Date: Nov 05, 2016 5:20 pm Title: Chapter 39 - Crazy Bitch.
I love the way you handled Lindsay. She really is a bitch and you brought out her worst character traits in your story. Great work.
Date: Nov 05, 2016 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 37 - Little Dragon Sunshine.
Dragon porn? Well I learn something new every day.
Date: Nov 05, 2016 1:38 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Sometimes When We Touch.
I loved this chapter. It felt very relaxed.
Date: Nov 05, 2016 1:15 pm Title: Chapter 35 - I'm Going Fishin!
Eww, a fish fight. Sounds really stinky and disgusting. But I'm glad they had fun.
Date: Nov 05, 2016 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Beautiful Boy.
That was soooo beautiful.
Date: Nov 05, 2016 11:18 am Title: Chapter 31 - Turn Me On.
Things are getting serious. I love that Brian is slowly realizing what Justin means to him.
Date: Nov 05, 2016 10:51 am Title: Chapter 29 - Scratching Things Is Fun.
Do the girls really have to leave? It's so much fun with them. I hope you have something nice planned for Michael too.
Date: Nov 05, 2016 10:35 am Title: Chapter 28 - The Penis Song.
This was absolutely hilarious. Thank god you put a warning at the beginning.
Date: Nov 05, 2016 10:02 am Title: Chapter 27 - She Only Bitches When She Breathes
I love the painted toenails. Also I have to say for some reason this story keeps making me hungry. I swear when I have finished this I will have gained some weight.
Date: Nov 04, 2016 9:57 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Banana Pancakes.
Great, now I have a craving for pancakes. I just love the interaction between Gus and Justin.
Date: Nov 04, 2016 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Pocketful of Sunshine.
Lindsay is behaving like a bitch but I kind of expected that. I hope the girls leave the island soon so the boys can have some fun.
Date: Nov 04, 2016 7:15 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Fever.
What could Brian have planned now? I can't wait to find out.
Date: Nov 04, 2016 6:30 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Double Bogey Blues.
I want to go to that golf course. It sounds fun.
Date: Nov 04, 2016 3:57 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Fallin'
Yep, never a dull moment with these two. I'm glad they kind of made up but I'm pretty sure that won't last long.
Date: Nov 04, 2016 1:16 pm Title: Chapter 17 - I Want You To Want Me.
In some way I can understand Brian. Justin really hurt him even though he didn't want to.
Date: Nov 04, 2016 6:02 am Title: Chapter 16 - True Colors.
I can just imagine them together. You guys have a great way of writing.
Date: Nov 03, 2016 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 15 - He's Gone.
The whale cum did it. I almost fell of my couch. This is amazingly funny and hot at the same time.
Date: Nov 03, 2016 9:11 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Skinny Dippin.
Poor Brian. That could have been the pyramid of all pyramids if not for the unfortunate ending.
Date: Nov 03, 2016 7:06 pm Title: Chapter 12 - We Will Rock You.
Oh no, I hope the girls will let Gus come to the island. It will probably get dirty and not in a good way.
Date: Nov 03, 2016 6:07 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Firework.
Ahhhhhh. That's what you wanted? Great chapter. That's what I call a firework.
Date: Nov 03, 2016 5:59 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Vacation.
I'm laughing my ass off here. I wonder if Brian will ever get to taste those fried clams.
Date: Nov 02, 2016 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Control.
I love the songs you chose. Very fitting.
Author's Response:
We had a LOT of fun picking the songs for every chapter. Glad you like it. The last chapter is a complete song list if you need it. TAG
Date: Nov 02, 2016 7:15 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Lost in the Supermarket with Red, Red Wine.
OMG I will never walk through the wine section again without thinking about this.
Author's Response:
IKR! LOL TAG
Date: Nov 02, 2016 6:45 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Honey.
So Kathy is responsible for the hangman game? I loved it.
Date: Nov 02, 2016 6:15 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Island In The Sun.
I love all the names for Brian's cock you came up with. Can't wait for more.