[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2016 3:01 am Title: Chapter 17
OMG!! That was Hilarious! I especially loved that Justin got Ben into the contest while Brian was worried that Justin would enter, that is one sneaky blonde lol Ben winning is just perfect and a nice little ego boost, Deb boxing Michael's ear and taking her whiny brat out was just as funny as Lo man-handling him, Brian and Justin are two very sneaky people and I love them for it!
Welcome Back Drew, Happy 21st Birthday! I hope Emmett enjoys blowing out his candles lmoa
Author's Response:
Justin entering Ben worked better for me. Justin got to have fun and Ben got to show off. I thought about not bringing in Deb but we know she would have to be there. I have to give Emmett a happy ending. Thank you for staying with me.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2016 2:28 am Title: Chapter 17
LMAO!!!!! I am laughing like a hyena in HEAT right now! First, orange hair! Then a messed up, totally stalker-ish outfit, then being manhandled by Lo and finally mother-handled by Deb!!! OMG, Michael got a reward alright and it wasn't the one he bargained for but DESERVED!!
I'm so happy that Justin arranged for Ben to enter the contest. What an amazing ego boost for a man who so richly deserved better than that nutcake Michael!
And Em!!!! YAY!!! I'm so happy that Drew finally reached '21!' Emmett is so deserving of his chance at happiness.
Brian and Justin... well what can I say other than I LOVE them in this story. Both are officially sure of their place in the other's life; it's a beautiful thing!
Great chapter! This story is definitely one that I will read over and over again!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I wanted Ben to shine. With this story Michael is to far gone to be redeemed. Emmett will always get a happy ending if I write a story.
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2016 12:26 am Title: Chapter 16
Ben is joining the King of Babylon Contest?!! This is going to be so good I wish the next chapter was up already this train wreck is going to be fun! 😄
Date: Jul 05, 2016 8:58 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ohhhhhh BEN can't wait for next chapter I know Michael going to be pissed
Author's Response:
I wrote it, hope you still like it.
Date: Jul 05, 2016 8:40 pm Title: Chapter 16
OMG...I just thought of it. Ben's the hottie isn't he???!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Actually no he isn't. But he will be involved.
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2016 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wonder who the hottie is? Can you imagine - hottie wins, Michael pouts. lol. Justin does have some appetite, must be nice. This is one story that you just want to hear whats happening next!
Author's Response:
I had to sit around for hours trying to find songs and watching videos to do the next chapter. Hope it everyone likes it.
Date: Jul 05, 2016 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh PLEASE write FAST!!!! LOL! Brian is as hysterical in jealous mode as Justin is in 'rambunctious teen' mode. I'll definitely have to watch the "HSC" dance when I get home from work!
How much do I want to bet that Michael will dye his hair blond? Blech!!!! Part of me wishes he would just give up NOW and save himself untold embarassment. But then again, the vindictive and vicious Bitch that I am is wanting him to finally slink away in darkness after he realizes that there is no way, he could EVER be Brian's anything! Between Michael and Justin, there is just NO comparison. I was also moved by Brian's thoughts on that scenario and his realizations of just 'who' Justin really is.
So glad Debbie is FINALLY heeding Carl's advice and now we can add Hunter's warning into the mix. She's learning that she doesn't have to live in eternal idiocy; that's Michael's 'job.' I can't help but wonder if after Michael's self-humiliation if he will also show up to family dinner or hide as he usually does after he does something wrong... Hmmm hope springs eternal that he will sit his ass down somewhere... but only AFTER the next chapter! LOL
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jul 05, 2016 4:22 pm Title: Chapter 16
Hey there:
finally able to give youo a proper review. I feel bad as I've been able to take breaks from unpacking to keep up with the sotry, but I just can't write on my phone. I'm a single digit texter adn it takes far too long. :)
Can I just say I freaking LOVE this! It's both disturbing and fucking hilarious all at once!! I can't wait to read about Micheal's adventures on stage.
