Date: Aug 03, 2016 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 23 - The Man That Got Away!
Mikey seriously needs to lighten up and shut up. It really irks me how Brian cannot be himself back home. I know it's partly his fault, but they just won't let him be himself, he feels he can't. And here, on vacation, he's showing his true colours. His funny side, his easy-going side, HIS GOOFY SIDE. I love it.
Justin's shot fetish made me LOL. And it's wrong how hot Brian would have probably looked in his outfit. Totally out of character for him, but perfect.
Date: Aug 03, 2016 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Fever.
I would LOVE to have seen Justin in drag, and I bet he looked flipping awesome in heels, that boy's ass would look even more delicious. I had so much fun reading this.
Date: Aug 03, 2016 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Ace In The Hole.
If you don't finish this by the end of summer, don't worry. We don't mind this going into autumn ;)
But maaaaan, I need a cold shower, Brian letting Justin put the butt plug in while everyone was watching, that was HOT. And how Justin was going to take care of his boy once they got home.... mmm. I did laugh at Brian's reasoning about buying everyone a beer, that was so him :)
I am starting to come up with some ideas or urm requests, but I will catch up completely before I start demanding ;)
Date: Aug 03, 2016 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Double Bogey Blues.
This makes me want to take up mini golf.... well not really, but damn, I'd have loved to have watched that game *sigh*
It's weird how perfect it is to have such smut and such cuteness all in the same chapter, but it works. I am so excited to have Gus visit. And urgh, Lindsey and Mel are going to really rile Justin up, I can feel it lol
Date: Aug 03, 2016 9:48 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Fallin'
Is it weird I am reading this while eating podded peas? They're clearly the perfect smutty snack LOL.
I'm glad they talked and made up and I totally get Justin's reasonings. I am just still sad for Brian. I don't like it when his heart/ego gets hurt LOL
Date: Aug 03, 2016 9:32 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Let's Hear It For The Boy.
Whether Justin is willing to admit it or not, he was hurt by what Brian had said and the cold shoulder that he was getting. They both deny to each other they want more, but their actions and emotions speak a completely different story. Oh, silly boys <3
Date: Aug 03, 2016 9:08 pm Title: Chapter 17 - I Want You To Want Me.
Oh, poor Brian. Justin's reaction made him think twice about everything he was doing and feeling. Brian NEVER does this sort of stuff, hell, he never bottoms either, and he;s trusted Justin with not only his heart (he doesn't know it yet) but his ass.
Date: Aug 03, 2016 8:44 pm Title: Chapter 16 - True Colors.
I bet Brian looked freaking hot as a dragon. And look at Brian, helping Justin release all that pent up Artistic tendencies :D
Date: Aug 03, 2016 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Pocketful of Sunshine.
I LOVED this chapter! First Brian and Gus, then Gus and 'Jus' interactions were priceless. But what I REALLY loved was Justin sticking it to Lindsay!! I adored him for leaving Mel and Lindsay's bags in the trailer and then the way he answered her condescension-laced questions while steathily insulting her at the same time. I have a feeling that the next two days will bring about a lot more conflict between the two blonds. Lindsay is NOT ready!! LOL I wonder if Mel will be an ally or foe to Justin in the clash of the WASP or if she will stay neutral while her wife gets metaphorically hurt. Perhaps Justin will be the one to open her eyes to Lindsay's manipulations. Either way, I am sooooooo looking forward to seeing what else you have in store for this arc.
I am still a bit curious about Justin's backstory and am really looking forward to Brian discovering just who his latest paintings are by.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
So basically, you're saying you want MORE plot? Sheesh! Give a girl a little backstory and she wants more, more, more. So much for the days when we could please our readers with just straight PWP! Oh well. If you insist! TAG
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2016 6:26 pm Title: Chapter 15 - He's Gone.
Okay, so I was going to start my review by mentioning how much I LOVE drunk and carefree Brian, but that can wait, okay? WHAT I REALLY WANT TO TALK ABOUT IT... "“You are gonna fuck the mad right outta me. That’s what we are gonna do. Now get in the fucking house, Cookie!”" < that was so fucking hot I cannot even... Justin must think he has died and gone to heaven.
Brian didn't realise just how much he was enjoying his cookie's company, did he? And the fact that he's been dreaming of being fucked by him surely says something - but of course, our Brian is in denial, isn't he?
love love love. You girls rock my world.
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2016 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Skinny Dippin.
Ahhh! I had so many emotions while reading this chapter. Firstly, the morning sexytimes scene was hot - and Brian is getting braver when it comes to Justin going near his ass. Will there be a side story as to why he doesn't like bottoming or is it just because he's a deliciously big, bad top?
The whole scene with Lindsey made me so mad, but then the moment Gus came on screen I was smiling so huge. He's fucking excited to pick seashells with his Daddy. Justin is going to MELT seeing Brian as a Daddy, I just know it!
