Date: Jul 12, 2016 4:27 am Title: Chapter 11 - Firework.
Very intense loving it
Author's Response:
YES! And we are too.
T & S
Date: Jul 12, 2016 12:19 am Title: Chapter 13 - Rope Burn.
Wow that was very hot and intense. Kudos to all who contributed. Great work!
Date: Jul 12, 2016 12:19 am Title: Chapter 13 - Rope Burn.
First, KUDOS for using one of my favorite songs as the title for this chapter! There is just something about THAT song! Secondly, I need a cold shower, a bucket of ice and some Beam... frick! Throw in a pack of cigarettes and my own Sub too! Damn y'all have me in a perfect place to continue writing my own BDSM scene. Keep them cumming....the chapters I mean ;-)
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Jul 11, 2016 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Rope Burn.
TAG + Saje + JP = cumbustion!
Date: Jul 11, 2016 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Rope Burn.
Sweet Jesus that was so hot! Oh my oh my!
So much trust and caring is building up pretty quickly between these two...nice!
I'm exhausted...
Date: Jul 11, 2016 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 12 - We Will Rock You.
This is starting to become one of my favorite fanfics. Like you said, 12 chapters in and Brian has only been on the Island for 4 days, wow!
Love that Brian cooked for Justin! And I didn't realize that Gus was going to visit, awesome! Lots to do with kids on the Island. Mel & Linds better freaking grow up and let Gus still come.
On to the next chapter!
Date: Jul 11, 2016 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Firework.
Love the growing romance between the boys. <3
*fanning myself* I overheat every time read this chapter, lol.
Date: Jul 11, 2016 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 12 - We Will Rock You.
You two come up with wonderful banter between our boys. Love the prhase about Justin looking "like he was going to invite them to a fucking tea party instead of an orgy."
More delicious smut too. Many thanks for fueling my dreams!
Brian was lucky to have a few days of vacation that were drama-free from the gang. Poor, beleagured guy. Definitely needs his Cookie stress-reliever.
Date: Jul 11, 2016 9:13 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Rope Burn.
The Key lime looked pretty good indeed but this scene looked incandescent; poor Cookie, unable to read he went too far in more ways than one.
I guess the morning after might be interesting.
Thank you all for your hard work!
Date: Jul 10, 2016 9:16 pm Title: Chapter 12 - We Will Rock You.
That was hot and fun: yeah, the twins are back for a little play.
As for "domestic" Brian, I'm all for it while he's on holiday; but the "food first, then fucking" might freak him next time he thinks this way.
Salmon + asparagus + potatoes + citrus dressing have me salivating...
The girls are bitching him: not new but they might actually use this video to try cutting the link between Brian and Gus.
Date: Jul 10, 2016 3:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Summertime.
This looks very good
Author's Response:
Welcome! It is good and a lot of fun too!
Saje
Date: Jul 08, 2016 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Firework.
OMG what can I say? That was hot...hot...hot! Anxiously awaiting the morning after chapter 😊
Date: Jul 08, 2016 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Firework.
How ridiculously hot and sweet....I wish I had those kind of fireworks on my holiday.
Date: Jul 08, 2016 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Firework.
Fireworks INDEED!!!! And the way that it ended...*insert deep sigh here* I loved the turn of events and phrase...definitely a much better use of the word COP (although I still get a kick out of that when I watch Season 3)! Keep the HOTNESS cumming...oops I mean coming ;-)
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Jul 08, 2016 7:59 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Firework.
I loved the «“Yeah, a COP - Clothing Optional Party - as in COP a feel, COP an ass or maybe even engage in a little COP-ulation”» and the end, as lesbianic as you think it is, is just «Whoa» (also in the beginning with «entwined digits»).
I listened to «Tchaikovsky's 1812 Overture» and discovered that some pieces of the French national anthem where included; so I googled it and learned why.
So, not only your story is hot but it's also educational.
Thank you for that and all the rest ;-))
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2016 7:18 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Summertime.
