social climbers who are bored with their hum drum lives so they look down there noses at others who aren't like them...Fake and Wonderfully Plastic!
Ben needs to catch a clue he is an even worse snob than David (And that is saying Something!!), no one wants to hang with you and Michael because you both look down your nose and criticize them, who wants to hang with people like that?
I think I know of four people who need to be embarrassed royally and brought down several pegs.
Glad the girls are moving back but Michael is going to be such a pain when he finds out they are staying with Brian and Justin.
Looking forward to Justin, Blake and everyone else giving the almighty smack down to Michael, Ben and the Fakes :)
Date: Jul 26, 2016 4:35 am Title: Chapter 4
And now for another commentary on Planet Delusion....
First, I would just like to say that I will be passing 1-800-382-5633 out to a whole LOT of people!! That was pure genius!!! OMG! My abs are killing me right now from laughing my ass OFF!!! I think I may even get t-shirts with that number printed! LOL
Secondly, I like Mel and Brian's dynamic here. She tells it like it is and Brian in turn, receives her opinion without issue. For ONCE, he is not defending the actions of the Dumbass.
Third, is it possible that Ben is realizing the mistake it was to expose Michael to Monty and Eli? Brian should tell Ben what it was like to be around Michael during the Dickhead Dave episodes of their lives and perhaps he'll understand what kind of monster he created. Better yet, Justin should tell him since he was around then too and it might be absorbed better.
Finally, the Dumbass himself...SMH... acceptance into the "Pretentious Assholery Network" is so damn important to him that he allows someone he's known for 3 seconds to insult his mother...in his OWN house?!!! WTF! Monty would still be picking my toenails out of his throat by way of my foot- damn that- my whole LEG up his ass if his Mutton-Mouth EVER and I mean EEEEEVVVVVEEEEERRRRR said a word against my mama! I would seriously be making a Foot Track and a Dot when I walked because they would have had to replace my missing leg with a wooden stick!!! And he still wants to be friends with these idiots?!
Furthermore, he kept let them keep insulting Brian like he isn't MORE successful or MORE beautiful or MORE intelligent than his 'new found friends' and then when his own husband tells them that people are able to have fulfilling lives being parents and still having a much-needed social life, Michael agrees with those Mealy-mouth bigots?! Some best friend. Is there any wonder WHY no one wants to be around him? I'm glad that Brian, Justin, Ted, Blake, Em and Drew is not helping that pathetic little social climber. 'They need to pattern themselves after us' indeed! Michael needs to have a lobotomy and have his brain donated to science to find out what STUPID really looks like.
Looking forward to another installment for my Planet Delusional blog!! LOL
Happy writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 26, 2016 3:37 am Title: Chapter 3
Really loving this. I want to see Brian's reaction to Michael trying to set up Brian and that Kevin rather dating Justin. Wasn't he at the table when Justin made the speech, why didn't Brian step in? Ben is really pissing me off. He is so delusional and saying that Brian and Justin are acting like kids ,he needs to take a good look at whiny delusional Michael. Why is Ben thinking that Justin should invite them to their outings, is he that stupid to think that only its Justin that isnt inviting them. He should know its Brian and everyone else that doesnt want them. And how can Ben actually think that it's normal for Michael to want a week trip without husband's and think it's ok. I'm thinking that maybe he deserves Michael. Michael drags himself down , get a clue Ben! Please next chapter soon!
Date: Jul 26, 2016 3:23 am Title: Chapter 3
And now we wait for Michael to go all DRAMA QUEEN when he finds out that the girls are moving home and staying at Britin.
You know that Michael will not be allowed at Britin because he pissed off Justin.
Waiting for the next chapter (and feeding your muse chocolate to keep her happy)
Sandy
Date: Jul 26, 2016 2:18 am Title: Chapter 3
Oi!! Seriously Ben?! Give your head a shake. I agree with Justin. What planet is he living on? Glad that Kevin fiasco was nipped in the bud and quickly too. Michael is a sinking ship and Ben needs to either go down with the ship or start paddling in the other direction. He seems a wee bit pretentious too. Thinking the boys are less mature. His friends being all "adult like".
Thanks for another quick update.
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Jul 26, 2016 1:58 am Title: Chapter 3
And now we join DDS already in progress.... SOOOOOOoooooooo DDS invited Captain Oblivious to meet Brian hoping that they would hit it off. Then Captain Oblivious tells Justin that he would have rather dated him. Go figure!! Kudos to Captain Oblivious for asking the right questions and for Justin calling Michael out on his bs in front of everyone!
