Reviewer: Ruby_Zella Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2020 9:11 am Title: An Intimate Suicide

Wow. This was really well written

Author's Response:

Thank you! I forget sometimes exactly what I've written and an unexpected review gives me the chance to visit something again. This was a killer - pardon the pun. Thanks for your kind words. 

 

Roni

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2018 6:49 pm Title: An Intimate Suicide

All I can say is 'WOW'! I'm not normally a reader of MCD fics, but saw the shortness and thought I'd guve it a try. And I'm so happy I did.

Your imagery was amazing. But the fic was heart-wrencing. Their blood lingered together for all to see...  Just Wow!

Hugs, Cathy

 

Author's Response:

Thank you, Cathy. As you can see from some of my stuff, I'm kinda the queen of angst. I find a special kind of beauty in the death fic. It lets a writer explore emotion that they can't in any other setting. Thanks for reading and commenting. 

Roni

Reviewer: Shell Scott Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2016 9:33 am Title: An Intimate Suicide

need to stop reading this, it makes me cry. So powerful 

Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2016 10:28 pm Title: An Intimate Suicide

So glad you are writing again. Normally I won't read death fics, but it was short and from the title I figured it would be both of them. Very sad but well written.

~Lorie

Reviewer: Saje Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2016 3:51 pm Title: An Intimate Suicide

As always, you rip my guts out in the loveliest of ways.....

Saje

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2016 8:10 am Title: An Intimate Suicide

"the other willingly letting it slide down his hands and through his fingers without hesitation"... beautifully written, heart wrenching.

I always thought that Brian would choose an overdose to avoid seeing what was happening and get numb enough to let go. He was a master of avoidance when sentiments were involved.

This is a death were you see the blood, the life leaving your body: an obvious love declaration for everybody to know.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. I tend to the poetic a bit much in my short-short stories. :) But I love imagery! I want to be able to see the scene and that, admittedly, had an impact on Brian's choice here. I think that in all likelihood he would choose drugs. But that is much, much harder to 'visualize' with words. I also tried to make it less sentimental and a little more sarcastic Brian. And I think he definitely wanted to make a statement of love here. Actions...no words for him on that. 

Roni

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2016 1:55 am Title: An Intimate Suicide

I'm thrilled to see a new story from you, but is it okay if I save this till one of my own darker moments next winter? I'm not sure I could hate to read it in my angst-free summer mode. Can you forgive me? TAG

Author's Response:

You are absolved Tag! LOL Save it for when your tear ducts need flushing. 

Roni

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2016 1:23 am Title: An Intimate Suicide

My heart ached reading this! Brian's reflections of this time with Justin were amazingly vivid. Normally I never read an MCD but I'm glad I read this one.

HUGS,

~Nichelle

Author's Response:

Thank you, Nichelle. For some reason I find the greatest testiment to the ties between these two in death fics. I'm such an angst whore. And the image of Brian dying in the spot where Justin died... god my heart was twisting when I wrote that. But... at least it was short! 

Roni