Just re-read the first chapter of this and cannot wait to get my teeth stuck in and be all caught up :D
Author's Response:
Make sure you have floss! LOL
T & S
Date: Jul 08, 2016 3:16 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Vacation.
Oh for heaven's sake just let the man have his clams already....sheesh. LOL after all he's gone through he could at least have that.
Author's Response:
Nope. No clams for Brian Kinney! Never! LOL. S&T
Date: Jul 08, 2016 5:16 am Title: Chapter 10 - Vacation.
The shower scene! what a delight!! More of these please...
Poor Brian, no more clams.
Author's Response:
But of course! Brian and Justin in a shower all soapy and wet . . . *drooling* . . . Let us get right on that for you! S&T
Date: Jul 07, 2016 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Feels So Good.
Damn, that was hot!! And so un-pc, just like what we need/want.
As for new ideas, I can't top (no pun intened) what you got us (especially after a 4th so well celebrated).
Date: Jul 07, 2016 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Vacation.
The beginning of the chapter was HOT!!! My, oh MY do I detect a little Toppy J action in the near future!! YAY!
I hope that Brian paid attention to Gabe's warning. For all his outrageous ways, I think that Justin is growing on Brian. And it definitely helps that certain members of the 'family' and their constant interference, are far away while it happens! Hopefully by the time Gus arrives, Brian will not care enough of what they all think to stop his growing fascination with Cookie.
Poor Brian!! Those damn clams are going to be the death of him! Hopefully Justin saved some from the last batch for him as a surprise...LOL
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Jul 01, 2016 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Feels So Good.
Sweet baby Jesus was that wicked hot!
I'll send some more ideas as soon as I calm down....well done!
Author's Response:
We will take those kinds of compliments all day long!
Thank you!
We will take all the ideas we can get!
T & S
Date: Jul 01, 2016 6:56 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Feels So Good.
ROTFLMAO over "Ok, Gentlemen, start your asses! Get ready. Get set. Get FUCKED!" and the Sudden Death Fuck Off.
Love having Justin and Brian be equal horn dogs, lol. Toppy Justin is getting closer--Hooray! Brian's going to start craving what he's been watching.
Brian's right. Anything but boring! *fanning myself*
Author's Response:
IKR? We laughed the whole time we were writing it.
we are so glad you are having a good time.
T & S
[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2016 5:16 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Feels So Good.
Lawd Ham Turkey! That was HOT!!!!!! To say that they played well with others would be the understatement of the summer! But more importantly, their connection was evident. It was the perfect follow-up to the great "Fuck-Off Karaoke style" of last chapter. Looking forward to another chapter VERY soon!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Author's Response:
We had to fan ourselves the whole time we were writing it! Your compliments are lovely and we can't wait to hear more of them.
The poll was ended in a tie, so we did the "Karaoke Battle" and the "Fuck-A-Thon". We were going to do them in the same chapter, but, well, things got Loooonnnnggg!
T & S
Date: Jul 01, 2016 7:40 am Title: Chapter 9 - Feels So Good.
Very hot ladies! I couldn’t imagine a better time. Little Cookie sure is keeping his end of the bargin.
Author's Response:
Thank You! Hopefully the good times will continue and Cookie will manage to be ever more creative.
T & S
Date: Jul 01, 2016 2:49 am Title: Chapter 4 - Island In The Sun.
Whew!! Very hot stuff. Brian's misadventures on the beach made me giggle, and the balcony show is something I'd love to be a spectator for! ;) I loved the crowd reactions, and the trick eating the clams was too funny. Food play sounds fun, although I have no doubt the threesomes would be hot, too! Other ideas... Brian surely brought along some toys, I'm sure (beads, dildos). 😀 Brian could host a party, which I'm sure Justin would also enjoy!
Author's Response:
You know what I take away from this review? Compliments, which I thank you for, and TOYS!
Toys are good and coming right up....
Saje