[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2016 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
This keeps getting better and better. Looking forward to an anti-linds chapter. Gotta feel sorry for Carl because I'm not even sure the truth will get through to Deb.
Author's Response:
Carl is more rational and i think this might tip him over the edge. Linds is going to behave for a little while because on the show she is good for a little while then we see the sense of entitlement that she thinks is hers.
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2016 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
Love, love, love this. Brian and Jen tag teaming Debbie is where my imagination is going. Emmett trying to distract Brian, too funny. Let's hope jail isn't in anyone's future. Though a padded cell for Mikey and his mom might work,.
Author's Response:
I started to see the fight from Bridget Jones and thought if Deb and Jen fought this would be what it looks like.
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2016 11:58 am Title: Chapter 3
That explains a lot. The nut doesn't fall far from the tree. Emmett is a good friend and poor Ted. Dead puppies and kittens? lol.
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2016 11:46 am Title: Chapter 2
OMG. Cannot believe Mikey, he must have had a sacatic break or something. How Ben manages to stay with him if he's that bad at sucking cock amazes me. Love the look of this from other POVs.
Date: Jun 29, 2016 5:18 am Title: Chapter 1
I appreciate it. I have quite a large queue going, but when you tell me it is finished, I think this might move to my top 5 so I can read it sooner... looking forward to it :)
Author's Response:
Chapter 18will be posted sometime tomorrow. Then I finished
Date: Jun 29, 2016 4:38 am Title: Chapter 1
I havent read or even started this since I don't read WIP, but I read a couple of the reviews (I'm so bad lol)... how much longer will I need to wait til this is done and I can read it? It sounds fantastic and I can't wait lol
Author's Response:
I hope to have it finished before it becomes to long. I really haven't a clue how long this is going to take but I try to end each chapter so that you don't feel like you have to read more. I have never written anything and my English scores in school were average. If you do decide to start give me a couple days one of the other authors is helping me revamp some of the chapters so that their easier to read and you don't kill me for grammer and typos. When i get done I will let you know.
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2016 2:27 am Title: Chapter 5
WAY TO GO JENNIFER!!! I love that Woman lol Yeah I am not surprised Jen went for Deb because she totally deserved it the woman is just as delusional as her son, I wonder what Carl is going to do? I wouldn't have bailed her out either she needs to be restrained for a few hours. Now Michael is getting further from shore and someone is going to have to throw a net over him before he attacks someone who doesn't believe with his warped ideas. Not surprised we are getting an anti Lindsay chapter I guess it's her turn to go off the deep end, maybe she, Michael and Deb can get locked in a cage and just duke it out? lol I love that you post the chapters so fast this story has me on the edge of my seat to find out what happens next?? 😃
Author's Response:
I love that you guys are enjoying this and I will be working on the next chapter tomorrow but i have a beta Lorie and she help to edit chapter one and will be editing each chapter. I started the next chapter but I will try to have her work with me on it first so it might be a day or three for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2016 2:27 am Title: Chapter 5
YES!!! Go SHE-RA! I mean JEN! Deb needed her ass whipped and I'm so GLAD that the WASP stung Debbie's ass but good! As for Lindsay.... I have the feeling that she is going to need a padded cell next to Michael's crazy ass. Well at least Mel is seeing the insanity. I laughed hard when she got the full scoop from Brian. I don't think she'll be blaming Brian for any of this, including her own partner's slide into Bitchdom! How could she when the evidence of idiocy is clear?! SMH...Lawd Ham Turkey! Two nuts and a Jen that went Butchified Ghetto. This story right here is ADDICTIVE!! And I'm craving MORE!!! Get to work!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I am working don't worry.
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2016 12:33 am Title: Chapter 4
Run Deb, Runnnnnn!!!! There is going to be several murders before this story is over, I feel bad for Ted and Emmett but they should just stand back and have the bail money set, now we have Mel and Lindsay joining the party can't wait to hear their two cents, I think Carl is going to be shocked and Tucker should come join the party too, OMG Daphne!! This story is on its way to be a favorite lol
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2016 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMG!!!! GET THEM BRIAN and JEN!!! I SOOOOooooo LOVE Ted and Em! They are truly great friends to Justin but this is ONE time that both Brian and Jen need to go nuclear. Michael is out of control and Debbie is just as bad for believing Michael's half of what she's heard and none of what she has to see!! Michael is INSANE!! Something tells me that Mel and Lindz are only going to ADD to the confusion. With Michael on the loose and out of sight of someone who can correct his delusions, they are bound to be only too HAPPY with Michael's version of events and give their own opinions about Brian and Justin's relationship. WHOO-WEE I CAN'T WAIT for the next chapter! Hopefully the locksmith will get back to the loft before Michael's crazy ass even thinks about returning!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 28, 2016 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
Ok..this is great! I'm having such fun reading this! I've been checking for updates all afternoon. :)
Deb is so dead! big question though is will Brian and Jenn be able to get her to see Micheal for the freaking nutball he really is? Will she be able to see the truth, or will they all, as you say, be going to jail.
Huh...that's going to be expensive. OH!! Will Micheal be over and Debs when they get there?!
Oh damn. write FAST!!!!!!!!! lol.
Date: Jun 28, 2016 2:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
Woah........Mikey it a total nutbar! Seems like Deb's not too far behind him either.
The little teses with Ted are a riot and a good little stress reliever in moments of insanity.