wondering if Justin has a parasite or something...I mean...he's a bottomless pit! Nobody eats that much without having something....lol. He should be the size of a house! totally jealous of his metabolism. Not fair. ;)
Lindsey seems to be keeping it together. A few slips, but I get the impression that she really is trying and not just putting on a front. She sees what's happening to adn with Micheal, adn doesn't want that for herself. While she knows she wouldn't be completely cut off because of Gus, I think she understands that SHE hershelf would be. Mel seems to appreciate Lindsey's turn around as well. that in turn will help with Brian. As long as Lindsey keeps it up, it should be all good on that end. I'm sure there will be more sips, old habits die hard as they say.
Good that B&J are strong/secure enough that rumours and such, re: Nick etc won't effect them. Brian is aware of Justin's love and belief in him. Is secure in it. As is justin's in Brian. This makes Micheals' shenaigans slightly less effective. He can try, but won't succeed. He's just makingthings hard for himself, rather than B&J. I mean, he's a pain in the ass, but B&J can simply cut him off, as they seem to be doing.
Really glad that Ted adn Nick have connected. Ted deserves it and Nick seems like a good chap.
Wonder if Emmett and Ben eventually get together? I love reading fics where they are a couple. For some reason they seem well suited at times. I never really got Ben and Micheal....ah well.
Will Deb and everyone else ever get through to him? what will be the final nail in the coffin for him? Hmmmmmmmmmmmm. Can't wit to find out.
I have to say, I'm having such fun reading this. I look forward to new updates everyday if not twice and get such a happy feeling when I see a new one. great excfuse to stop unpacking or working or what have you adn take a much needed reading break.
thanks for this and like I said....I can't wait for teh contest!! LOL!!
Terrific job!!
cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jul 05, 2016 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 15
Omg....more please!
Author's Response:
At the beta already
Date: Jul 05, 2016 3:39 am Title: Chapter 15
Places everyone, PLACES!!!! Lindsay has surely, and FINALLY I might add, been put in hers! The nerve of her telling Justin what he needs to do for his career AND inviting herself to Paris. Mel had it RIGHT; Lindsay negated Justin's role to that of babysitter and fuck-buddy while she placed her delusional self in the role of wife. My respect for Mel went up with her acknowledgement of what Lindsay was doing, her admission that she takes it out on Brian and her vulnerabilty in seeking advice from Justin.
As for Michael.... Lawd, Ham TURKEY, he's off his rocker! As always- and unlike with Ethan- Michael went off half-cocked with the wrong info to 'tattle' on Justin. I say 'unlike with Ethan' because Michael actually had ALL the information to fix Brian and Justin's relationship before Justin left but only chose to tell Brian what he deemed important. Uh- some best friend!!! Anyway, I'm glad that Lindsay saw for herself 'what' she is becoming and that they threw the pestering prick OUT of the car. I would hope that him having to wait for the bus would do some good but unlike Michael, I choose not to live in delusions.
Looking forward to MORE! Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I wanted to give everyone something special for the contest. Enjoy the next chapter, first then help me laugh through the contest. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2016 2:48 am Title: Chapter 15
Happy 4th of July to You😃 Thanks for two very interesting chapters Michael is gone and I don't think he is coming back. It is funny because now he thinks Justin is cheating on Brian with Nick instead of Ben, I am happy that Ben has finally come to the realization that he needs to move on and put him and Hunter first.
Brian taking a step.back is a good thing because he really needs to not feed into Michael's delusions or give Deb more reason to hold him responsible for Michael's actions.
Lindsay using Gus to get a trip to Paris without even caring about Mel or Jenny Rebecca is beyond rude, good for Brian to put her in her place and make her realize that this trip is for him and Justin not for her to live out another fantasy.
I liked when they told Michael off and got him to get out of the car of course this doesn't stop the madness but it needed to be done.