Then we have DDS who also plays his twin brother Captain Whine who was caught in a lie but Captain Denial doesn't know who to believe?? GTFOH!!! Brian and Justin still acts like kids when his husband has the mental maturity of a can of peas??!! Really Ben?! REALLY?? He and Michael entered Stepford Fagdom and somehow it is Brian, Justin, Ted, Blake, Em and Drew's fault that they don't like the pretentious asses- OH sorry their new friends- Elite Egotist and Manure-Mouth Monty? I can't...I just CANNOT see Ben's reasoning here. Sounds to me like being around DDS has warped Ben's perception of the real deal. And Ben needs to get a clue as to just who the <bleep> he married!
Tune in next time for more woes from Planet Delusion!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 26, 2016 1:19 am Title: Chapter 3
Well, Ben pissed me off. He's just as delusional as Mikey. Lets blame everyone else except for the one being the problem. Hope he gets a clue.
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2016 1:18 am Title: Chapter 3
You've really got things going! It was nice that Kevin talked with Justin and even better when Justin went back to the gang and told them what was going on. Michael is getting out of hand and poor Ben is backing the wrong horse. Love your stories!
Date: Jul 26, 2016 1:08 am Title: Chapter 2
Boy is Michael in trouble....lol I love it
Date: Jul 26, 2016 1:01 am Title: Chapter 2
I love this! Michael is such an ass!
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2016 12:33 am Title: Chapter 2
Brian, Ted and Emmett know full well that even if it hadn't rained that they would have been bored because they wanted to be with their partners instead of Michael's version of fun.
I agree with Drew that putting some distance from Michael is a good thing he is behaving so childishly, what right does he have to decide who belongs together and who doesn't?
He got lucky with Ben who is not helping because he is allowing Michael to continue acting this way instead of making it seem like in some way Brian is at fault.
They aren't fourteen anymore trying to decide if they should go to the movies or the arcade, they are grown men with lives of their own and none of them need Michael's permission to love who they want.
I can't wait for Justin to knock Michael off his high and mighty pedestal, he is the one who changed after he and Ben got married not Brian, Brian would never live a stepford life but he would live his life with Justin by his side the way they want, now Michael wants Brian to live the exact life he hates?
Is Michael Stupid?
The girls are coming with the kids who will probably behave more mature than Michael could any day of the week.
I wonder if Michael is going to try for a dinner party to set up Brian with that Kevin guy and to embarrass Justin in front of everyone??
Date: Jul 26, 2016 12:03 am Title: Chapter 2
Mikey needs to get a life and a clue. I so want to see Justin go at Mikey and his bullshit.
Anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
Date: Jul 25, 2016 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
<In my Robin Leech voice> And so we continue the saga of "Dumbass Denial Stupid" starring Michael Chaprles Novotny in an uncoveted role. The whiny pain-in-the-ass sure is setting himself up to be friendless. First trying to guilt Brian, Ted and Em into doing what he wants them to do and then insulting 2 out of their 3 partners. WTG Asshole!
Justin's monologue cracked me up. If Eli for one second thought that Justin would want a reprisal of hanging out with another Ethan, he was sadly mistaken. I'm almost certain that Michael put the jerk up to saying that Justin could do a lot better than Brian. It sounds exactly like something the little twerp would do in his quest to get Justin to leave. Sadly for Eli or Elite Egotist (as I'll probably end up calling him), he was not informed of Justin aversion to pretentious idiots. If he had done his research, he would know that Justin grew up around them and found them lacking. Stepford Fag Wannabe indeed!
I'm glad that Blake and Justin have developed a solid friendship. The both of them have a lot in common. Both are in love with intelligent brunets who compliment them in all areas. Plus the slight age difference between the two puts them on a better ground to understand the trials of dating older men who are in a sense 'fixers.' I look forward to watching their friendship bloom.
Can I just say that I LOVE Drew?!! He took the words right out of my mouth when he asked Em to limit his time with DDS. As an outsider, Drew, Justin and Blake have a unique perspective on the 'Original 4' dynamic. If Ben would open his eyes- or at the very least his mouth- he would realize that his husband is still a 14 year old trapped in a semi-grown man's body.
Which brings me to Ben...WHY STAR WHY do you still have him with that candy-ass DDS? He's too intelligent to continue to be played by Mickey Mouse's human twin! Perhaps Ben should dump the dead weight and make a play for the bank...as in that President of the Bank, Kevin. Perhaps then HE can have an adult conversation too!
Tune in next time for the ongoing saga of Dumbass Denial Stupid. I'm Robin Leech trapped in Nichelle Wellesly's body and will see you next time! LOL
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 25, 2016 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Poor Whiny, his plans went to the gutter along with the rain.
I would love to see Drew clashing Michael; he would run to his Mommy or to Brian.
So happy everybody is sticking by Brian's plan to go back to the Pitts.
Can't wait to see what Dumb the First will do next.
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2016 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh boy. I can't wait to see how Mikey pisses Justin off and Justin lets him have it. This is going to be fun!