Date: Jul 01, 2016 1:43 am Title: Chapter 3 - Song of Sand.
Roflmao!!! I have to say that no, I have never read a humorous rimming scene quite like this one, and was marveling at all the inventive synonyms. Hmmm, ideas ideas... How about a scene tied up, either one or the other, fun with the bike somehow (handlebars anyone?), or hot tub adventures? I'll ponder this for my next review. Loving this hilarious story!!
Date: Jul 01, 2016 1:16 am Title: Chapter 2 - Talking Body.
OMG, I'm laughing out loud sort of in public again reading your stories... Luckily I'm in my car. When these two have a competition, it's anyone's guess who will win! Poor Brian, hopefully he got all the sand out! Lol
Author's Response:
We are told that laughter is contagious, so you SHOULD do it in public! So glad you are having fun.
T & S
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2016 5:30 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Control.
HOT! HOT! HOT! AND LOOKING FOR MORE!
Author's Response:
YES! YES! YES! VERY SOON DARLIN', VERY SOON!
T & S
Date: Jun 30, 2016 4:32 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Control.
Hot as hell!!! Funny as we like it!! I would have love to see that kind of karaoke!
Ethan is better with is violin if we like to listen to a tortured cat...
Very good choices for the music.
Moody Brian seems gone for now; let's enjoy the party!
Author's Response:
Yes, it is! We like the humor too! We had a lot of fun writing this chapter. The youtube music video links were flying fast and furious!
Ethan, yeah, exactly...
Thank you, we worked really hard coming up with those, but it was a fun hard, if you catch our drift. *wink wink*.
Moody Brian is banished, the party is a blast!
T & S
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2016 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Control.
LAWD HAM TURKEY!!! That was both FUN and HOT!! My sides hurt so freaking bad from reading this. And once was NOT enough. I got to work and just HAD to read it again! Although I hope- everybody HOPES- that Ethan will get a clue, I doubt he will. I think what worries me the most is that he has access to his father's money. With that in mind, the possibilities are endless and none of them good.
But HOT DAMN, Brian and Justin doing "Red Light Special" which was probably one of the most sexually forward songs of the 90s sung by women ( it was along the lines of the entire 12-Play Album by R. Kelly), was PRICELESS. That song was so freaking them! Justin doing you can't touch this had me HOLLERING! "Twinkie Time" just keeps getting better and BETTER!
Great Job Gals and Sooooooo looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Jun 30, 2016 6:13 am Title: Chapter 8 - Control.
Besides being all hot and bothered, I'm ROTFLMAO. Best chapter yet!
Brian doesn't have any issues....riiiight. Good thing Justin's already helping him loosen up and reliquish control. 😉 Mmm hmm, love that Justin dips Brian for a kiss.
Oh, no. Ian's voice is like his violin. The bar patrons must have felt like their eardrums were going to burst, lol.
Just love the sexy heat of Brian and Justin singing and dancing--and the slapstick comedy of Ian failing to get a clue and making a fool of himself.
Date: Jun 30, 2016 2:03 am Title: Chapter 1 - Summertime.
LOL!! Omg... And they're off!! 😀
Date: Jun 30, 2016 12:03 am Title: Chapter 8 - Control.
Okay let's try this again:
Holy shit I'm exhausted! Loved the battle of the singers! Karaoke dream come true! I kept looking up the song's I didn't know and boy do I have to learn some of those for the next time I'm singing...Goldfrapp's Ooh La La...oh my, wicked lyrics, so sexy! TLC's Red Light Special...beyond hot! It was sensationally sizzling all around!
Great reference to David Bowie, being one of Gale's favorite artists, well done.
Come on Ian...can you be any more annoying? Give it up!
Love love loved it!
Date: Jun 29, 2016 8:40 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Control.
Can't wait for the beach house fun!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Beach house fun was just posted minutes ago...go,don't walk, run, read, have fun! Then have a cold shower.
T & S
Date: Jun 29, 2016 2:33 am Title: Chapter 7 - Sunshine Superman.
Is Brian starting to realize he's not the one in charge? Lol.
I'm looking forward to Justin fulfilling Brian's fantasy of Justin painting him naked. And many, many visits to the Meat Rack. Yum!
Date: Jun 28, 2016 3:50 am Title: Chapter 6 - Lost in the Supermarket with Red, Red Wine.