Author's Response:
Michael wants his man and no one is going to stop him. Hope you guys like the next chapter it is the only one left before we see King of Babylon. I used some of the ideas you had and added a couple more.
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2016 2:35 am Title: Chapter 15
Well, at least Lindsay sees that she's turning into Michael and stops before it's too late. Mikey has a one track mind and the train's about to hit him head on.
Author's Response:
Yes it is. I was originally going to just let Michael embarrass himself but I decided some payback is in order.
Date: Jul 05, 2016 12:51 am Title: Chapter 14
Such a fun story- I love all the different points of view- great getting into everyone's head
Author's Response:
I hate wondering what people are thinking, so I have to have everyone tell. Thank you for reading.
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2016 8:15 pm Title: Chapter 14
It's about time someone told Deb how things are getting out of hand. Ben's better off without Mikey, even Hunter doesn't want to stay with Mikey.
Author's Response:
I let Ben live in hope too long. Unlike Michael he is going to have fun. I have a surprise with Ben involved.
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2016 7:50 pm Title: Chapter 14
Jumping Jehosophat!!!! Deb FINALLY has a clue!! I hope it lasts! I'm so damn happy that Daphne figured out what Michael was up to. Of course the idiot still insists upon getting up on stage probably looking like he's being electocuted BUT at least Daphne and Emmett did their civic duties in trying to warn him that he shouldn't. Also happy for the light bulb to have gone off in Ben's head! One cannot fix stupid or crazy if the idiot in question doesn't want help. And it's apparent that Michael is hellbent on living in his delusion. I think everyone understands that now...even Deb! Looking forward to more!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Michael is going to be sorry after the contest. I'll save it for a surprise.
Date: Jul 04, 2016 3:12 pm Title: Chapter 13
I'm enjoying this more and more with each chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you it's my first time writing anything.
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2016 5:21 am Title: Chapter 13
Just caught up. Already waiting for more. TAG
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. I am probably driving my beta to hard. I have been sending her two sometimes three chapters a day. But she gets them done.
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2016 2:41 am Title: Chapter 13
What is Michael up to? If Mel and Lindsay find out he skipped out on watching JR he's gonna be in trouble. Is he planning to tattle on Justin. It's not going to work because Brian knows all about Nick and Ted. Just how is Emmett going to talk with Michael and is he going to use Daphne. That would be fun!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the reviews. I love that all my favorite authors aren't being bored.
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2016 1:05 am Title: Chapter 6
Fave line - Ted: "I always thought I wanted excitement and thrills but now I just want my dull old life back. And I need Justin to stay clothed in my head . . ." Lol! TAG
Date: Jul 04, 2016 12:52 am Title: Chapter 13
Lindsay is soooo beyond nosy, it's a wonder she doesn't trip over it every time she walks! She really needs to stay out of the mix, sven in terms of information. Deb is STILL covering for Michael. It wouldn't be so bad if he didn't cause her so much chaos in the process. She really does need to let him grow up and fend for himself like Ben finally is and Carl is doing. Jeez! I can't wait for Em to get with his 'favorite' to deal with Michael. And hopefully she'll knock the devil out of him and back to good sense!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2016 12:48 am Title: Chapter 5
Hahaha! Deb & Jen in a all out cat fight? No idea where you came up with this but it was hilarious. TAG
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2016 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 4
So, I gotta ask - exactly what drugs is Michael on? Lol. TAG
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2016 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
Michael has fallen so far off the edge he's in freefall! And still, poor Ted - the dead kittens and puppies don't seem to be helping! TAG
Date: Jul 03, 2016 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
Omg! Literally Lolol in a coffee shop where I was sitting while I read this. Poor Ted. Or should we say, fortunate Ted, who now has plenty of material in his 'spank bank'! Lol. TAG
Date: Jul 03, 2016 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start. Love the Ted interaction. Although, him getting an eyeful of Justin was probably enough to cause him spontaneous orgasms. Lol. TAG