Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2016 3:29 am Title: Chapter 4 - Island In The Sun.

Loved the breakfast scene. Brian really needs to get some fried clams for himself. Great story.

~Lorie

Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2016 2:12 am Title: Chapter 2 - Talking Body.

Brian has great staying power. Justin will fix that though.

~Lorie

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2016 1:21 am Title: Chapter 26 - When I Grow Up To Be A Man.

  This plot girl is PLENTY happy!! From beginning to end, I was completely enthalled! Lindsay deserves to be slapped with sh*t, rinsed off with piss and then shot for stinking! Her attitude just plain SUCKS! Her digs at Justin and ignorant reprimands of Brian was completely uncalled for and reaked of envy. I'm glad that little-by-little Brian is detaching himself from her supposed influence and that every time the opportunity is presenting itself, Justin is knocking her off of that 'Mother Earth' pedestal she's placed herself on.

As for Mel: Willfully Blind much, Mel?? I mean surely instead of being a sub to Lindsay's temper tantrum, she could have 'manned up' and stayed with Gus! Perhaps the reason Brian's dig about Lindsay finding a better 'husband,' had its merit because of Lindsay's tendency to run Mel. Part of showing that one has the bigger dick, is not letting someone get the best of you. Mel really needs to decide whether she wants to fuck or get fucked. JMO! If she's in need of lessons on how to do that, she should ask Justin since he specializes in how to cut the WASP right out of the bitch.

The entire interaction between Brian, Gus and Jus was incredibly endearing! I laughed and teared up right along with the characters! I really think that Brian is realizing that he struck gold when he found the blond. Not only is Brian having adult fun, he's learning what it really means to be a kid. And how darling is THAT!!

Write On Y'all!!

~Nichelle

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2016 8:58 pm Title: Chapter 26 - When I Grow Up To Be A Man.

There is so much I love about this chapter. Firstly, Brian is an amazing daddy, way better than he gives himself credit for. I think his fucked up childhood worked in his favour here. He wants to give Gus everything he didn't have - whether he knows it or not, you know?

Justin and Gus really are the sweetest boys. I did love how Justin said that putting him and Gus in the same category, it's really helped Gus warm to him.

My hate for Lindsey in this is intense. I could imagine her and Mel sending him inside after he tried to run and grab the water, but that isn't going to teach him anything. I love how Brian handled it - and I especially loved him saying he would be sad  he wouldn't be able to see him if the whale took him away to live on an island. That was so much better than freaking your kids out with horrifying drowning stories that put them off going into the water.

The sandcastle looks and sounds amazing. I really am enjoying all the visuals you ladies provide. It really helps me picture the scenes in my head.

Gus picking the shells for everyone was too freaking cute, especially when he told Brian he was his hero. That must have really affected the big guy :) 

Mmmm and what a way to end the chapter, Toppy!Justin. Brian won't be able to get enough of it soon ;)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2016 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Banana Pancakes.

Again, an amazing and fun chapter!

I loved how Justin once more clashed Lindsay and let her know (and Mel) that Brian actually is a fun, smart, devoted and generous man (and so much more...).

I also loved how he managed the aftermath of this bullying once alone with Brian.

Gus and Justin are meant to have fun together. Gus is so funny with his way to deal with his father and the way he talks. I'm sure he can't do so much in the kitchen with his mothers.

Great "family" breakfast with these 3. Glad that the Munchers didn't interrupt this fabulous event.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2016 1:21 am Title: Chapter 25 - Banana Pancakes.

Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for this!!! It was remarkably done from the HOT to the PLOT!! I freaking LOVEEEEEEEEEEE Justin in this story! Not only is he sexy but strong. The way he stood up for Brian was absolutely amazing! Would that Melanie would actually get a damn clue to do the same. In a sense, Justin even stood up for her and I really hope she heard that. Lindsay is out of control. Seriously! 

The connection between Brian and Justin after the confrontation spoke volumes without any words other than 'I need you now' spoken. In such a short time and not without a little turmoil between the two, Brian and Justin are coming into their own understandings of who the other man really is. It really is a joy to watch them develop this way. Sure sex introduced them to each other, a bet placed them in each others face and space but neither of those things will keep them coming back for more of the other. I think they are beginning to realize that more and more! Justin's post-sex care of Brian, was extremely moving.

Breakfast was the most addictive and adorable thing I have EVER read!! Jus and Gus- chefs extraordinares- have managed to make Brian feel like the amazing man he is. It was wonderful to see them building a friendship outside of Brian as well. And after the insults and insinuations constantly being launched at Brian, I think he needed to know that the two of them cared.

Well now, I asked for HOT and PLOT and you gals DELIVERED!!! Keep up the GREAT work, Babes!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Chelle

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2016 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Banana Pancakes.

Mmmmmmmm I love plot...and pancakes. This was SO freaking cute. Seriously, daddy Brian makes my ovaries explode. And how freaking cute were Justin and Gus in the kitchen? I could totally see that scene in my head. The way Gus was so adamant that Brian go back to bed so they could surprise him was just too cute. 

But my favourite part of this was seeing Justin defend Brian and stand up to Lindsay, something Brian, for some reason finds almost impossible to do. Justin knows the real Brian and the fact that Lindsay (who also knows the real Brian - maybe not as well as Justin though) questions him really bothers me. It's like, you have this amazing man that provides for his kid - and his mothers and it's like, could you be more of an ungrateful, patronising bitch? I'd love for her to see Brian and Justin (and Gus) interact over the next two days that she's there - let her AND Mel see the real Brian, the thoughtful, funny, Brian. The man that would do anything for his son. Then I want them to feel fucking awful for the way they treated him. His behavior on the island before they arrived has nothing to do with the way he raises his kid. Can you tell I'm mad? LOL

I can't wait to see what adventures the three boys get up to on the island. Daddy Brian is one of my all time favourites. You know he'd go into the whale sperm infected ocean if his son asked, and fish and do all sorts of things he'd never usually do, just to make his son happy.  I would love to see Linds and Mel see how much their son worships Brian, and it not because he provides for him or has money, but because he's an awesome daddy and actually does things with his kid. 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2016 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Banana Pancakes.

I love Justin even more for defending Brian as ardently as he did... I think Mel should see that Brian isnt the problem Lindsay is, but eh...

 

Love Justin and Gus together and Brian being so happy the three of them!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2016 6:30 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Pocketful of Sunshine.

I cannot stand Lindsay!!!  Mel was no different than usual, except she maybe seemed quieter lol... but Lindsay better get her due.... I know Brian and Cookie will only put up with so much, right?  lol

Reviewer: Cassie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2016 3:00 am Title: Chapter 24 - Pocketful of Sunshine.

I would seriously love to give Linds a good swift kick. I wonder if her jealousy will become more of an issue? Loved the interactions of Gus with the guys and wondering how they will be able to sneak in some alone time. Do they have boat races and bowling on the island? I agree with the other reviewer, more plot. I mean the sex is great but having more plot takes the story to another level, you said you wanted people's opinions so there's mine. Awaiting next chapter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2016 1:53 am Title: Chapter 3 - Song of Sand.

Now that was an interesting way to get rid of sand.

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2016 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Pocketful of Sunshine.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I am all caught up and I am at the part I was looking forward to most, Gus arriving. I cannot wait to see what they get up to. Urgh, how fucking rude is Lindsey, especially when telling Brian to keep an eye on his son. Like fuck off, he's an amazing dad - and Justin has only seen him with his kid for a couple of hours and knows that. I don't blame Justin one bit, seeing Daddy Brian is HOT lol