[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2016 1:41 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Banana Pancakes.
Breakfast in bed. Sounds yummy. Shame the girls are left out. LOL.
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2016 1:26 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Pocketful of Sunshine.
Good to see Gus and fun to see Justin put his mothers in their places.
Date: Aug 07, 2016 1:09 pm Title: Chapter 27 - She Only Bitches When She Breathes
It gets better and better... I like that Mel seems to be acknowledging Linds "meeting her match"... but why does she seem to cower to Lindsay? Can't wait for her to get her due... and to just leave... one more day, right? lol
Can't get enough of how much and quickly Justin and Gus have bonded and it only brings Brian closer to Gus as well.
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2016 1:01 pm Title: Chapter 23 - The Man That Got Away!
A fantastically descriptive chapter. The pics are fabulous and hearing from Emmett was delicious.
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2016 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Fever.
Mikey and his text messages. Is he in for a surprise when Brian finally returns home. Glad to see that Brian finally got to video Justin in action with the painting. Can't help but be curious about what Gabe is going to do to earn that 100 bucks.
Date: Aug 07, 2016 5:34 am Title: Chapter 27 - She Only Bitches When She Breathes
Lover this chapter, keep the plot coming please. I loved that line about the Tupperware seal, used to sell it lol. Linds is pissing me off. She needs to be really lay off Justin and Brian and get her jealousy in check. I can't wait to see her get what she deserves. The way Brian and especially Justin interacts with Gus is so great. More please!
Date: Aug 07, 2016 4:56 am Title: Chapter 27 - She Only Bitches When She Breathes
Looks like Lindsay needs a MUZZLE!!! LMAO! How many times did she put her BIG Incredible Hulk-toenailed foot in her mouth this go round?! She can't wait to get the 'pwetty wittle blond alone and let him know the score' huh? I think Mel's thought is RIGHT when she said that the bitch has finally met her match! I can't wait for that confrontation!
The silent f*cking was sooooooo GOOD! Damn I needed a drink and a cigarette after that!
The scenes with Brian, Justin and Gus are so freaking touching! I'm glad to see that Brian is taking away all of Lindsay's powers of persuasion. No matter what she is trying to do to 'put him in his place.' he is turning the tables and stomping some verbal mudholes in her. She's a shrew...and unlike the tree variation of the word, Lindsay is a rodent. Since rodents are often considered pest to be exterminated, it's time to cut her unwanted opinions out of his psyche for realz! I think I can safely say that Justin is becoming Brian's mental variant of the Orkin man.
WRITE On, Gals!!!
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2016 3:24 am Title: Chapter 21 - Ace In The Hole.
Amazing pics that round out an interesting chapter.
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2016 2:58 am Title: Chapter 20 - Double Bogey Blues.
Now that was some putt-putt course. Definately not one to take Gus to.
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2016 1:56 am Title: Chapter 19 - Fallin'
I'm so glad they're going back to the status quo.
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2016 1:43 am Title: Chapter 18 - Let's Hear It For The Boy.
This is such a good remake of the first couple of episodes. Love what you did with it.
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2016 12:51 am Title: Chapter 17 - I Want You To Want Me.
Love how Brian ended up buying all of Justin's paintings not knowing who painted them. Things were going well until Justin pulled a Brian. Sigh.
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2016 12:17 am Title: Chapter 16 - True Colors.
What a shame they didn't video this. That would have been wild.
[Report This]Date: Aug 06, 2016 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 15 - He's Gone.
Never, never, never send Cookie packing. Now Brian had to search high and low for his (his words not mine) Cookie.
Date: Aug 06, 2016 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 26 - When I Grow Up To Be A Man.
So So love Brian, Justin and Gus bonding together... Brian and Gus are bonding on their own and Brian's heart seems to be growing and I just adore that Justin is automatically included in it all...
I refuse to address the lesbians... both are just annoying me right now (Mission accomplished lol)
[Report This]Date: Aug 06, 2016 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Skinny Dippin.
Love Brian's little chat with Lindsay. The pyramid idea was great!
[Report This]Date: Aug 06, 2016 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Rope Burn.
Bondage never went so well. And Key Lime Pie to top it off.
Date: Aug 06, 2016 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Control.
Love how they dissed the fucking chin rat. Great chapter
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Aug 06, 2016 4:45 pm Title: Chapter 12 - We Will Rock You.
Now we know that Brian isn't about to fire Justin. He just cooked him a meal. Something I'm sure he'd not done for anyone else.
[Report This]Date: Aug 06, 2016 4:31 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Firework.
Brian's got it bad. Do you look for pics to go with your story or write around the pics?
[Report This]Date: Aug 06, 2016 3:23 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Vacation.
Looks like Gabe is this stories Daphne. What? No clams for Brian? So not fair.
Date: Aug 06, 2016 11:25 am Title: Chapter 26 - When I Grow Up To Be A Man.
Once again, fabulous chapter!!! Thank you for all the funny and hot plots.
Lindsey and her WASPy ways to educate her child; Gus wanting to stay with his dad forever because it's soooooo much fun.
All the painting toenails jokes and sand extraction innuendoes.Lindsey and her memory of beach fun with Brian and some more bashing of the WASPy bitch.
Gus and his seashell picking so accurate and so cute (Daddy is my hero and Justin is not that far away).
Justin teasing Brian with his soda.
Gus afraid his dad will punish him for going towards the water alone.
The Taylor Stomp.
Justin preparing a revenge with his cooking lessons for Gus.
Some other sand extraction innuendoes: Mr. Sandman, I’m all sandy...
And then “I think I got all the sand, Boss,” Justin assured as he pulled out and tied off the full condom. “You’re good to go until after tomorrow’s sand castle building session.”
Date: Aug 06, 2016 6:18 am Title: Chapter 7 - Sunshine Superman.
Learning to pilot a boat sounds like a great idea.
~Lorie
Date: Aug 06, 2016 5:49 am Title: Chapter 6 - Lost in the Supermarket with Red, Red Wine.
Great way to shop.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Aug 06, 2016 3:50 am Title: Chapter 9 - Feels So Good.
I didn't think this could get any HOTTER. Gues I was wrong. And the winner is?