[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2016 5:31 pm Title: Chapter 18
Excellent first fic. Congratulations. TAG
Author's Response:
Thank you i learned from reading all of you. I am really glad people like it.
Date: Jul 07, 2016 8:20 pm Title: Chapter 18
I loved this crazy story about Michael going down and Brian/Justin going strong.
I laughed a lot because you have a way to find and tell things that are really funny.
I loved the couple Emmett/Daphne: lethal weapon!
Well done.
Date: Jul 07, 2016 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 17
Yeah!! Drew is back!!
Date: Jul 07, 2016 6:20 pm Title: Chapter 14
Long review because I had to extract my favorite parts:
- Daphne: Justin fills me in on the “wifey visits’ as Brian is calling them and then tells me about the comic thing. I miss so much some days. I feel someone wrap their hands around me and kiss my ear. I really wish Brian had a straight brother.
“How’s it going my goddess.” I can’t help it, I giggled.
“Good, Emmett is with me. We have to go look for Captain Astro stupidity. Seen your wife lately?” I ask as I turn to look at Brian.
“Well, Justin is behind you, so yes, but if you’re talking about Deb’s spawn no.” I stare at Brian.
We all know Brian loves Justin, he doesn’t run around proclaiming it, but it’s there to see. When he called Justin the wife, it’s his way of telling us. The best way to react is to do nothing.
And, the last one that cracked me up:
We look in and the music has changed and we see Michael dance by he grabs one of the wall racks and start to do a backbend. I don’t think the racks are made to hold up a grown man and they prove it when they give and Michael and the racks fall backwards. Ouch that had to hurt.
Date: Jul 07, 2016 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 10
Michael stealing Justin's tricks: yeah, riiiiiiight! He really has no clue at all..
Date: Jul 07, 2016 4:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
I loved that one :“Justin, just throw that away it’s not mine anyway.” Justin gives him a dirty look and keeps scrubbing. Brian walks over to Justin and takes the pot from him. He walks to the windows facing the alley, opens it and throws it out the window.
Date: Jul 07, 2016 3:38 pm Title: Chapter 7
JUSTIN : I grab his sweats and pull them down. See, I knew that would help. Ted just stares and Daphne is stopped. Brian on the other hand just pulls the sweats back up and walks away.
This is hilarious how he keeps distracting Ted with pants down or towel down.
Date: Jul 07, 2016 3:35 pm Title: Chapter 6
King of Babylon is next Saturday: I can't wait to see how Michael ios going to try to impress Brian with that...! More laughter to come I guess...
Date: Jul 07, 2016 3:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
Brian: “Mel, if I kill someone, or say Jen does, can we get justifiable homicide?”
Jen and Deb fighting: “Fuck you Deb, I don’t care if Brian fucked the President at Pride you do not hit my son.” Jen yelled.
Brian: Now I really wished that she could have said Johnny Depp or Patrick Swayze but not Bush, never Bush but I digress.
I only extracted those but the rest is so much fun!
Date: Jul 07, 2016 11:58 am Title: Chapter 18
So many unexpected twists! It was a really fun story to read.
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2016 5:53 am Title: Chapter 18
Great story! Ted and Justin was my favorite. Micheal will never learn but at least the others woke up. Keep the stories coming because I can't put ty gem fown.
Date: Jul 07, 2016 5:34 am Title: Chapter 3
He can't even cook something correctly; that's pathetic; he can't kiss either or give head without chocking: what a loon!
[Report This]Date: Jul 07, 2016 2:20 am Title: Chapter 18
I see Michael has moved his delusions to someone else I like that Brian is continuing to stay out of the drama, it is nice to see finding their own happiness and leaving Michael to figure out life on his own. I look forward to reading more from you because it was such a pleasure to go on this ride :)
Author's Response:
Thanks the newest one I am attempting is going to start out different but i have to laugh. Thank you for riding with me through all this.
Date: Jul 06, 2016 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
Poor Ted: so much fun discovering what he had just seen; little Justin isn't so little!
Author's Response:
Poor Ted he has a bit of a time with Justin but he get's over it.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2016 6:47 pm Title: Chapter 18
Darn! I can't believe this is over. I so enjoy Mikey bashing, especially when he does something stupid. I notice you didn't mention Carl. Everyone else is more or less happy. Which is a plus in my book. And yes, this story has been fun.
Author's Response:
I just didn't want to start repeating myself. I figured that I could put this away and maybe do a sequel later. I did start another on it's going to center the kids.
Date: Jul 06, 2016 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 17
This was perfect! And Drew singing to Em, Sweet! Loved it! ~ Kathleen 💕
Author's Response:
Than you, I really wanted to end it with a happy note.
Date: Jul 06, 2016 5:38 pm Title: Chapter 18
Nicely all tied up with a pretty red bow. Well done. Glad that everyone, well, almost everyone has found a bit of happiness. Ben adn Sean....good on Sean standing up to Deb. she means well, but she really needs to take the blinders off more than she already has when it comes to Micheal.
Great story! enjoyed this thoroughly!!!!!
thanks for sharing this with us adn look forward to reading more fics from you.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jul 06, 2016 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 18
Bravo! Well done my friend.
Date: Jul 06, 2016 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love it Michael, is in the line of fire from Lo and Daphne... You Go Girls!!! ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 06, 2016 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 17
LMFAO!!!!!!! OMG...I kinda wish something like that had happened in the show, just to get it down on film! LOL. Freaking hilarious both reading it and the visual I had in my head. Emmett wondering about the apple...lol. Little descriptions like that, the minute details are great. Deb hauling him off by the ear! Brilliant. LOL.
YAY Ben won!! Was there any doubt? Bringing back Sean as well! Great! Great scene you created there with the three of them on stage. Justin pulled it off well.
Happy for Emmett. Love he adn Drew together. and Ted is all happy as well.
Definitely looking forward to the next chapter and seeing how you bring it to it's finale. Sad when a story ends though. Glad though that you are writing another. Will look forward to reading that one.
Thank you!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Glad. I just put up a small ending. I might come back and write something about this again. Thank you for reviewing
Date: Jul 06, 2016 1:50 pm Title: Chapter 6
Delusional!!! Call the men in the little white coats! ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 06, 2016 1:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
Merow! Cat Fight! LMAO!!! ~ Kathleen
Date: Jul 06, 2016 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I lost my place, and had to start over from the beginning... You've been very busy, now I have to catch up! Loving this!
Hugs ~ Kathlen
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2016 4:15 am Title: Chapter 17
Hahaha. Orange hair and he thinks he was good? You had me going, I didn't see Ben as the one following Michael, but it worked. And the winner is - Big Ben. Michael doesn't even know everyone's laughing at him. How is Deb going to explain this to him? And you brought Drew in for Emmett, very nice.
Author's Response:
I am going to have everyone follow Brian's example. Michael is going to be on his own. The last chapter is coming it's just a wrap up for now. Maybe I come up with a new story. It's been a fun experience and thank you for all the reviews.
Date: Jul 06, 2016 3:11 am Title: Chapter 17
love that Ben won the contest- and Drew- what a great surprise- I lvoe him and Emmett together
Author's Response:
When writing this today, I wanted someone from the cast to win. Thanks for reading this.