Date: Jul 19, 2016 4:11 pm Title: Chapter 17 - I Want You To Want Me.
Arg...they BOTH need a serious kick in the ass. Mind you, it wouldn't be B&J without the angst.
I can only assume the artist is Justin. HA! Wait till he finds out. Wait till Brian finds out.
Ethan's queen out was hilarious! I could picture it completely.
Great chapter!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jul 18, 2016 6:30 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Summertime.
This is a comment to the readers,
All of the authors write these stories for your entertainment. They also do this for free,
spending many hours imagining, writing and editing them. The stories also have tags
attached to them. One of those tags is NON-MONOGAMOUS PARINGS. If you do not
like stories where Brian and Justin or any other couple has sex with someone else
besides their partner, you DO NOT have to read the story. If you do read the story
please don't then tell the author to make them monogamous. If they wanted to do
that, they would. New authors are welcome, if you want to write monogamous stories,
write them and post them on Kinnetic Dreams. It is rude and insulting to an author to
tell them what they must do with their own story. Constructive comments are always
welcome, rudeness is not.
~Lorie
Date: Jul 18, 2016 10:54 am Title: Chapter 17 - I Want You To Want Me.
Poor Brian's heart. I hope Justin can read Brian and fix this quickly!
Date: Jul 18, 2016 4:34 am Title: Chapter 17 - I Want You To Want Me.
Hope that Justin will come around and admitt his feelings for Brian nd Brian stops sulking and gets with the program and admits his as well. It would be great if for once Brian tells Justin that he wants to have a grown up relationship and only wants him to be the one to entertain him for the rest of the summer because it's Justin who usually wants it to be exclusive not Brian. Maybe in the end they can be exclusive since Brian is realizing his feelings and is admitting them to at least himself. As long as he can stop feeling rejected and acting out, they could be happy. Sex is great but it's not all about sex a day exhibition. Lol I'm thinking Brian will even have a more impressive opinion of Justin for being the artist who painted the paintings.
Date: Jul 17, 2016 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 17 - I Want You To Want Me.
Brian's shopping is interesting as he lets himself be and doesn't care to buy a wagon and walk around the island with it. Great improvement, unfortunately, it will blow out later.
The paintings are really amazing.
The veggies market and Ian/Ethan was hilarious.
And Brian being Brian, total jerk when he really wants, prepares us for some back pedaling in the near future.
Date: Jul 17, 2016 7:23 pm Title: Chapter 17 - I Want You To Want Me.
I was singing your title in my head while reading this. Thanks for the earworm
I love looking at porny veggies. While growing up on a small farm, there were lots of times that i found veggies that would make my mother blush.(hehehe). Pictures at that time had to be developed and my mother wouldn't let me.
Sandy
Date: Jul 17, 2016 3:17 pm Title: Chapter 16 - True Colors.
Thanks
Date: Jul 17, 2016 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 17 - I Want You To Want Me.
Oh I forgot! Is the title I Want You To Want Me supposed to be the song by Cheap Trick?
Date: Jul 17, 2016 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 17 - I Want You To Want Me.
Of course Tag can write plot too and wasn't that fan-fucking-tastic writing at that!
Love that art work! Wicked cool colors, especially the four panel swirling colors one and what is obviously Justin depicted version of he & Brian...very sensual. Which kinda proves that Justin is 'feeling' the new trust & intimacy that Brian clearly is but maybe he choses to leave it on the canvas, as it were. Too bad because a hurt, angry, scorned Brian is never a good thing...I was wondering if they were going to talk about what happened. I still can't get Justin's inner voice out of my head...hysterical! "I'm gonna die"...his new nmantra lmao
I absolutely love popping in for a visit and throwing my two cents in, so much fun! Thank you!
Date: Jul 16, 2016 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 16 - True Colors.
WOW!!!! These last two chapters were definitely HOT! I think my favorite line has to be "You're gonna fuck the mad right out of me"....priceless
Date: Jul 16, 2016 12:31 am Title: Chapter 16 - True Colors.
I......I.........I......... DAAAAAMMMMMMMNNNN!!! Breathless, speechless...MORE!!!! That is ALL!
WORK Y'all!!
~Chelle
Date: Jul 15, 2016 7:20 pm Title: Chapter 16 - True Colors.
Amazing chapter: hot, burning hot, fun and animalistic. What imagination!!!
Cold shower needed indeed!
I don't know which part I prefer because the painting is so well written and means a lot as Brian anticipated it but didn't think he would get this result.
As for the first part, the mix of frenzied hysterical craziness and raunchy sex let me with steam coming out the ears, eyeballs, nose and mouth.
I particularly loved:
- Justin’s stomach sank to his feet, hit a trampoline, and came screaming back into his mouth.
- The man with the asshole guarded more securely than Fort Fucking Knox? The Top of Tops? The Legend? Brian Ain’t-Nobody-Going-There Kinney?
- humping the boy’s thigh like a rich bitch’s pampered Pomeranian
- “That’s . . . uh, the way . . . Big Bone . . . arrrhhgh . . . drill me . . . like you’re . . . lookin’ for oil . . .”
- Sure, his ass felt like every man on the USS ENTERPRISE had had a go at it, probably most of the women too
Author's Response:
Thank you. we had a really good time with this chapter.
I am glad we left you in such a state, it means we are doing our jobs well. LOL
We were pretty steamed up too. to say the least. I think we had to keep wiping the fog from the computer screens.
I love getting reviews. Who doesn't?
I particularly love when reviewers quote something I wrote and you nailed them!
Thank You for that! It made my day!