That party was hot, and the skinny dipping was exactly how I pictured it. Poor Brian, though, that porpoise just wanted a friend ;) But seriously, throwing in about how the kids spent their summers learning to swim and Brian was at home hiding his bruises? EMOTIONS, MAN!
I am so in love with this story. And you ladies.
Date: Aug 03, 2016 4:29 pm Title: Chapter 23 - The Man That Got Away!
Oh yeah, Emmett would have definitely said something to Brian, especially about the shoes & eye liner! Cannot wait for he & Em to knock 'em dead on the island when the boys visit.
This was the best! LMAO I had to play The Man That Got Away while I was reading Brian's performance...amazing!!!
Date: Aug 03, 2016 1:10 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Fever.
Fabulous as always! You guys are such talented writers! I'm a little behind, catching up has never been so fun!
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2016 3:48 am Title: Chapter 23 - The Man That Got Away!
Outstanding chapters! This story keeps getting better and better! Keep up the great job but work fast on the next chapter!!!
Date: Aug 03, 2016 1:16 am Title: Chapter 13 - Rope Burn.
HOLY SHITBAGS, I wasn't expecting that. That was hotter than a summer's day in the middle of Arizona (I have been there, and that was hot as fuck.) Brian as a Dom is seriously so yummy, and i love how he took care of Justin afterwards.
And urgh, he was so worried about what Lindsey would do, fuck her.
Date: Aug 03, 2016 1:00 am Title: Chapter 12 - We Will Rock You.
It's fucking sexy as hell that Brian can cook, is that weird? Also, I now want to try making my asparagus like that #random.
Urgh, fucking Lindsay, and Melanie need to DO ONE. Brian is a fucking good dad, just because he fucks around, that means nothing when it comes to what sort of dad he is. And I love how Justin can already see this. I know this is meant to be a super hot smutty fic, but I do hope we get to see Gus with Brian on the island... :)
Date: Aug 03, 2016 12:45 am Title: Chapter 11 - Firework.
LOL Sally, I feel honoured... kind of ;)
It's funny how much them holding hands made me smile. It's like they're both craving this closeness, this need to be together, and they both don't really know it yet. It's like Brian went there for a reason, he needed some cookie (and lots of hot ass) in his life.
Date: Aug 03, 2016 12:24 am Title: Chapter 23 - The Man That Got Away!
Loved Brian's outfit! And Justin's shoe fetish is so cute. "shoes..." LOL
Author's Response:
*snore* . . . shoes . . . *snore* . . .
Date: Aug 03, 2016 12:17 am Title: Chapter 10 - Vacation.
THE BOY JUST WANTS HIS CLAMS, DAMNIT.... and to get fucked up the ass by Justin, he just doesn't know it yet LOL
Author's Response:
Sorry, no clams for poor Brian . . . the rest, well, keep reading! =)
Date: Aug 02, 2016 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 23 - The Man That Got Away!
I would have never expected Brian in drag, but I guess it wasn't REALLY drag since it wasn't a dress and overly done makeup, right??? lol I love how it gets both of them totally hot.
Damn Ethan needs to just crawl away... oh better yet, let him and Mikey hit it off... 2 weasels of a kind! lol
Date: Aug 02, 2016 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Fever.
sooo good... I so appreciate the pics to go along with the descriptions.
can't wait for Brian's surprise!
Date: Aug 02, 2016 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Feels So Good.
I had such a shitty day today, and this was just what I needed. That was so freaking hot. How can anyone not like this idea? Don't get me wrong, I love monogamous Brian and Justin, but there IS more to fanfic than that - AND THIS WAS IT. Hot diggity damn. I love them fucking all those guys while looking at each other, who doesn't love a bit of eye fucking? And doing it in front of all those hot horny men? Brian must think he has died and gone to heaven.
He really is falling for his cookie, isn't he?
Date: Aug 02, 2016 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Ace In The Hole.
Hot hot hot.... can't wait for Justin to get to Brian back at home!!!
Date: Aug 02, 2016 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 23 - The Man That Got Away!
LAWD HAM TURKEY!! The HOTNESS and HEELS!! This chapter was so much fun to read. Between Stella's wayward hands, Brian's sexilicious performance, Justin's reaction and then Ethan's utter assholery, I couldn't stop laughing and groaning by turns. I LOVED that Em called Brian the next day instead of Whineboy Wonder! I always loved that Em never tried to put Brian on a pedestal or in a box of what a 'Stud' should be. Hopefully Em and Ted will take a few days off to visit Fire Island and leave "Squawky Squeakers" at home. Looking forward to MORE!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2016 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Control.
Phew, it's getting hot in here *fans self*
That karaoke scene was sizzling. Firstly, I love picturing Justin up there, singing his ass off, shaking his bootie and getting the crowd going - and I seriously loved how both Brian and Justin put Ethan in his place. But that dumb fuck is clueless - and I kinda worry he may cause trouble along the way... Cant Brian just push him overboard and be done with it??????