Will Deb finally come out of her delusional world where Micheal can do no worng? Hmmmmm....inquiring minds wiant to know.
Thrilled that you are updating so much and so quickly! keep it up. I'm completely hooked.
Thanks you for posting!!
cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2016 5:03 am Title: Chapter 3
LOL! That little rat bastard needs to be LOCKED UP! And Debbie right along with him! What's funny is that if things really DID go down like this, her actions would be totally in character. The truth is usually relative but with the Novotnys it's apparently non-existent! And with Michael in the loft cooking, it doesn't look like Em is going to have time to keep the swelling from Justin's face...smh LOCKSMITH, Anyone?! SECURITY, Anyone? RESTRAINING ORDER, Anyone?? Well, it looks like we might get to see RAGE in his most basic form in a bit. LOL I CAN'T WAIT!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2016 4:19 am Title: Chapter 3
Okay I am making a list and Deb has just jumped to the number one spot, Michael is number two. They both are completely delusional and if Brian doesn't go off on both of them then I will think he has gone off the deep end, Deb knows better than to hit Justin in the head but because she doesn't like what Justin had to say that she would strike him leads me to believe that she has a serious death wish, Brian is going to be beyond pisses that no one will be able to stop him, Emmett is so going to enjoy this show, OMG Jennifer might just choke Deb!!! Oh Hell I am going to need some popcorn this story has me going and I know the next chapters are just going to get better. Ted is going to need a better mantra than dead puppies and kittens he is going to rub it raw before this story is over lol
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2016 2:07 am Title: Chapter 2
LOL!!!! This was Fantastic! I'm glad that you revealed what REALLY happened regarding both Ben and Brian. Michael needs a straight jacket ASAP. I swear I've always thought he suffered from Obsessive Friend Disorder. Hmmm...mayne I'll work that into a future plot, LOL But seriously, I laughed so hard during Brian's thoughts about Michael's 'skills' and Ted's 'Naked Justin' reaction. Ted's definitely got a spank bank full of imagination while he takes care of his monkey! LMAO! Great job, Star! Can't wait for MORE!!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S. Thank you so very much for reading my work and enjoying it! It means a great deal!! *HUGS*
Author's Response:
Well you inspired me to turn michael into a lunatic. Enjoy
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2016 1:45 am Title: Chapter 2
I Knew Ben Didn't Cheat! That lying little snake!! If I were Brian I would bring Michael's little neck that two faced weasel, he just jumped to conclusions about Ben and his old friend Nick just so he could make a move on Brian, talk about abusing a friendship and then to lie to Justin, Ted and Emmett about sleeping with Brian I wouldn't be surprised if Justin kicked his a$$!! I can't wait to read the next chapter you got me hooked now:)
Author's Response:
BBen is going to see the crazy that is michael instead of not. Thanks for the review.
Date: Jun 28, 2016 1:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Couldn't imagine why Brian would cheat. Should have known that Michael is nothing but a nasty lying weasel. Love Brian saying that I love you is not enough to describe how he feels about Justin. Ted's reaction to seeing Justin naked is fucking priceless. And Emmett getting hysterical is perfect.
Welcome to KD.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
If you saw my first draft he did but I killed me so I changed it cause I want Michael to read more into it. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2016 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love, love, love this. Mikey thinking he scored. Emmett and Ted coming to Justin's aid. Poor Brian, the victim of a lie. Mikey needs help.
Author's Response:
Thanks I was sitting at my computer thinking of what I wanted to read and this is where I went. So far everyone seems to enjoy it.
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2016 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
First, Congratulations on writing your first fic! We here at KD love to create an environment which inspires creativity. I sincerely hope we've done that for you.
Now on to the main event: I LOVED this!!! Definitely NEEDS a sequel. I'm looking forward to seeing this all play out! I especially want to know WHY Zen Ben cheated. So many scenarios come to mind but only you can point my over-active imagination in the right direction...And I'm NOT above a bit of shameless begging if it feeds my fic addiction, LOL
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Just so you know the author on this site are what caused this story. I think I have read your stories a few hundred time. Thanks for the review.
Date: Jun 27, 2016 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh I love pick-on-Michael fics!!!!!
I wanted to see Justin beating down Brian, but you saved the day towards the end.
Love Ted's reaction and Em's laughter.
My question is Why did Ben cheat?
Please continue this, PLEASE??
Sandy
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review you got me back on the computer to write again.
Date: Jun 27, 2016 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok...I was in the mood for something and this totally hit the spot. I mean right up my alley kind of fic.
That little scene with Justin dropping his towel in from of Ted..PRICELESS! I actually cracked up here in my office. (I'm on lunch)
You really need to continue with this!! Really want to see how you work through this minefield. Looks like it's going to be a fun read! I'm a bit of a hoe for Anti-micheal fics. He's fun to pick on. lol
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
What is funny is that I reach QAF trying to find sympathy for Michael and this is where I ended up. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2016 8:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa, you had me so angry at Brian that I wanted to kick his a$$ but eventually you saved it because I knew Michael was lying and Justin means more to Brian than any trick ever could, Justin flashing Ted was funny even while writing this review I am giggling about it, I know this is going to get worse because of course Deb has to throw her two cents in and we still have to hear from Ben but I do love Brian clearing up Michael's selective memory, can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
The first draft had Brian sleeping with Michael but I just couldn't do it. Deb will be there for chapter 3. Ted hopefully will be able to look at Justin again. Thanks for the review.