Date: Aug 02, 2016 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Double Bogey Blues.
Wow.. I really need to play mini golf right now!!!!
Author's Response:
Sorry, but I don't think they have courses like THIS anywhere outside my imagination! Lol! TAG
Date: Aug 02, 2016 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 23 - The Man That Got Away!
Yep, definitely out of control but it's so fun that we are going to ask for more!!!!
Crazy night in so many ways. At least Brian was able to worn Justin out...
Well done!
Date: Aug 01, 2016 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Fever.
WHOO-WEE what a HOT tamale that Justin is! Brian sure has his hands (and other enticing body parts) full with Cookie and I LOVE it!! I was having a shoe-gasm my damn self looking at those high boots and stillettos. Definitely time to up my shoe game once again. Thanks for the inspiration!!
Now for the plot: Brian REALLY should call Ben and tell him to get his wayward and NNNNOOOOOSSSSYYYYYY whining chihuahua under control. I remain amazed at Michael's obsession with all things Brian! People like Michael are the reasons why stereotypes exists, even among gay men. Where is it written that because you are a notable- or in Brian's case notorious- Top that you can't enjoy having something up your butt? Really Michael? That boy really needs to get a clue and stop being so damn nosy! In fact, although I prefer to think of Michael (if at all) as an asexual creature, perhaps if Ben was doing his job and rocking Michael's world sexually, the whiny mutt would be too busy with his mouth too full of Ben to have it stuck up in Brian's butt and business. Just saying!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Aug 01, 2016 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Fever.
OMG!! I need a cold shower after the start of this chapter. {fans herself}
Love that Brian was getting turned on by Justin in the first pair of boots.
Poor wittle Mickey, his hero is jumping off the pedestal Mickey put him on.
Keep going!!!
Date: Aug 01, 2016 8:58 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Fever.
The first part was hot as Hell and the aftermath very funny. Poor Michael: his hero is going down in the Pitts and he can't do anything to stop it.
The painting was once again fabulous.
I loved Brian being incapable of waking up and standing up; and we all know why:
*Mmmmrrrwoooffffhhh* “Fucking morning . . . grrummmphhhh . . . damned early . . . ernnnnnermmmfff . . . fucking dawn . . . szzurrrefffhhppphhh . . .
[Report This]Date: Aug 01, 2016 5:34 am Title: Chapter 21 - Ace In The Hole.
So freak'n hot! Can't wait for what comes next!
Date: Jul 31, 2016 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Sunshine Superman.
I love how Justin is taking away so much of Brian's control, he needs that to relax and have a good time - plus it's bloody hot LOL. Justin tying him up on the boat? MEOW!
Date: Jul 31, 2016 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Lost in the Supermarket with Red, Red Wine.
Oh Justin, you naughty boy, blowing Brian in the middle of the store.... that was hot though. And I don't know why, but the idea of Brian with a cane is so yummy lol
Date: Jul 31, 2016 9:49 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Honey.
I loved Justin's version of hangman, that was HOT. And the honey...SIGH, Justin is so lucky.
Brian can't even go to sleep without snuggling his cookie, he's fallen already and he doesn't even know it LOL
Date: Jul 31, 2016 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Ace In The Hole.
Wow, Brian was ready to let Justin win; that's a huge step.
I loved the losers' T shirts.
You have done the second part also very hot and funny; the idea of the "lesbian" course is hilarious; and Brian forfeiting not only because he didn't want to "touch" any female part even a false one but also because he wanted Cookie to win.
Thank you to all of you for this summer delight!!
Date: Jul 31, 2016 10:38 am Title: Chapter 20 - Double Bogey Blues.
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
You have done an amazing job, as usual. And there will be a second chapter!
I loved the sign of the course: “Cum play at the ‘Hole in One’”.
As for the golf jokes, they are hilarious; I never heard such things.
I suspected Brian would have hated playing golf; not enough patient for that. He also hates when people are better that him at anything.
The rules and the designs are genius and the partners were well chosen.
Justin is a good loser (even if Brian cheated) and the punishment wasn't that bad in the end... Great finish of the 1st part.
So happy that Gus is coming very soon.
Date: Jul 31, 2016 1:32 am Title: Chapter 4 - Island In The Sun.
NO, Brian didn't get his clams, AGAIN? What sort of fucked up universe are you writing here? ;)
That was so bloody hot, Brian fucking Gary, while Justin watched and gave instructions, then helped him out at the end... meow. And the audience watching on. Why can't I find a beach like this?
Poor Brian, sunburnt and twisted ankle, clams would have made him feel better ;( LOL
Author's Response:
I love your reviews SS so HURRY and catch up!