Hot damn. I've never experienced a shopping trip like that before, lol. 😮
Love how the cop fist bumps Justin and then admiringly whistles "Justin's song"as he walks away!
Author's Response:
Just could not get this one out of my head until it was in the computer ready to go. i had so much fun writing it with Tag-
Saje
Date: Jun 28, 2016 3:13 am Title: Chapter 5 - Honey.
Yummy Hangman suggestion, Cookiebun! Definitely a win-win for both of our guys. 😋
Date: Jun 28, 2016 1:08 am Title: Chapter 4 - Island In The Sun.
Will Brian ever get those clams? LOL
LMAO at all the Brian torture. He's definitely not in control of his vacation; not quite the type of pampered hotel stay he's used to. 😂
Author's Response:
He probably won't get them any time soon...
We liked torturing him a little too. This will be like nothing he has ever experienced before..
T & S
Date: Jun 27, 2016 9:35 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Song of Sand.
You don't stand a chance, Stud! But, like you thought, there's no downside, lol.
Minimum wage flunky....sure. How long before Brian discovers Justin is artistic with more than clams and fucking?
Thanks for all the summer laughter!
Date: Jun 27, 2016 6:51 am Title: Chapter 2 - Talking Body.
ROTFLMAO! Brain's going to have fun this summer--even if it's against his will. Oh, yes, Justin: Keep fighting dirty! 😋
Author's Response:
The dirtier the better! If you catch our drift...
T & S
Date: Jun 27, 2016 5:46 am Title: Chapter 1 - Summertime.
Summertime with Justin & Brian: Yum! 😋
Oh, I like this feisty, confident Justin. I kept trying to guess the length of his break (15 minutes, I presume) of which, when he "met" Brian, he had eight minutes left--just enough time for a second orgasm. 😠Loved the countdown to the last second!
LMAO when Justin removed Brian's clams. Can't wait to see what happens next. Of course, I know Brian doesn't stand a chance against that smile, that ass, and that cock! 😆
Date: Jun 26, 2016 5:17 am Title: Chapter 7 - Sunshine Superman.
Hot!
I vote karaoke for now. Show later 😀
Author's Response:
Done and Done.
T & S
Date: Jun 26, 2016 3:10 am Title: Chapter 6 - Lost in the Supermarket with Red, Red Wine.
Way to go Saje... Love he hidden cubby BJ!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I used to work in a grocery store...believe me when I tell you, I have seen it all!
SAJE
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2016 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Sunshine Superman.
LOL! I enjoyed this chapter so much! Plus Justin has his own dreams, his own visions AND his very own stalker, LOL I couldn't help but giggle at Brian's thoughts about greaseball boy. And to top it all off, I will never bear, think or sing "The Love Boat" theme song again without thinking of this scene. "Nobody is THAT gay are they?" HAHAHAHA!! Yes Brian apparently Justin IS! As in HAPPY which I am with this chapter!! Great Job Ladies! Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Jun 22, 2016 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Sunshine Superman.
ROTFLMAO!!!! Omg this was a fun chapter. Personally I say let the exhibition begin! Nothing better than a hot show.
Date: Jun 22, 2016 5:44 am Title: Chapter 7 - Sunshine Superman.
Poor Brian, all tied up and unable to resist the stormy Sunshine...
I vote for option 2; karaoke would be pure torture for Brian but you can keep it for later.
Thank you for the update!
Date: Jun 17, 2016 5:34 am Title: Chapter 6 - Lost in the Supermarket with Red, Red Wine.
Welcome your filthy mind lol....I wish my shopping trips were that enjoyable.
Date: Jun 16, 2016 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Island In The Sun.
very sexy, very hunky and very noisy...or so it would seem...
But dahhh-lingg if you wanted muscles on muscles, you should have come to me...you had only but to ask....
Author's Response:
Wow - Now that's some muscles . . . LOL. I'll make sure to come to you next time for my pics! Thanks! TAG
Date: Jun 16, 2016 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Lost in the Supermarket with Red, Red Wine.
I love inappropriate grocery shopping! Yes let's hear it for the boy indeed! lol
That was super fun, as I'm sure it was for our boys.
Horny Hoover...good nickname! Will they ever call each other by their given names? lol
Date: Jun 16, 2016 5:55 am Title: Chapter 6 - Lost in the Supermarket with Red, Red Wine.
Naughty, naughty, just the way we like it!
I liked the "bed snake" and the rest of this shopping trip.