Saje
Date: Jul 15, 2016 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 16 - True Colors.
Well now, that was insanely hot! I probably shouldn't have read it while at work...its going to bake a long afternoon lol. Seriously, great work!
Author's Response:
Most of the body painting scene was done by Saje - it truly was amazing, wasn't it? So vividly descriptive. Sorry you're going to be stuck at work all day though. You can always re-read it when you get home! TAG
Date: Jul 15, 2016 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 16 - True Colors.
Thanks for putting that so g on I really like that one
Author's Response:
You're welcome. Great song and it went with our chapter sooooo well. S&T
Date: Jul 15, 2016 1:37 am Title: Chapter 15 - He's Gone.
“. . . really likin’ your fuck rod, Cookie. Better than a sperm whale any day . . .” LOLOLOLOLOL
Author's Response:
IKR! Still chuckling over this chapter! TAG
Date: Jul 14, 2016 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 15 - He's Gone.
Bahahahahaha "Fecal matter, dead things", "that's what makes the fucking ocean sooooooo salty", "really likin your fuck rod Cookie"
Oh yes Toppy Justin should be showing what he's got any time now! lol Did Brian really say "You are gonna fuck the mad right outta me"??
Brian couldn't get laid! Hahaha sneaky Cookie!
Love love loved it!!! Well done!
Date: Jul 14, 2016 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Skinny Dippin.
I turn into a puddle of goo every time I read about the Tower of Power. I'd 'settle' for a threesome with the boys. LOL.
Thanks for letting me play in your story, TAG & Saje! All credit goes to you for improving and expanding my scene. I couldn't ask for better porny minds to help me develop QaF-tastic writing skills. ;)
Thanks for the compliments, Chelle and SNO. I can take credit for "Ungh," was Brian's well-formulated response," and some of that scene, but TAG really fleshed it out and made it better.
Date: Jul 14, 2016 8:18 pm Title: Chapter 15 - He's Gone.
You have gone wild on this chapter.
Poor Cookie: the starters on the beach were more than nice but the main course in the house was more than bitter.
Hopefully, the dessert will be quite succulent and unexpected...
Date: Jul 14, 2016 7:45 pm Title: Chapter 15 - He's Gone.
LMAO!!!!! sperm whales?!?! Friggin hilarious!
I laughed adn laughed in this chapter. Poor poor fristrated Brian. Missing his cookie. I'm honestly surprised Justin lasted as long as he did adn put up with as much as he did. Must've known it was the booze, drugs and pain talking for teh most part.
I can see the next segment is going to be HOT! Brian so desparate for Justin to top him.
Laughed at Brian not being able to get any from nobody! "Not interested" HAHA! Loved it!
Well done!! Ladies!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jul 14, 2016 7:04 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Skinny Dippin.
Loving, what seems to be your annual summer fic. Oh the games...the sex...the HOTNESS. You're very..........imaginative I must say. Adn teh research you do. Incredible. :) I have to say, I wouldn't even be able to think of anything like these adventures, let alone have be able to research it.
Lindsey is a pretentious bitch. As a mom, I get the concern, however, Brian's been around long enough that she should know he'd never put Gus in a questionable situation.
Great update! finally caught up with it.
I'm actually looking forward to when they go back to the Pitts and have everyone react.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jul 14, 2016 5:13 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Honey.
Love the songs my song I like is true coloures
Author's Response:
Yay! The first reviewer to comment on the titles/songs. Glad you like our pics. We're going to put them together into a playlist at the end. Something to read the fic by! Maybe we'll even find a place for 'True Colors'! Thanks for the suggestion. S&T
Date: Jul 14, 2016 1:49 am Title: Chapter 14 - Skinny Dippin.
First, the morning scene was PERFECT in its HOTNESS!! WTG Karen! So proud of you for trying out your writing chops!
Secondly, so glad that Brian put Lindsay in her place about his extracurricular activities. For two bulls they sure are overly-concerned about cock...specifically Brian's. I wonder about the fall-out when Mel finds out that Lindsay backed down to Brian for a trip to Paris. I'll bet that "happy wife, happy life" will be a saying that Lindsay remembers well after hearing Melanie's tirade. Between she and Michael, they always reminded me of a pair of yapping chihuahuas (especially during the custody episodes).
Last but certainly NOT least, the beach scene was both funny and incendiary! The playful fish had me laughing like a loon and then the pyramid scene had me ready for an ice bath just reading it. I must say that watching porn is both entertaining and educational. Keep up the good work (if it can be called that), LOL!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Jul 13, 2016 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Skinny Dippin.
So glad you are that altruistic and that this story is 100% realistic.
After a very hot beginning (I loved the ““Ungh,” was Brian’s well-formulated response”) and a very painful skype session, Brian was ready to enjoy his day. Then, a nasty aquatic creature almost made him drowned and the ultimate Suck-o-Rama crumbled... and his ankle is out of order.
Well, I guess he will spend some more time in his bed, all grumpy and bored, unless Cookie finds something to distract him...
The porpoise moment was very funny and Brian being afraid of getting his hair wet was hilarious.
Date: Jul 12, 2016 6:44 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Song of Sand.
Cool
Author's Response:
NO...HOT! lol
T & S
Date: Jul 12, 2016 11:40 am Title: Chapter 13 - Rope Burn.
You ladies are doing a wonderful job of keeping our boys very busy and ratcheting up the need for cold showers lol. Brian does however need to have a serious talk with the girls....they need to come to an understanding.
Author's Response:
We're on it - don't worry, though, brians got Lindz figured out! S&T