The next chapter is halfway done!
Saje
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2016 1:08 am Title: Chapter 3 - Song of Sand.
I'm FINALLY getting caught up with this... well, not really, I am on chapter 3 while you just posted 20, but it's a start :D
Anyway, I don't know why I laughed so much at the image of Brian with all that sand up his ass, I could picture the scene with him squatting over Justin perfectly. And that shower scene was so yummy.
Brian, you won't regret accepting this bet - I KNOW YOU WON'T :D
Date: Jul 30, 2016 1:02 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Double Bogey Blues.
Love the photos of Arnold Palmer & Lashes! I love Justin Timberlake...but I don't want to fuck him lol Even though I'm a lesbian, I can still appreciate beautiful men, like Lashes over there. Who is that? Is he a model?
This whole concept was totally hysterical!
Date: Jul 30, 2016 6:18 am Title: Chapter 20 - Double Bogey Blues.
Brian and Justin's banter during the SKYPE call was hilarious!! Hell the thought of poon hairs even made me shiver right along with Brian, LOL I imagine that Lindsay will probably shit a ton of bricks if she arrives at the beach house (why she and Mel need to stay there, I don't know other than for nosiness, judgement and bullshit) and meets Justin- the blond who can do it ALL including fuck Brian Kinney. I think she'll end up regretting that much-valued trip to Paris a lot sooner than she thinks.
As for the golf game: Holy Holiday in the Himalayas! I would have wanted to be a spectator at that game. Loser my ass; nobody lost! That was a definite win-win for both B&J...and ME TOO!!
Looking forward to more!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Jul 28, 2016 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Fallin'
Can't wait for the next part
Date: Jul 25, 2016 9:06 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Fallin'
Perfect combo of fucking and feelings!!!
Date: Jul 25, 2016 8:46 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Let's Hear It For The Boy.
loved the reference to the show in this chapter. it worked so well here...
now time for our boys to get down and dirty... but shouldn't they "talk" about what's going on??? gus is coming soon, so they should be a united front by then... please lol
Date: Jul 25, 2016 8:24 pm Title: Chapter 17 - I Want You To Want Me.
LOVE the naughty produce.
My heart breaks for Brian (even though some would say he doesn't have one)...
Justin just hold his hand!!!!!!
Date: Jul 25, 2016 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Fallin'
That was burning hot!!! Both in the club and in the beach house.
I particularely loved:
- slumped forward like melting wax mannequins.
- A Kinney Rim Job was something nobody who’d ever experienced one would ever forget. And his Cookie was about to learn the benefits of positioning.
Date: Jul 24, 2016 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 15 - He's Gone.
I also like the song hoilday
Date: Jul 24, 2016 6:22 am Title: Chapter 18 - Let's Hear It For The Boy.
That scene!!!! Super hot to read and to watch. Justin made his point loud and clear.
Yeah, PWP is always welcome...
I agree, RL should be banned.
I loved:
- Pouting Princess
- Prince unCharming’s joystick
- unlike a certain rhythmically-challenged brunet stud
- that was entirely counterproductive to the point Brian had been making . . . or that he thought he’d been making . . . or attempting to make . . . only, he was less and less sure what that point was anymore.
Author's Response:
YAY! Happy 100th Review! You win the scene of your choice in the next chapter. Email or stop by the online doc and tell us what you want to see! And thank you so much for reviewing! S&T!
Date: Jul 23, 2016 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Let's Hear It For The Boy.
GREAT Job Gals!!!! This chapter was the perfect mix of plot and HOT! Finally their heads are back on their shoulders and out of their asses. I LOVED the possessive and jealous streaks they both displayed and the nod to epi 102 was brilliant! That is one of my favorite scenes in the entire series; the one where Brian understood that Justin was NOT a twink in any form but a captivating, ingenious young man who was worth a second look. The 'B' twins in place of Em and HWSNBN was perfect. I really like Brock and Braydon for some reason that I can't quite figure out and it has nothing to do with sex (even though they are hot when performing too).
Keep up the amazing work! Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Jul 23, 2016 9:49 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Let's Hear It For The Boy.
Finally they are both trying to get their heads out of their asses.
Date: Jul 20, 2016 6:29 pm Title: Chapter 17 - I Want You To Want Me.
Great chapter and I so enjoyed finding pics of the naughty produce.
This is a fun and sexy/porny summer story. It does have a plot and you certainly have other stories that are more plot than porn. So for those that say you only write PWP that's bs. "Phychosis" and our "Barefoot Blond" stories come to mind. Those are certainly not PWP. There is some sex but not much. Some folks just seem to have the need to put others down.
So, keep 'em cumming and ignore the negativity, TAG!